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From: Susan Wenger
Subject: GroupRead:PC:Three points
Date: Fri, 19 Oct 2001 15:13:39 -0700

There are three points I'd like to discuss concerning "Post Captain, in no order:"

1. Music as color. We've discussed this before, but perhaps only the part of it. On page 396 (Norton paperback), Jack dreams of the Magdalene in Queenie's picture saying, "why do not you tune your fiddle to orange-tawny, yellow, green and this blue, instead of those old common notes?" What strikes me this time around is not the concept of music as color, but the fact that it comes up again in the book, this time with Stephen Maturin, on page 448: "The music, I believe, had nothing to say, but it provided a pleasant background of 'cellos and woodwinds and allowed the trumpet to make exquisite sounds - pure colour tearing through this formal elegance." O'Brian was trying to make a point here, putting similar thoughts in the mouths of his two characters, but I'm not sure what that point is. : }

2. Another episode of two takes on the same theme: on page 400, Jack is under doctor's orders concerning his diet, and he's thinking achingly about Sophie, having just come from the wedding of the pink bride.
"Mrs Broad, what have you for dinner? . . .
"No beef or mutton . . . but I have a nice loin of weal, and a nice piece of wenison, as plump as you could wish; a tender young doe, sir." . . .
"Ah dear God," he said to the empty room, "a tender young doe."
and on page 472, Stephen is watching Diana at the opera: "she felt the intensity of his gaze and from time to time she looked round the house; and each time she did so he dropped his eyes, as he would have done, stalking a doe."
Two "doe" episodes, different from each other, but remarkably similar.

3. And a final observation for tonight: on page 462, Stephen is getting over Diana, not having seen her for a while, and marvels to himself "NB I slept upwards of nine hours this night,without a single drop. This morning I saw my bottle on the chimneypiece, untouched: this is unparalleled." Then he sees Diana at the opera, dispairs of what she has become, is numb with pain, and the houseman raps on the door, saying "it's all over now. This is the end of the piece." SAYING that. (Aloud, it sounds like "this is the end of the peace."

Thoughts on any of these three episodes?

- Susan


From: Bambi Dextrous
Date: Wed, 24 Oct 2001 03:34:08 +0800
Subject: GroupRead:PC:Three points

Fame at last. Surely he had me in mind. Bambi, the tender young doe


From: Susan Wenger
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 14:29:35 -0700
Subject: GroupRead:PC:Three points

Ummm, I think Felix Salten's Bambi was not a tender young doe, but a buck. Fame is fleeting.


From: Stephen Chambers
Date: Sat, 20 Oct 2001 03:09:31 +0100
Subject: Re: GroupRead:PC:Three points

Regarding point 1:
The music as colour incidents, remind my of the starting sequence of Fantasia, and in a certain mood most of us can abstract the music we listen too into some sort of picture.

Stephen Chambers
50° 48' 38" N
01° 09' 15" W


From: Jerry Shurman
Subject: Re: GroupRead:PC:Three points
Date: Sat, 20 Oct 2001 09:09:18 -0700

Susan Wenger wrote:

Music as color... ...with Stephen Maturin, on page 448: "The music, I believe, had nothing to say, but it provided a pleasant background of 'cellos and woodwinds and allowed the trumpet to make exquisite sounds - pure colour tearing through this formal elegance." O'Brian was trying to make a point here, putting similar thoughts in the mouths of his two characters, but I'm not sure what that point is.

I read O'Brian using music as color twice as natural in light of how the book is structured with two main male characters, two main female characters, and the shifting relationships (including conflict) between them. Having common ideas go through Jack's and Stephen's minds in different forms is a nice "show, don't tell" way of illustrating how the two men are similar or different. E.g., in this case, Jack is only capable of such an abstract idea in a confused-sounding dream, while Stephen has the idea clear -- and its relation to other structural descriptions -- in his conscious, rational mind.

In the second incident, music as color also works for me as a part of O'Brians's conveying how human experience at its deepest and most visceral requires but still overwhelms all attempts at description. No conflation of language, scent, music, and color, and (for us, though not for Stephen) text is adequate for the sensations of Stephen's response to Diana. Having this all come off the page filtered through the mind of a highly analytical man recognizing that his analytical outlook isn't remotedly adequate for the situation makes it very effective for me.

And on page 472, Stephen is watching Diana at the opera: "she felt the intensity of his gaze and from time to time she looked round the house; and each time she did so he dropped his eyes, as he would have done, stalking a doe."

This says a lot about the complicated distribution of power between Stephen and Diana.

And a final observation for tonight: on page 462, Stephen is getting over Diana, not having seen her for a while, and marvels to himself "NB I slept upwards of nine hours this night,without a single drop. This morning I saw my bottle on the chimneypiece, untouched: this is unparalleled." Then he sees Diana at the opera, dispairs of what she has become, is numb with pain, and the houseman raps on the door, saying "it's all over now. This is the end of the piece." SAYING that. (Aloud, it sounds like "this is the end of the peace.")

Understated though O'Brian usually is, he also can close his dramatic scenes with a phrase the resonates in more than one way. This reminds me of M&C, at the end of the Cacafuego action, where the last sentence is that Jack "saw the great wound to [Dillon's] heart."

Jerry


From: Gerry Strey
Date: Sat, 20 Oct 2001 09:19:21 -0500
Subject: Re: GroupRead:PC:Three points

Thoughts? Only to say that there can be no end to reading and rereading POB--always something new to discover and speculate upon.

Gerry Strey
Madison, Wisconsin


From: Greg White
Date: Sat, 20 Oct 2001 12:14:55 -0400
Subject: GroupRead:PC: The Bear Suit

I'm a little behind - just started PC. I actually started it at the beginning of the month, but I'd also started reading Dana Stabenow and couldn't pull myself away. Imagine that.

I'm pondering the bear suit. It seems strange to me that this incident wasn't mentioned often in the canon. The cur-tailed joke appears in nearly every book, but not the bear suit trek. This seems strange to me - if *I* had walked 350 miles in a bear suit, thus managing to cleverly avoid being captured, you can bet I'd tell people about it. Not Jack, though. Odd.

BTW, reading Post Captain at this time of the year works particularly well for me. I can vivdly remember driving to the library to pick it up one cold October night two years ago. PC will always remind me of fall.

Greg (Which we are at peak foliage now. Time to spend a day walking the trails at Walden Pond.)

42º32'34.5" N
71º20'13.2" W


From: Samuel Bostock
Date: Sat, 20 Oct 2001 17:13:55 +0100
Subject: Re: GroupRead:PC: The Bear Suit

It's a long time since I last read PC, but I have a sneaking suspicion Jack was embarassed about it and realised what Stephen was up to.

Am I right?

Sam


From: Marshall Rafferty
Date: Sat, 20 Oct 2001 09:25:47 -0700
Subject: Re: GroupRead:PC: The Bear Suit

I have a sneaking suspicion that POB was embarrassed about it.

Marshall, trying to avoid puns on "embarrassed."


From: Greg White
Date: Sat, 20 Oct 2001 12:22:23 -0400
Subject: Re: GroupRead:PC: The Bear Suit

What was Stephen up to?

Greg

42º32'34.5" N
71º20'13.2"


From: Samuel Bostock
Date: Sat, 20 Oct 2001 17:25:43 +0100
Subject: Re: GroupRead:PC: The Bear Suit

I was hoping you wouldn't ask..

Off I go to ferret out my copy of PC...

..back! I'm sure I heard someone mention on this very list that there was a shorter way Stephen could have gone but he just wanted Jack to loose weight.

I'm sure at the end of the episode where they come to Stephen's place, Jack gives Stephen one of his penetrating looks that POB does not explain.

Then again, Marshall could be right: POB could be embarrased - although I thought the episode worked quite well

Sam


From: Don Seltzer
Date: Sat, 20 Oct 2001 22:25:49 EDT
Subject: Re: Stephen's pulse

Rosemary Davis writes:

Re: the citation where Stephen checks his pulse: You were right, Gerry, it is very near the end of TC, thanks! "He took out his elegant watch and laid it in the light, watching the centre second-hand make its full revolution. His friend too watched it with close attention. 'You are taking your pulse, I make no doubt?' he said. 'So I am, too,' said Stephen. 'I have had a variety of emotions recently and I wished to assign a number at least to the general effect, to the physical effect, since quality is not subject to measure. My number is one hundred and seventeen to the minute.'" -p. 280, Norton cloth edition. My inability to locate the citation was annoying me greatly.

Also Stephen's reaction to seeing Diana in the famous opera scene, at the end of PC:

"Stephen watched with no particular emotion but with extreme accuracy. He had noted the great leap of his heart at the first moment and the disorder in his breathing, and he noted too that this had no effect upon his powers of observation. He must in fact have been aware of her presence from the first..."

Don Seltzer


From: Ray McPherson
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 11:24:28 -0700
Subject: POB: Post Captain

Dear Lissuns,

On a trip to SF this past weekend Jim and I listened to Post Captain again. I was struck by Jack's feelings about the Polycrest on pages 231-2 of the hardbound edition: ". . .but he could not love her. She was a mean-spirited vessel, radically vicious, cross-grained, laboursome, cruel in her unreliability; and he could not love her." I think this is a reflection of his relationship with Diana.

Earlier in PC he tells Christie-Palliere (page 97-8): "But, however, as soon as I thought things were going along capitally with her, and that we were very close friends, she pulled me up as though I had run into a boom, and asked me who the devil I thought I was? . . . So I committed myself pretty far, partly out of pique, do you see?"

He has an unwanted commitment to both and loves neither.


From: Gregg Germain
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 11:56:52 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

I fully recognize that when it comes to Things Literary, I'm an uneducated oaf. Perhaps even lout. But I've seen lots of cross-connections written here on the board in the last few weeks, so I need to ask:

Do you all really think POB (or any author) sits there and plans these metaphores, allusions, etc.? I tend to think they are accidents or even non-existent in the mind of the author.

But as I say, I know nothing about lit, so I'd accept education about this.

Gregg
Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)


From: David Phillips
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 15:03:59 -0400
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

I'd be perfectly happy to bet a dollar that I can out-oaf Gregg in the Things Literary category; I can't tell an allegory from a crocodile.

But I'd also bet that planning out things like this are the difference between Himself, and, say, Tom Clancy.

I really enjoy reading Clancy, and even read his stuff a second time.

But it's POB who's series is on my bookshelf at home.

David V. Phillips sasdvp@unx.sas.com SAS Institute Inc., Cary, NC
If you're not living on the edge, you're taking up too much room.


From: Greg White
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 15:04:49 -0400
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

Gregg Germain wrote:

Do you all really think POB (or any author) sits there and plans these metaphores, allusions, etc.?

I think John Meyers Meyers did, but that was his goal in Silverlock.

I tend to think they are accidents or even non-existent in the mind of the author.

I think they're largely accidental, but that they occurred in the author's subconcious mind.

I'd be interested to hear what any authors on the list have to say. What does Greg think, Astrid?

Greg

42º32'34.5" N
71º20'13.2" W


From: Ray McPherson
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 12:12:35 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

Gregg Germain wrote:

Do you all really think POB (or any author) sits there and plans these metaphores, allusions, etc.?

Dear Gregg,

I think the good ones do.

Ray McP


From: Karen von Bargen
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 19:23:44 -0000

Yes.

Karen von Bargen


From: Susan Wenger
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 12:26:53 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

If it was a once-in-a-while occurrence, I'd think accident. This happens quite often in POB, much more often than in, say, Clancy. I don't think it's an accident. I doubt that he worked very long to get these connections in, but I think they occurred to him and he had a chuckle as he inserted them.

When one of O'Brian's characters has a dream, it's not there just to fill a page - his books are too tightly drawn for that. The dream relates to an event in the book - either as foreshadowing or as the character's subconscious processing of the event. When an animal event mimics a human event, it's there as deliberate humor. He knew what he was doing, a deep old file. He didn't draw arrows, he was satisfied that some readers would get the connections, others wouldn't mind the brief digression, since the parallel only takes up a sentence or two.

My vote: deliberate, but not over-worked.


From: Gregg Germain
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 13:54:26 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

I think it's possible to find all sorts of meanings that seem to have a connection but that the author never ever heard of.

Gregg Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)


From: Thistle Farm
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 16:58:05 EDT
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

Never heard of? Are you implying that POB was even less well read than me, when surely I am familiar with most of them, although Diana was a Huntress, wasn't she?

Sarah


From: Gregg Germain
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 05:56:25 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

I was not specific - I wasn't speaking SPECIFICALLY to Diana/huntress thought.

And yes, I do think it's possible for you to know something that POB didn't ;^)

Gregg
Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)


From: Ray McPherson
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 13:08:22 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

There is something else about the canon that I'm convinced is true, but have not done enough research to prove. It has been over 40 years since I studied (or read) Elizabethan drama, but I remember that the authors often used the names to describe the predominant characteristic of the dramatis personnae: for example, "Truewit" and "Truelove." POB does this very subtly. Consider the following:

Sophia--means wisdom and is the name of one of his his first ships which he loves and loses. (Don't think beyond the first 2 books.)
Aubrey--the name of an elf king in German mythology implying eternal youth and superior powers. Jack's nautical abilities are almost magical.
Maturin--haven't found anything definitive; how- ever, I think this means mature. Stephen often cares for Jack as a parent would a child.
Diana---Divine--also goddess of nature and fertility, but I don't think that necessarily fits.
Preserved--Killick performs a preserving function for both Jack and Stephen in providing human comforts, preparing food, clothes, etc.
Bonden--he is bound to Jack throughout the canon.
Scriven--that's easy and not very subtle.

Vat denk je?

Ray McP


From: Susan Wenger
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 13:14:18 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

Yessss. And many others - the one who comes to mind is Timely, the bosun who interrupts Jack and Mercedes when they do not wish to be disturbed.


From: Peter Mackay
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 06:17:13 +1000

Wallis?

He only gets one mention, but it pops out at you.


From: Adam Quinan
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 19:41:28 -0400
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

And the boatswain Mr Bulkley, a large man, on the Surprise in 13 GS.

Adam Quinan


From: Gregg Germain
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 06:26:01 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

These sorts of name choices are easy to accept as being done on purpose, of course.

My favorite example of this sort of invention is one "Admiral Sievewright".

Gregg
Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)


From: Ray McPherson
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 14:10:00 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

Diana is the Latin equivalent of the Greek Artemis who was the huntress. You're right, and it does fit.


From: Barney Simon
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 07:35:52 -0400
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

Gregg posed the q:

Do you all really think POB (or any author) sits there and plans these metaphores, allusions, etc.? I tend to think they are accidents or even non-existent in the mind of the author.

I would say absolutely! Good authors always challenge their readers with things like that. At least my wife does when she writes... shes always prompting: did you get how this and that are related and how this repesents one thing and is mirrored some where else. I usually nod and say yes, it is a wonderful thing.

Barney


From: Randal Allred
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 09:14:48 -1000
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

Yes--I agree with Barney. Here is the English professor arguing: especially when we note a consistent pattern of such awareness in an author's writings, he certainly did plan such things. POB is too careful of a craftsman to ignore the implications of the images and language he uses. He is clearly meticulous. Why would he ignore figurative language and allusive diction and so on?

Randal


From: Peter Mackay
Date: Wed, 24 Oct 2001 05:18:47 +1000
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

PO'B has far too much fun with words for names to be entirely innocent of meaning. Diana is one that sums up the character of the character. Babbington I wonder about, though, but O'Brian makes up for it when he gives him a cargo of Lesbians, a scene which makes me hug myself with delight.


From: Curtis Ruder
Date: Mon Oct 22 2001 - 23:35:08 EDT
Subject: POB: Post Captain

I have not read the next thirty messages, so this may have been hammered to death already ... but I do think most of the allusions and allegories used were planned and intentionally evocative. I have definitely seen it taken too far (one literature class I took as an undergrad got into a debate about whether the use of that versus which in some novel was simply a grammar mistake or an attempt to objectify the object - I quit my English major the next day). But I think the major difference between very good writers and average writers is that in POB there is enough subtlety to question whether the allusions are intentional or whether we the readers are being clever. Ayn Rand, who was a decent philosopher but a poor writer in my estimation, never left any doubt. The "allusions" slap you in the face and kick you in the shins. That question is simply one tribute to the artistry of one of the masters.

Curtis


From: Gregg Germain
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 06:13:01 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

Curtis Ruder wrote:

But I think the major difference between very good writers and average writers is that in POB there is enough subtlety to question whether the allusions are intentional or whether we the readers are being clever.

Well are there ANY references to these allusions in his notes?

Gregg
Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)


From: Samuel Bostock (sambostock@YAHOO.CO.UK)
Date: Tue Oct 23 2001 - 07:43:26 EDT
Subject: apples and literature

I thought I'd wait I while before I put my share in:

As an English Lit. student I have had this discussion many times in classes, most often concerning poetry. We questioned that the poet intentionally used hard consonant sounds (for example) and various far-flung word associations. And yes - some may be there by accident, others by direct design, but most (depending on the writer) are subconscious in the writer's mind. For example if I wanted to describe an apple I could say:

The apple was round, green and moist.

A better writer would say:

The apple was bursting ripe, a tight round skin and moist pink flesh.

Obviously I have used more decorative language in the second example, but it also evokes the symbolism of apples in literature: sex. Also I have used lots of 'r' and 's' sounds which give the example a flowing, rolling sound. Initially that was unconscious, but then a non-accidental writer would 'sculpt' the text. I sculpted the text to emphasis this:

The apple was bursting ripe, a stretched round skin and moist flesh.

All I've done is removed the 'pink' as I thought it was too overt and unnecessary (also lacked r and s sounds) and substituted stretched for tight. Looking at a small section of text this way shows how a writer can coolly mould sentences to give the best effect.

Patrick O'Brian is not a poet, but he is a highly aware author. He knew what he was doing. To look at his names for example: The name Diana is appropriate for Mrs Villiers because of it's associations with the huntress god. To a reader already acquainted with the Roman mythology it would give an added 'feel' to the character that O'Brian would not need to describe, just as the 'r' and 's' sounds supply something that would take many more words to describe. Diana's name is an example of a logical, thinking connection in the author's mind. To come to Pullings: say it to yourself: 'pullings', without any connection to character. Now compare with 'babbington'. Pullings is a simple two-syllable word, and to me is does give vague connections to solidity, hard work etc. Babbington is flashier: three-syllables and for some reason reminds me of a monkey (A baboon for all love!). The other things that Ray mentioned are also things that just wallow on the edge of a reader's mind, waiting to associate themselves:

Ray McPherson wrote:

Pullings. Hummmmm. If we assume that POB used every name to explain something, then maybe Pullings is a man who has to drag himself hand-over-hand up the naval ladder without any safety net.
Babbington--baby? Mowett?????

These are, I believe more sub-conscious connections in the author's mind than Diana's name. He probably never realised he thought it, but could you imagine swapping the names of Jack's earliest mids around? It just doesn't work - and not simply because I know the characters, and could not imagine changing their names - it's deeper than that.

When analysing a work of literature we have to remember that it is the product of what's inside the writer's head. A human brain isn't very good at making things up from scratch. If you were asked to create a name for a character, the chances are you'd wouldn't make the name up. Some things may not have any meaning to the reader, being perhaps, the name of POB's first school friend. But others such as Diana's name have direct literary connections, and others such as Pullings have more unconscious associations.

With a writer like O'Brian, names are of course, not the only symbolism etc. used in the books. The Polychrest/Diana example is a good one. Once you've read the stories it's time to look for the threads and cross threads. Looking at the back of the weaving doesn't destroy the realism, but increases your respect and admiration for the author and his subtle artistry.

Hope everyone's still awake!

Samuel Bostock
Suffolk, UK


From: Rowen 84
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 21:54:07 EDT
Subject: Re: apples and literature

sambostock@YAHOO.CO.UK writes:

With a writer like O'Brian, names are of course, not the only symbolism etc. used in the books. The Polychrest/Diana example is a good one. Once you've read the stories it's time to look for the threads and cross threads.
Looking at the back of the weaving doesn't destroy the realism, but increases your respect and admiration for the author and his subtle artistry.

I'll second Susan's nomination for POST OF THE DAY! Thanks for a very cogent explanation, Sam. We've discussed some of POB's poems before, and concluded that he was a better novelist than poet, I think. However POB's conscious use of names, symbols and precise word choices shows up wonderfully in his short stories, most of which are much darker and oblique than the Aubreyad. IMO, his writing shares many qualities with poetry. For one thing, like poetry, one has to read more carefully than with most fiction: miss a word and you can miss the entire point of a paragraph. His writing is also more 'sensual' - color, sound, touch are incorporated throughout the writing. And his writing reads extremely well aloud, too.

Rowen


From: Jean A
Subject: Re: Apples and Literature
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 10:32:14 EDT

I don't believe anyone has mentioned the hapless and, ultimately, betraying Scrivener.
Surely, in this instance, POB chose the name deliberately!

Jean A.


From: Stephen Chambers
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 22:31:59 +0100
Subject: Re: Apples and Literature

Betraying, how? I don't remember him being anything other than helpful after the aborted attempt at highway robbery.

Stephen Chambers
50° 48' 38" N
01° 09' 15" W
Approx. 180 inches above sea level
When the pin is pulled Mr Grenade is no longer our friend.


From: Jean A
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 19:23:00 EDT
Subject: Re: apples and literature

Ah, but who alerted the press gang who made it an early night at Pullings' Betrothal Party?

Jean A.


From: Steve Turley
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 16:52:09 -0700
Subject: Re: apples and literature

Scriven stuck his head into the room to *warn* Jack about the tipstaffs' arrival, not to betray him to them.


From: Adam Quinan
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 19:32:57 -0400
Subject: Group read Scriven Helpful? Re: [POB] Apples and Literature

Page 213 of Post Captain (Fontana paperback) at Pullings dinner indicates that Scriven may not have been totally helpful.

Adam Quinan


From: Stephen Chambers
Date: Wed, 24 Oct 2001 01:06:22 +0100
Subject: Re: apples and literature SPOILER

I'll have to try and find my copy of Post Captain tomorrow night, it's been a year since I last read it and it was boxed up with all my other books. :-(
From what I remember I thought that he firstly tipped off Jack that the tipstaffs (no pun intended) were waiting for him outside and that the Press were attracted by the ensuing scuffle, joining in and helping. The tipstaffs were given a good beating and pressed into the Navy with protests about the legality of the proceedings.
Prior to this Scrivener was a fount of information regarding loopholes in the law regarding debtors and recommended the Liberties of Savoy and travelling on a Sunday.
I don't claim this as gospel though, but it does explain my confusion over the betrayal.

Stephen Chambers


From: Adam Quinan (adam.quinan@HOME.COM)
Date: Tue Oct 23 2001 - 22:07:06 EDT
Subject: Scriven Re: [POB] apples and literature SPOILER

Interesting how two people's interpretation can differ of the same passage. However, there is another part of the story, and I can't find the passage where Jack and Stephen discuss Scriven but it is clear that Jack and Stephen believe Scriven had betrayed the party to the tipstaff rather than was trying to warn him.

-- Adam Quinan


From: Bob Kegel
Date: Wed, 24 Oct 2001 02:24:13 -0700
Subject: Re: apples and literature SPOILER

"The din was so great that Stephen alone noticed the door open just enough for Scriven's questing head: he placed a warning hand on Jack's elbow, but the rest were roaring still when it swung wide and the bailiffs rushed in." It appears Scriven tipped the tipstaff, not Jack. He certainly missed the boat back to the Polychrest and appears not again.

In HMSS Jack mentions him " You are much too inclined to find excuses for scrubs, Stephen: you preserved that ill-conditioned brute Scriven from the gallows, nourished him in your bosom, gave him your countenance, and who paid for it? J. Aubrey paid for it. "

Bob Kegel
46°59'18.661"N 123°49'29.827"W


From: Ray McPherson
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 11:24:28 -0700
Subject: POB: Post Captain

Dear Lissuns,

On a trip to SF this past weekend Jim and I listened to Post Captain again. I was struck by Jack's feelings about the Polycrest on pages 231-2 of the hardbound edition: ". . .but he could not love her. She was a mean-spirited vessel, radically vicious, cross-grained, laboursome, cruel in her unreliability; and he could not love her." I think this is a reflection of his relationship with Diana.

Earlier in PC he tells Christie-Palliere (page 97-8): "But, however, as soon as I thought things were going along capitally with her, and that we were very close friends, she pulled me up as though I had run into a boom, and asked me who the devil I thought I was? . . . So I committed myself pretty far, partly out of pique, do you see?"

He has an unwanted commitment to both and loves neither.


From: Gregg Germain
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 11:56:52 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

I fully recognize that when it comes to Things Literary, I'm an uneducated oaf. Perhaps even lout. But I've seen lots of cross-connections written here on the board in the last few weeks, so I need to ask:

Do you all really think POB (or any author) sits there and plans these metaphores, allusions, etc.? I tend to think they are accidents or even non-existent in the mind of the author.

But as I say, I know nothing about lit, so I'd accept education about this.

Gregg
Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)


From: David Phillips
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 15:03:59 -0400
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

I'd be perfectly happy to bet a dollar that I can out-oaf Gregg in the Things Literary category; I can't tell an allegory from a crocodile.

But I'd also bet that planning out things like this are the difference between Himself, and, say, Tom Clancy.

I really enjoy reading Clancy, and even read his stuff a second time.

But it's POB who's series is on my bookshelf at home.

David V. Phillips sasdvp@unx.sas.com SAS Institute Inc., Cary, NC
If you're not living on the edge, you're taking up too much room.


From: Greg White
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 15:04:49 -0400
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

Gregg Germain wrote:

Do you all really think POB (or any author) sits there and plans these metaphores, allusions, etc.?

I think John Meyers Meyers did, but that was his goal in Silverlock.

I tend to think they are accidents or even non-existent in the mind of the author.

I think they're largely accidental, but that they occurred in the author's subconcious mind.

I'd be interested to hear what any authors on the list have to say. What does Greg think, Astrid?

Greg

42º32'34.5" N
71º20'13.2" W


From: Ray McPherson
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 12:12:35 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

Gregg Germain wrote:

Do you all really think POB (or any author) sits there and plans these metaphores, allusions, etc.?

Dear Gregg,

I think the good ones do.

Ray McP


From: Karen von Bargen
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 19:23:44 -0000

Yes.

Karen von Bargen


From: Susan Wenger
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 12:26:53 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

If it was a once-in-a-while occurrence, I'd think accident. This happens quite often in POB, much more often than in, say, Clancy. I don't think it's an accident. I doubt that he worked very long to get these connections in, but I think they occurred to him and he had a chuckle as he inserted them.

When one of O'Brian's characters has a dream, it's not there just to fill a page - his books are too tightly drawn for that. The dream relates to an event in the book - either as foreshadowing or as the character's subconscious processing of the event. When an animal event mimics a human event, it's there as deliberate humor. He knew what he was doing, a deep old file. He didn't draw arrows, he was satisfied that some readers would get the connections, others wouldn't mind the brief digression, since the parallel only takes up a sentence or two.

My vote: deliberate, but not over-worked.


From: Gregg Germain
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 13:54:26 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

I think it's possible to find all sorts of meanings that seem to have a connection but that the author never ever heard of.

Gregg Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)


From: Thistle Farm
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 16:58:05 EDT
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

Never heard of? Are you implying that POB was even less well read than me, when surely I am familiar with most of them, although Diana was a Huntress, wasn't she?

Sarah


From: Gregg Germain
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 05:56:25 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

I was not specific - I wasn't speaking SPECIFICALLY to Diana/huntress thought.

And yes, I do think it's possible for you to know something that POB didn't ;^)

Gregg
Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)


From: Ray McPherson
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 13:08:22 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

There is something else about the canon that I'm convinced is true, but have not done enough research to prove. It has been over 40 years since I studied (or read) Elizabethan drama, but I remember that the authors often used the names to describe the predominant characteristic of the dramatis personnae: for example, "Truewit" and "Truelove." POB does this very subtly. Consider the following:

Sophia--means wisdom and is the name of one of his his first ships which he loves and loses. (Don't think beyond the first 2 books.)
Aubrey--the name of an elf king in German mythology implying eternal youth and superior powers. Jack's nautical abilities are almost magical.
Maturin--haven't found anything definitive; how- ever, I think this means mature. Stephen often cares for Jack as a parent would a child.
Diana---Divine--also goddess of nature and fertility, but I don't think that necessarily fits.
Preserved--Killick performs a preserving function for both Jack and Stephen in providing human comforts, preparing food, clothes, etc.
Bonden--he is bound to Jack throughout the canon.
Scriven--that's easy and not very subtle.

Vat denk je?

Ray McP


From: Susan Wenger
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 13:14:18 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

Yessss. And many others - the one who comes to mind is Timely, the bosun who interrupts Jack and Mercedes when they do not wish to be disturbed.


From: Peter Mackay
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 06:17:13 +1000

Wallis?

He only gets one mention, but it pops out at you.


From: Adam Quinan
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 19:41:28 -0400
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

And the boatswain Mr Bulkley, a large man, on the Surprise in 13 GS.

Adam Quinan


From: Gregg Germain
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 06:26:01 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

These sorts of name choices are easy to accept as being done on purpose, of course.

My favorite example of this sort of invention is one "Admiral Sievewright".

Gregg
Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)


From: Samuel Bostock
Date: Thu, 25 Oct 2001 13:07:29 +0100
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain (Adm. Sievewright)

Gregg,

At the risk of sounding stupid - what about Admiral Sievewright - it's not a made up name - there's a guy in our village with that name.

Sam


From: Gregg Germain
Date: Thu, 25 Oct 2001 12:46:40 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain (Adm. Sievewright)

You don't sound stupid....I just thought that an Admiral's name starting with 'sieve" was pretty funny and maybe selected on purpose.

Gregg
Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)


From: Bob Saldeen
Date: Thu, 25 Oct 2001 10:01:14 -0500
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain (Adm. Sievewright)

I think the humor is (my understanding, anyway)--it¹s ironic that an admiral would have a family name of sieve-builders. Sieves being not very watertight.

Bob


From: Don Seltzer
Date: Thu, 25 Oct 2001 12:25:32 -0400
Subject: Re: Adm. Sievewright

Even more ironic as the name of a chief of naval intelligence who is careless about leaking information.

Don Seltzer


From: Ray McPherson
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 14:10:00 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

Diana is the Latin equivalent of the Greek Artemis who was the huntress. You're right, and it does fit.


From: Barney Simon
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 07:35:52 -0400
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

Gregg posed the q:

Do you all really think POB (or any author) sits there and plans these metaphores, allusions, etc.? I tend to think they are accidents or even non-existent in the mind of the author.

I would say absolutely! Good authors always challenge their readers with things like that. At least my wife does when she writes... shes always prompting: did you get how this and that are related and how this repesents one thing and is mirrored some where else. I usually nod and say yes, it is a wonderful thing.

Barney


From: Randal Allred
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 09:14:48 -1000
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

Yes--I agree with Barney. Here is the English professor arguing: especially when we note a consistent pattern of such awareness in an author's writings, he certainly did plan such things. POB is too careful of a craftsman to ignore the implications of the images and language he uses. He is clearly meticulous. Why would he ignore figurative language and allusive diction and so on?

Randal


From: Peter Mackay
Date: Wed, 24 Oct 2001 05:18:47 +1000
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

PO'B has far too much fun with words for names to be entirely innocent of meaning. Diana is one that sums up the character of the character. Babbington I wonder about, though, but O'Brian makes up for it when he gives him a cargo of Lesbians, a scene which makes me hug myself with delight.


From: Curtis Ruder Br Date: Mon Oct 22 2001 - 23:35:08 EDT Br Subject: POB: Post Captain

I have not read the next thirty messages, so this may have been hammered to death already ... but I do think most of the allusions and allegories used were planned and intentionally evocative. I have definitely seen it taken too far (one literature class I took as an undergrad got into a debate about whether the use of that versus which in some novel was simply a grammar mistake or an attempt to objectify the object - I quit my English major the next day). But I think the major difference between very good writers and average writers is that in POB there is enough subtlety to question whether the allusions are intentional or whether we the readers are being clever. Ayn Rand, who was a decent philosopher but a poor writer in my estimation, never left any doubt. The "allusions" slap you in the face and kick you in the shins. That question is simply one tribute to the artistry of one of the masters.

Curtis


From: Gregg Germain
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 06:13:01 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

Curtis Ruder wrote:

next day). But I think the major difference between very good writers and average writers is that in POB there is enough subtlety to question whether the allusions are intentional or whether we the readers are being clever.

Well are there ANY references to these allusions in his notes?

Gregg
Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)


From: Samuel Bostock (sambostock@YAHOO.CO.UK)
Date: Tue Oct 23 2001 - 07:43:26 EDT
Subject: apples and literature

I thought I'd wait I while before I put my share in:

As an English Lit. student I have had this discussion many times in classes, most often concerning poetry. We questioned that the poet intentionally used hard consonant sounds (for example) and various far-flung word associations. And yes - some may be there by accident, others by direct design, but most (depending on the writer) are subconscious in the writer's mind. For example if I wanted to describe an apple I could say:

The apple was round, green and moist.

A better writer would say:

The apple was bursting ripe, a tight round skin and moist pink flesh.

Obviously I have used more decorative language in the second example, but it also evokes the symbolism of apples in literature: sex. Also I have used lots of 'r' and 's' sounds which give the example a flowing, rolling sound. Initially that was unconscious, but then a non-accidental writer would 'sculpt' the text. I sculpted the text to emphasis this:

The apple was bursting ripe, a stretched round skin and moist flesh.

All I've done is removed the 'pink' as I thought it was too overt and unnecessary (also lacked r and s sounds) and substituted stretched for tight. Looking at a small section of text this way shows how a writer can coolly mould sentences to give the best effect.

Patrick O'Brian is not a poet, but he is a highly aware author. He knew what he was doing. To look at his names for example: The name Diana is appropriate for Mrs Villiers because of it's associations with the huntress god. To a reader already acquainted with the Roman mythology it would give an added 'feel' to the character that O'Brian would not need to describe, just as the 'r' and 's' sounds supply something that would take many more words to describe. Diana's name is an example of a logical, thinking connection in the author's mind. To come to Pullings: say it to yourself: 'pullings', without any connection to character. Now compare with 'babbington'. Pullings is a simple two-syllable word, and to me is does give vague connections to solidity, hard work etc. Babbington is flashier: three-syllables and for some reason reminds me of a monkey (A baboon for all love!). The other things that Ray mentioned are also things that just wallow on the edge of a reader's mind, waiting to associate themselves:

Ray McPherson wrote:

Pullings. Hummmmm. If we assume that POB used every name to explain something, then maybe Pullings is a man who has to drag himself hand-over-hand up the naval ladder without any safety net.
Babbington--baby? Mowett?????

These are, I believe more sub-conscious connections in the author's mind than Diana's name. He probably never realised he thought it, but could you imagine swapping the names of Jack's earliest mids around? It just doesn't work - and not simply because I know the characters, and could not imagine changing their names - it's deeper than that.

When analysing a work of literature we have to remember that it is the product of what's inside the writer's head. A human brain isn't very good at making things up from scratch. If you were asked to create a name for a character, the chances are you'd wouldn't make the name up. Some things may not have any meaning to the reader, being perhaps, the name of POB's first school friend. But others such as Diana's name have direct literary connections, and others such as Pullings have more unconscious associations.

With a writer like O'Brian, names are of course, not the only symbolism etc. used in the books. The Polychrest/Diana example is a good one. Once you've read the stories it's time to look for the threads and cross threads. Looking at the back of the weaving doesn't destroy the realism, but increases your respect and admiration for the author and his subtle artistry.

Hope everyone's still awake!

Samuel Bostock
Suffolk, UK


From: Rowen 84
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 21:54:07 EDT
Subject: Re: apples and literature

sambostock@YAHOO.CO.UK writes:

With a writer like O'Brian, names are of course, not the only symbolism etc. used in the books. The Polychrest/Diana example is a good one. Once you've read the stories it's time to look for the threads and cross threads.
Looking at the back of the weaving doesn't destroy the realism, but increases your respect and admiration for the author and his subtle artistry.

I'll second Susan's nomination for POST OF THE DAY! Thanks for a very cogent explanation, Sam. We've discussed some of POB's poems before, and concluded that he was a better novelist than poet, I think. However POB's conscious use of names, symbols and precise word choices shows up wonderfully in his short stories, most of which are much darker and oblique than the Aubreyad. IMO, his writing shares many qualities with poetry. For one thing, like poetry, one has to read more carefully than with most fiction: miss a word and you can miss the entire point of a paragraph. His writing is also more 'sensual' - color, sound, touch are incorporated throughout the writing. And his writing reads extremely well aloud, too.

Rowen


From: Jean A
Subject: Re: Apples and Literature
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 10:32:14 EDT

I don't believe anyone has mentioned the hapless and, ultimately, betraying Scrivener.
Surely, in this instance, POB chose the name deliberately!

Jean A.


From: Stephen Chambers
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 22:31:59 +0100
Subject: Re: Apples and Literature

Betraying, how? I don't remember him being anything other than helpful after the aborted attempt at highway robbery.

Stephen Chambers
50° 48' 38" N
01° 09' 15" W
Approx. 180 inches above sea level
When the pin is pulled Mr Grenade is no longer our friend.


From: Jean A
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 19:23:00 EDT
Subject: Re: apples and literature

Ah, but who alerted the press gang who made it an early night at Pullings' Betrothal Party?

Jean A.


From: Steve Turley
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 16:52:09 -0700
Subject: Re: apples and literature

Scriven stuck his head into the room to *warn* Jack about the tipstaffs' arrival, not to betray him to them.


From: Adam Quinan
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 19:32:57 -0400
Subject: Group read Scriven Helpful? Re: [POB] Apples and Literature

Page 213 of Post Captain (Fontana paperback) at Pullings dinner indicates that Scriven may not have been totally helpful.

Adam Quinan


From: Stephen Chambers
Date: Wed, 24 Oct 2001 01:06:22 +0100
Subject: Re: apples and literature SPOILER

I'll have to try and find my copy of Post Captain tomorrow night, it's been a year since I last read it and it was boxed up with all my other books. :-(
From what I remember I thought that he firstly tipped off Jack that the tipstaffs (no pun intended) were waiting for him outside and that the Press were attracted by the ensuing scuffle, joining in and helping. The tipstaffs were given a good beating and pressed into the Navy with protests about the legality of the proceedings.
Prior to this Scrivener was a fount of information regarding loopholes in the law regarding debtors and recommended the Liberties of Savoy and travelling on a Sunday.
I don't claim this as gospel though, but it does explain my confusion over the betrayal.

Stephen Chambers


From: Adam Quinan (adam.quinan@HOME.COM)
Date: Tue Oct 23 2001 - 22:07:06 EDT
Subject: Scriven Re: [POB] apples and literature SPOILER

Interesting how two people's interpretation can differ of the same passage. However, there is another part of the story, and I can't find the passage where Jack and Stephen discuss Scriven but it is clear that Jack and Stephen believe Scriven had betrayed the party to the tipstaff rather than was trying to warn him.

-- Adam Quinan


From: Bob Kegel
Date: Wed, 24 Oct 2001 02:24:13 -0700
Subject: Re: apples and literature SPOILER

"The din was so great that Stephen alone noticed the door open just enough for Scriven's questing head: he placed a warning hand on Jack's elbow, but the rest were roaring still when it swung wide and the bailiffs rushed in." It appears Scriven tipped the tipstaff, not Jack. He certainly missed the boat back to the Polychrest and appears not again.

In HMSS Jack mentions him " You are much too inclined to find excuses for scrubs, Stephen: you preserved that ill-conditioned brute Scriven from the gallows, nourished him in your bosom, gave him your countenance, and who paid for it? J. Aubrey paid for it. "

Bob Kegel
46°59'18.661"N 123°49'29.827"W


From: "Terrijo ..."
Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2001 13:19:55 -0700
Subject: Re: Bony & a PC bit

Peter wrote,

But I'm curious now - how did you get interested in Arthur Upfield? Perhaps you caught the TV series a few years back?

The dreaded TV series?? No, I have never had the experiance of seeing the telly version of Bony. Though I have heard some rumours.

Oddly enough, I came across a National Geographic magazine in 1989 where there was a letter to the Editor thanking them on an article about Australia. The lady writing the letter mentioned how much she enjoyed reading the Upfeild novels as a child. Well, I certainly got curious and started investigating where I could find such books.

For the Seattle lissun's (??) The UW Bookstore not only had most of them, they ordered me the ones that weren't there. Within a year I had the entire series including the MM one which got shipped to me from Florida, and was one of only two known copies in the States. They then got me the few that weren't available here also. I have had many a good night's read with these books. My favourite still is 'The Mystery of Swordfish Reef', followed closely by the first of the series, 'The Sands of Windee'. The aboriginal Sherlock Holmes! I'm wondering if Bony ever did figured out how to roll his own ciggies? (I used to get a good laugh at those little scenes describing how he'd mangle the process!)

That's one of many things I like about a really good book, the humour that will occasionally pop up unexpectedly. And since this is a POB list, I'll get him in here some how...

I loved the entire bee 'thing', the 'garment', and the bear suit bits in Post Captain, not to mention the way Killick gets away with what he does in regards to JA. I know I may not be a literary giant, or very sophisticated, I read books for the pure enjoyment of them... And I must say some of the things in PC had me chuckling right along. (Notably Killick telling Jack he wasn't going to help with Stephen's bees!)Oh! And lest I forget... That bit where Jeannot is telling Captain Christy-Palliere that there was someone to see him! I laughed outright at that one!

Sigh, for HMS Surprise to read next...

Terrijo


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Date: Wed, 24 Oct 2001 14:20:25 +0100
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

Can't resist joining in the discussion on "lit critting" and how much/little authors intend. I have a "from the horse's mouth" insight on this which I can partly share with the list - even though it must remain an anonymous insight, it's an interesting one. A very well-known, top-flight South African author (wrote in Afrikaans) once told me in confidence that he was constantly astounded at what literary critics read into his work - he went so far as to say that he could hardly recognise what they came up with as his own writing - and, yes, this was a very highly educated and intelligent man. His opinion of literary criticism (translated from a letter that I've kept to this day): "a right load of balls. The author writes what makes sense to his mind and resonates in his heart at that time on that day; and the reader sees what makes sense to his mind and resonates in his heart at that time on that day; and these two, both honest, need not be the same at all. But the literary critic, who has no head and no heart but only ego, twists and turns the written word into some grandiose, allusion-filled, 'meaningful' artificial sham of a schema that only an ass would want to be associated with."

My feeling is that authors do, of course, consciously come up with some stuff eg the reference to JA seeing Dillon lying on the Cacafuego's deck "with a great wound in his heart". Other stuff is generated from the subconscious; and I'd put many of the passages where we see JA's take on something and then, not too much later, SM's take on the same or similar subject as being in this category - I know that I often think "oh yes! now there's something I could usefully have character X think about" and I end up, during editing, finding that more characters than X had the thought (I'm not saying all the JA/SM things are like this, but I'm dead sure some are). And, finally, still other stuff, a whole LOT of stuff, exists only in the minds of the devoted reader which isn't to say it's not "true". POB didn't have to INTEND an allusion consciously for an insight to be true for a reader. Any halfway great writing is going to have nuances for people and shed lights for people that the writer never in a million years "thought of" in a conscious way.

How's that for sitting on the fence?

London Lois
51° 28' 50" N
000° 10' 53" W


From: Adam Quinan
Date: Wed, 24 Oct 2001 17:02:35 -0400
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

There was an old science fiction story by Isaac Asimov I believe, about a physics professor who invented a time machine. He was telling an English professor at a party that he had brought Shakespeare back to the 20th century as he thought that he was such a genius that he would adapt well to the future. Unfortunately although things had started well, it had ended in disaster.
Shakespeare had been amazed that people still enjoyed his plays and studied them so he had been enrolled in a English literature class. Unfortunately he failed the course because he couldn't understand all the important allusions etc. that the literary critics had discovered in his works over the centuries.


From: Gregg Germain
Date: Thu, 25 Oct 2001 03:12:55 -0700
Subject: Re: POB: Post Captain

Lois Anne du Toit wrote:

The author writes what makes sense to his mind and resonates in his heart at that time on that day; and the reader sees what makes sense to his mind and resonates in his heart at that time on that day; and these two, both honest, need not be the same at all.

I bet this is really what's at bottom in all this. I've seen poetry discussions between two people I know well. They had totally different ideas of the meaning of the piece, the allusions/metaphors, and it was clear each was seeing the piece through their own life-lense.

But the literary critic, who has no head and no heart but only ego, twists and turns the written word into some grandiose, allusion-filled, 'meaningful' artificial sham of a schema that only an ass would want to be associated with."

Reminds me of a scene from movie with Anthony Hopkins playing C. S. Lewis (Shadowlands I believe. He's seated with his literary friends, who are trying to get Lewis/Hopkins to admit that the kids stepping through the closet loaded with fur coats was an allusion to the birth process. Lewis/Hopkins chuckled and said, no, they're just stepping through a closet loaded with fur coats.

It's stuff like that, plus experiences in watching N people come up with N+1 allusions/metaphors that suggests to me that POB would be surprised at a lot of our suggested metaphors.

Other stuff is generated from the

I suspect this happens a lot. See below.

and I'd put many of the passages where we see JA's take on something and then, not too much later, SM's take on the same or similar subject as being in this category - I know that I often think "oh yes! now there's something I could usefully have character X think about" and I end up, during editing, finding that more characters than X had the thought (I'm not saying all the JA/SM things are like this, but I'm dead sure some are).

Supposedly, a writer is supposed to "know" their characters so well, and have developed them so well, that the characters respond all by themselves in the author's head.


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Date: Mon, 29 Oct 2001 15:58:09 -0000
Subject: Groupread: PC: also M&C:JA and midshipmen

M&C p369 [or possibly 396] (Norton h/c): JA remarks upon how free and easy his mids are with him - it's touching and typical of him that he doesn't realise that the reason is largely his own kindliness and friendly attitude towards them. More light is shed on this relationship eg at PC p46-47 where Babbington remarks: "You would take him for an ordinary person - not the least coldness or distance". While this refers to JA ashore, his very real liking for youngsters and his mids in particular is found in many passages eg poor little Parslow PC 225-226, one of my all-time favourites.

London Lois
51° 28' 50" N 000° 10' 53" W


From: Don Seltzer
Date: Wed, 31 Oct 2001 13:36:51 -0500
Subject: GRP:PC The Battles

Before we complete the group discussion of Post Captain, I have a few notes on the historical basis for the naval battles.

The episode of the capture and rescue of Jack and Stephen returning to England aboard the Lord Nelson is based upon real events. The East Indiaman Lord Nelson was attacked by the French privateer Bellone on Aug. 14, 1803. Despite very stiff resistance from the Lord Nelson, the privateer did capture her, and both ships headed for the Spanish port of Corunna. When a British frigate appeared on the scene, the Bellone drew her off. The Lord Nelson was subsequently attacked by the Seagull, 18, with the battle extending through the night and into the next day. The French-held Lord Nelson was on the verge of making her escape when Sir Edward Pellew's squadron of four ships of the line made their appearance.

The cutting out of the Fanciulla from Chaulieu harbor is mostly the invention of POB, but there are some loose ties to the exploits of the Dart. The Dart was an experimental sloop with similarly shaped bow and stern, and armed entirely with carronades. On the night of July 7, 1800, the Dart accompanied by several smaller vessels and boats attacked four French frigates anchored in Dunkirk harbor. Crewmen from the Dart managed to board and cut out one of the frigates, the Desiree, 40.

The final battle, in which four British frigates encountered the four Spanish treasure ships, happened on Oct. 5, 1804, pretty much as described by POB. A few of the captain's names are different, including Jack Aubrey substituting for the Lively's regular captain, Hammond. The Spanish Mercedes did blow up, and the other three frigates struck to the British. And because war had not officially been declared between Britain and Spain, the officers and crew were denied their normal shares of prize money.

Don Seltzer


From: Steve Ross
Date: Wed, 31 Oct 2001 13:17:35 -0600
Subject: GRP:PC The Cover

I seem providentially to have dropped in at a time when a progressive Group Read cum discussion is under way. If we are just finishing up Post Captain, that accords fairly well with the location of my own bookmark at the moment . . .

As for the Geoff Hunt cover: Can anyone tell me just what the gun crew seems to be firing at in that illustration? The gun, it seems, is trained well forward. If this is gunnery practice, I wouldn't expect to be able to see the floating target from this angle; but there does seem to be something out there, some kind of looming dark shape. A shore battery? The smoke of enemy gunnery? (no; surely all parties in this scene are going about their business much too calmly for this to be the heat of battle.)

Don't want to seem obsessive, but, like many, I find that the Hunt pictures round out the POB experience for me perfectly. I don't know what I will do when they all come out in new editions, with the Oprah's Book Club seal on them . . . sigh . . .

Steve Ross


From: Rowen 84
Date: Wed, 31 Oct 2001 20:24:00 EST
Subject: Re: GRP:PC The Cover

Steve, don't worry. I've heard that the seal will be a reproduction of the Nile Medal. In addition, there is a reliable rumor that the publishers expect such a response with this publicity and the upcoming movie that they plan to release several product tie-ins, including a Budweiser-branded cuddly stuffed sloth, a Greenpeace combination plastic light-saber/narwhal tusk, and a mail-in coupon to the Columbian Embassy for a free Fisher-Price 'Little medico's Naval Surgeon kit', complete with a little plastic saw, bottles of fake blood and leaches, and a free 'starter' bottle of laudaunum.

Personally, I'm hoping that Oprah will invite some of the Newport crowd to show off their nifty duds.

Rowen


From: Kathryn Guare
Date: Wed, 31 Oct 2001 17:17:36 -0800
Subject: Re: GRP:PC The Cover

Your note caused me to reach for the book in question once again to examine the cover. While I cannot say that I see anything disintguishable in the line of fire - it seems that the smoke is fairly well obscuring anything that they might be firing at - my eye was drawn to the tall, straight figure standing in the foreground. It strikes me that this was the closest that Geoff Hunt ever came to an actual depiction of Jack Aubrey, with his ubiquitous yellow hair in a queue and hat worn in the somewhat outdated Nelson style. For those who will be in Newport this weekend, I would love it if someone could pose the question to Geoff. Is this indeed meant to be a depiction of Jack Aubrey? And did he consciously decide in future covers NOT to attempt any further direct depiction of the main characters? Or am I wrong? Are there characters discernible on other covers in the canon?

Obsessive you say? Join the club! :-)

Kathryn Guare


From: Ladyshrike@AOL.COM
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 07:40:54 EST
Subject: Re: GRP:PC The Cover

Which brings to mind a question (or three):

If a ship has just fired, let's say, all it's starboard cannon, the recoil will cause the ship to roll ... which way? Or are there too many factors (e.g. number, size, weight of the cannon, wind, swells) to know this? What happens if cannon are fired from both sides, or opposite sides in rapid succession?

Logistics, anyone?

Alice


From: thekaines
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 08:36:11 -0000
Subject: Re: GRP:PC The Cover

Having looked again at this one I, too, am mystified. If you look at the angle of the gun barrel, it appears as if the gun has just fired into the sea a few yards off the port bow. Even allowing for the possibility that the ship has rolled to port since firing, the amount of smoke in the picture, and its proximity to the gun, would seem to show that the gun has *just* fired, so any roll since then would be negligible.

Clive


From: Don Seltzer
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 10:53:59 -0500
Subject: Re: GRP:PC The Cover

Probably not such a difficult problem to get an estimate of the first order effect. A physics student would start out with conservation of momentum. The mass and velocity of the cannonball is matched by the mass and velocity of the recoil of the cannon, which eventually gets transmitted to the sideways motion of the ship.

So, fire a single starboard 18-lber at 1500 ft/sec. MV = 27,000. The 4000 lb gun will recoil at 6.75 ft/sec. The breeching ropes stop the recoil and transmit the momentum to the 1000 ton ship. The ship will "recoil" sideways at a fraction of an inch per second.

That simple analysis assumes that the gun is level with the ship's natural center of rotation, about which it rolls. Fire a gun on the quarterdeck, perhaps ten feet above this center of rotation, and you create a moment which will tend to make the ship roll a bit to larboard. How much depends upon how the ship's mass is distributed, but I expect that the motion would be slight for a frigate or larger.

Regarding the PC cover illustration, I originally thought that it portrayed the Lively chasing the Spanish frigate in the final scene of PC. I recall, though, that someone (Bruce?) asked Geoff Hunt about it, and he replied that it was just a gunnery exercise. In either case, I am surprised that the two forward bow chasers are drawn as carronades, rather than long guns.

Don Seltzer


From: Steve Ross
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 10:19:35 -0600
Subject: Re: GRP:PC The Cover

Don, thank you for this answer! On the question of the chasers, though, wouldn't this indicate that the ship in question is not the Lively, but the Polychrest? My already-dim memory of what I read a few days ago seems to indicate that the Polychrest was equipped only with carronades, and that Jack had two of them moved to the bow when he needed a chaser. If this is correct, then it provides a possible answer to the mystery: The scene is the Polychrest's extended pursuit of the privateer Bellone, which ended in Jack's being thanked and rewarded by representatives of the merchant fleet, and chewed out by that grasping, infernal scrub Harte. No surprise that people in the scene are so calm; as O'Brian tells us, despite occasional gunfire in both directions, the chase settled into a kind of routine, with the turning of the glass, the bell rung regularly, hands piped to dinner, etc.

As for Kathryn Guare's note about the figure standing on the rail being Jack, I agree completely. In fact, I seem to recall having heard someone once remark that Jack could be found in EVERY Hunt cover illustration. I can't claim to have done a systematic study, but I have looked, and in some cases this is demonstrably untrue (although, to be fair, I didn't use a microscope). There are some other covers, however, in which some of the officers do look rather Aubreyesque. PC is the closest, though.

Steve Ross
Baton Rouge


From: Gregg Germain
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 08:30:26 -0800
Subject: Re: GRP:PC The Cover

Don Seltzer wrote:

Regarding the PC cover illustration, I originally thought that it portrayed the Lively chasing the Spanish frigate in the final scene of PC. I recall, though, that someone (Bruce?) asked Geoff Hunt about it, and he replied that it was just a gunnery exercise. In either case, I am surprised that the two forward bow chasers are drawn as carronades, rather than long guns.

I'm doing this from memory (don't have the book with me), but doesn't the ship in the illustration have pitifully low barricades? More like present day HMS Rose than what ships had back then on the weather deck?

Gregg
Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)


From: Bob Kegel
Date: Wed, 24 Oct 2001 19:35:38 -0700
Subject: Re: Favorite Food Scenes in the Canon

Linnea wrote:

I loved it (in PC) when dear Sophie thought to send hampers and venison to Jack, which made it possible for him to finally be able to invite and entertain guests in the manner befitting a captain, although he was penurious at the time.

"'Ah,' said Jack. 'The Mapes hamper is directed to Dr Maturin, I see.' 'It's all one, sir,' said Killick. "

I can't remember whom he entertained

Speaking to Stephen Jack says ""Will you have dinner with me tomorrow? Canning is coming, and I have asked Parker, Macdonald and Pullings."'

Bob Kegel
46°59'18.661"N 123°49'29.827"W
Not a photographic memory but remembers being photographic.


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Subject: Group Read: PC - questions (belated. sorry!)
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 09:35:03 -0000

Still panting along, 1/2 a book behind the group.
pg refs Norton h/c
pg 16 JA is groping for a classical allusion "Actaeon, Ajax, Aristides" to express his situation in re his father's remarriage. Dim of me, but I can't come up with the name he's looking for, and this is annoying because it may well settle the vexed question of JA's relationship with the erstwhile dairymaid. Help!!!

pg 95 "with two feluccas in the darse" What is a DARSE?

pg 126 boarding netting is described as "taut and trim" : I thought it was desirable for it to be anything BUT taut?

pg 205 JA says to SM: "I dare say you will reject some of the cripples and Abraham men" : what are Abraham men? and why might they be candidates for the surgeon to find them unfit for the service?

Thank you, listswains
London Lois


From: Martin Watts
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 11:00:37 -0000
Subject: Re: Group Read: PC - questions (belated. sorry!)

London Lois asked:

pg 95 "with two feluccas in the darse" What is a DARSE?

Sounds like the wrong context but quite fascinating. The Shorter OED has DARSE as a variant of DACE, the freshwater fish. For the loss of the "R" it refers to BARSE as an earlier form of BASS.

On the other hand I think this might be what we are after:

http://www.eurodata. com/articles/toulon.htm

"The oldest part of the port, the darse vieille, dates from the 16th century, when Louis XIV turned Toulon into a great naval base by building an arsenal to the west (the darse neuve). In 1793 a young, then unknown artillery captain launched his stellar military career in Toulon by forcing the English to withdraw under a hail of cannon. As a result, Napoleon Bonaparte was promoted to brigadier general."

pg 205 JA says to SM: "I dare say you will reject some of the cripples and Abraham men" : what are Abraham men? and why might they be candidates for the surgeon to find them unfit for the service?

Again the SOED gives:

"sham Abraham [see Abraham-man below], feign illness or insanity. L18. Comb.: Abraham-man (obs. exc. Hist.) [perh. alluding to the beggar in Luke 16], after the dissolution of the religious houses (which had provided charity), a beggar feigning insanity."

I believe I have seen elsewhere that it referred to a ward at the Imperial War Museum - in its earlier incarnation as Bedlam. Yes, see Phrase and Fable at:http://www.bartleby.com/81/76.html

"Abram-Man, or Abraham Cove. A Tom o' Bedlam; a naked vagabond; a begging impostor.
1 The Abraham Ward, in Bedlam, had for its inmates begging lunatics, who used to array themselves "with party-coloured ribbons, tape in their hats, a fox-tail hanging down, a long stick with streamers," and beg alms; but "for all their seeming madness, they had wit enough to steal as they went along."-Canting Academy.
2 See King Lear, ii.
3. 3 In Beaumont and Fletcher we have several synonyms:-
4 "And these, what name or title e'er they bear, Jackman or Pat'rico, Cranke or Clapper-dudgeon, Fraier or Abram-man, I speak to all."
Beggar's Bush, ii. 1. "

Martin @ home:
50° 44' 58" N
1° 58' 35" W


From: Mary S
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 20:00:39 EST
Subject: Re: Group Read: PC - questions (belated. sorry!)

(re: darse)

Martin gave the old French usage at Toulon. Something tickled my memory and I looked up "arsenal" in my Webster's. Verrrrrry interesting:

"Arsenal [Italian arsenale, dock, from Arabic dar-al-sina'ah, court or house of industry]..."

Surely "darse" is another derivative from the same Arabic phrase.

Remember the Mediterranean/Moorish civilization in that other thread? Here it is again, you see.

For intelligence, there is nothing like a keen-witted, handsome woman, [DI 2]

Mary S
35° 58' 11" N
86° 48' 57" W


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Sent: Thursday, November 01, 2001 1:47 AM
Subject: M&C a question

pg 404 (Norton h/c) JA seeks a classical allusion to thirst: he comes up with Achilles or Andromache. What is the allusion? Offhand, I'd associate thirst most famously with Tantalos: a cursory search comes up with alternatives like Kronos, Leto, the Argonauts for the position of the famously thirsty. Might it be the Argonauts, as JA is talking names beginning with A???

Yes, it IS high time I got a life and stopped musing upon minutiae, don't tell me.

London Lois, definitely not anal-retentive

51° 28' 50" N 000° 10' 53" W


From: Steve Ross
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 09:48:39 -0600
Subject: Re: M&C a question

I puzzled over this one too, but in the end it seemed fairly plain that the classical reference after which Jack is groping is not a mythological, but a historical one. The only "A" I can think of that fits is the Hellenistic king Antiochus I (324-261 B.C.), who fell in love with his father's young wife Stratonice and wooed her away, along with a portion of his father's kingdom. A very romantic tale told by Plutarch, and to do him justice, Jack can be forgiven for mixing up historical and mythological references; the two have not always been kept totally distinct in the minds of readers (dare I say, present company included?).

Steve Ross
Baton Rouge


From: Gregg Germain (gregg_germain@YAHOO.COM)
Date: Thu Nov 01 2001 - 10:58:33 EST
Subject: M&C a question

Agamemnon?

Gregg
Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)


From: Steve Ross
Subject: Re: Group Read: PC - questions (belated. sorry!)
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 10:07:40 -0600

Lois wrote:

pg 16 JA is groping for a classical allusion "Actaeon, Ajax, Aristides" to express his situation in re his father's remarriage. Dim of me, but I can't come up with the name he's looking for, and this is annoying because it may well settle the vexed question of JA's relationship with the erstwhile dairymaid. Help!!!

Lois, did you ask this question twice? I THINK I remember having tried to address it a few minutes ago . . . but my own posts reach me from the list only slowly, so I can't be sure.

I am just finishing up PC myself, so it looks like we are in stride . .

Steve Ross
Baton Rouge (yes, I know there are coordinates expected . . . hold your darn horses!)


From: claude
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 09:23:07 -0800
Subject: Group Read: PC - questions (belated. sorry!)

I don't have a copy of MC at hand for reference, but think of the phonetic pronunciation of those names and you'll realize that Jack is trying to recall Oedipus. Plus the reference to feet, marriage, fathers, mothers and "not quite the thing"

Claude, enlisted for drink


From: Steve Ross
Subject: Re: Group Read: PC - questions (belated. sorry!)
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 14:00:02 -0600

Oedipus does seem a good candidate; however, I am not convinced by the pronunciation. Jack's tutors would most likely have pronounced it as "EE-dipus" (or, if they were real sticklers, OY-dipus). The part about feet escaped my attention; how does this come in (in MC, I mean)?

--Steve, willing to be persuaded, but still of the opinion that Antiochus is the most likely answer


From: claude
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 16:12:31 -0800
Subject: Re: Group Read: PC - questions (belated. sorry!)

Steve is right of course about the pronunciation. In my minds' ear I hear the names as spoken by an Iowan of the 21st century:) But Jack knew that there was something peculiar about the feet and I think that that is a reference to when Laius, Oedipus' father, drove a spike through the infant Oedipus' feet and left Oedipus exposed to the elements to die. I don't have a copy of MC to quote, maybe another lissun could supply the passage to the Gunroom?

Claude, enlisted for drink


From: Batrinque@AOL.COM
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 16:44:59 EST
Subject: Re: Group Read: PC - questions (belated. sorry!)

Lois.Du.Toit@GLOMAS.COM writes:

pg 126 boarding netting is described as "taut and trim" : I thought it was desirable for it to be anything BUT taut?>>

Yes, this point has been brought up in the past and the consensus was that POB errred here, and that the boarding netting should be slack.

pg 205 JA says to SM: "I dare say you will reject some of the cripples >and Abraham men" : what are Abraham men? and why might they be candidates for the surgeon to find them unfit for the service?

To quote from Anthony Gary Brown's wonderful PASC: "The reference is to the Abraham ward at the Bedlam Hospital for the Insane in London, supposedly populated by those who only pretended to be mad to facilitate theft and idleness.

Bruce Trinque
41°37'53"N
72°22'51"W


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Subject: Re: M&C a question
Date: Fri, 2 Nov 2001 08:30:50 -0000

Steve Ross wrote:

"I puzzled over this one too, but in the end it seemed fairly plain that the classical reference after which Jack is groping is not a mythological, but a historical one. The only "A" I can think of that fits is the Hellenistic king Antiochus I (324-261 B.C.), who fell in love with his father's young wife Stratonice and wooed her away, along with a portion of his father's kingdom. A very romantic tale told by Plutarch, and to do him justice, Jack can be forgiven for mixing up historical and mythological references; the two have not always been kept totally distinct in the minds of readers (dare I say, present company included?)."

Included indeed!

And on a related note, I should venture to say that most history swiftly becomes mythology ;)

I take it that you were answering this question:

pg 16 JA is groping for a classical allusion "Actaeon, Ajax, Aristides" to express his situation in re his father's remarriage. Dim of me, but I can't come up with the name he's looking for, and this is annoying because it may well settle the vexed question of JA's relationship with the erstwhile dairymaid.

rather than the "thirst" one. If so, the expected light is, indeed, thrown.

Many thanks - ain't this the list of the world?

London Lois
51° 28' 50" N
000° 10' 53" W


From: Linnea
Subject: Re: M&C a question
Date: Fri, 2 Nov 2001 20:53:19 -0500

I thought it was Oedipus, too, when I read it, but have to agree that Antiochus sounds more like it.

Linnea (thrilled to be talking Greek!)


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Date: Fri, 2 Nov 2001 09:56:28 -0000
Subject: Re: Group Read: PC - questions (belated. sorry!) - classics and the dairy-maid

Claude wrote:

"I don't have a copy of MC at hand for reference, but you'll realize that Jack is trying to recall Oedipus. Plus the reference to feet, marriage, fathers, mothers and "not quite the thing"

You are probably thinking of another passage. I should have quoted the full PC (note - not M&C) p16 reference, which is as follows:

SM asks JA: "'Had you not thought of going to Woolhampton - of going to your father's house?'

'Yes ... yes. I mean to give him a visit, of course. But there is my new mother-in-law, you know. And to tell you the truth, I don't think it would exactly answer.' He paused, trying to remember the name of the person, the classical person, who had had such a trying time with his father's second wife; for General Aubrey had recently married his dairy-maid, a fine black-eyed young woman with a moist palm whom Jack knew very well. Actaeon, Ajax, Aristides? He felt that their cases were much alike and that by naming him he would give a subtle hint of the position: but the name would not come, and aftre a while he reverted to the advertisements. 'There's a great deal to be said for somewhere in the neighbourhood of Rainsford ... '"

Oedipus, tangled web though he wove, doesn't seem to fit the case: Gregg suggested Agamemnon - could you elaborate, Gregg? I can't recall anything in the bloodsoaked history of Atreus and his brood that could well illustrate Jack's pickle. My favourite candidate is still Steve's Antiochus I - but am still thinking on it ...

London Lois
51° 28' 50" N
000° 10' 53" W


From: Vanessa Brown
Date: Sun, 4 Nov 2001 00:59:37 EST
Subject: Re: Group Read: PC - questions (belated. sorry!) - classics and the dai...

When Agammemnon is killed by his wife Clytemnestra, she takes a rather sorry consort to her bed (Aegisthus, I think). The children of Agammemnon (Orestes and Electra) are uncomfortable with this situation. So there is an undesirable step-parent in the story. I'm still not sure that's what Jack had in mind, though.

-Vanessa


From: Mary S
Date: Sun, 4 Nov 2001 10:25:15 EST
Subject: Re: Group Read: PC - questions (belated. sorry!) - classics and the dai...

Besides, that's a second -husband-, not a second wife.

a wicked contumelious discontented froward mutinous dog,[FSW1]

Mary S
35° 58' 11" N
86° 48' 57" W


From: Mary S
Date: Fri, 2 Nov 2001 20:59:13 EST
Subject: Re: Group Read: PC - questions (belated. sorry!) - classics and the dai...

Hippolytus had an =extremely= trying time with his father Theseus' second wife, Phaedra. The young man was innocent in the case, but his stepmother's lies cost him his life, as I recall.

Somehow I think this is the situation Jack is dimly recalling - even though "Hippolytus" does not begin with an A.

For intelligence, there is nothing like a keen-witted, handsome woman, [DI 2]

Mary S
35° 58' 11" N
86° 48' 57" W


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Date: Mon, 5 Nov 2001 08:12:03 -0000
Subject: Re: Group Read: PC - questions (belated. sorry!) - classics and the dairymaid

Aha! That's a good 'un! Stepmother in love with stepson and gets stepson into deep trouble - indeed, the deepest possible. Apt enough to bear away the prize, though a little unfair of POB to make us look for classical A's if he meant Hippolytus.

Just as well JA couldn't recall the name if it was Hippolytus: Stephen might have been doubled up with laughter again (PC p263 Norton h/c: "Stephen was doubled in his chair, rocking to and fro, uttering harsh spasmodic squeaks: tears ran down his face") at the thought of Jack in such a chaste role!

PC 263-264 is up there among my favourite passages; never fails to bring a smile to my face.

London Lois, which she's not far from doubled up herself at the thought of Jack as Hippolytus


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 13:11:43 -0000
Subject: Groupread: PC Diana SPOILER WARNING

Despite a search of the archives, I'm in doubt whether or not the following point has already been made. If it has, apologies!

Sensitised in advance by the groupread discussion of SM observing Diana at the opera, I found this passage very striking, as bearing upon that later scene:

pg 57 (Norton h/c) SM writes in his diary about Diana's flirting with him: "My position would be the most humiliating in the world but for the fact that she is not so clever as she thinks; her theory is excellent, but she has not the control of her pride or her other passions to carry it into effect. She is cynical, but not nearly cynical enough, whatever she may say. If she were, I should not be obsessed."

If I read this correctly, he is saying that Diana's coquetry is rendered "innocent" and even pleasing by the fact that it is not totally dishonest: because she does honestly feel something of what she pretends. Should that change, ie should her behaviour become all "sham" with no substance behind it to redeem it, then his feelings would change. Well, isn't this EXACTLY what happens in the opera scene?

London Lois

51° 28' 50" N
000° 10' 53" W


From: Batrinque@AOL.COM
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 16:45:00 EST
Subject: Re: Groupread: PC Diana SPOILER WARNING

Yes -- and a very good point you have made.

Bruce Trinque
41°37'53"N
72°22'51"W


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Date: Mon, 5 Nov 2001 12:17:53 -0000
Subject: Re: Groupread: PC Diana SPOILER WARNING

To this passage can be added the following which explicates the situation:
PC 288 (Norton h/c)
Stephen writes in his diary about Diana (a long and revealing passage): " ... the Diana of the St Vincent ball ... exactly as I knew her then, with none of the vulgarity or loss of looks I see today. As for the loss, that very trifling loss, I applaud it and wish it may continue. She will always have that quality of being more intensely alive, that spirit, dash and courage, that almost ludicrous, infinitely touching unstudied unconscious grace. But if, as she says, her face is her fortune, then she is no longer Croesus; her wealth is diminishing ... it may reach a level at which I am no longer an object of contempt. That, at all events, is my only hope; and hope I must. The vulgarity is new, and it is painful beyond my power of words to express: there was the appearance of it before, even at that very ball, but *then* it was either facetious or the outcome of the received notions of her kind - the reflected vulgarity of others; *now* it is not ... Shall I one day find her making postures, moving with artful negligence? That would destroy me. Vulgarity: how far am I answerable for it? In a relationship of this kind each makes the other, to some extent. No man could give her more opportunity for exercising all her worst side than I."

He is, indeed, fated to see her "making postures, moving with artful negligence" - the death of what he most loved in her: "that ... infinitely touching unstudied unconscious grace".

How typical of Stephen that he considers whether he is not at least partially to blame for the corruption of Diana: and one can't help feeling that, although he tries to dismiss a similar thought at the opera (p 472), he isn't really able to do so. Stephen's seeing an analogy to himself in the miseries of Mr Jones, Polychrest's purser (PC 288-289) - "A man cannot still be asking; and what you ask for is not given free ... a man cannot make a whore of his own wife" - must surely rank as one of the saddest pieces of introspection on Stephen's part in The Canon.

London Lois
51° 28' 50" N
000° 10' 53" W


From: Isabelle Hayes
Date: Mon, 5 Nov 2001 04:20:21 -0500
Subject: Re: Groupread: PC Diana SPOILER WARNING

I like the extremes of what Stephen goes through in his feelings about Diana: at one time he is sure he no longer admires her, that she has lost the qualities that made her special, so that we then are ready for him to not love her any more, and what happens? he goes and forgets all his prior insights about her, and we find that he is still mad about her. This is very like "real life", wherein we all make resolutions about our emotional lives in moments of cool blood, and then, when we're in the midst of our hot blood once again, all our resolve goes by the board.

Also, I'm rereading TYA, which is the book before the one in which Diana dies. I have just read the part where Stephen has been at Woolcombe and had a wonderful reunion with Diana, as well as Brigid, Sophie, etc. Diana once again drives him to the port where he is to catch a ride to Jack's ship, and Stephen and Diana are alone to say goodbye, which they do "as lovers", sadly, unwillingly,etc.

I think this may be the last time he ever sees her. If so, how nice that POB gave them such a lovely last time together.

Isabelle Hayes


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 13:40:30 -0000
Subject: Groupread: PC nature applied to Stephen SPOILER WARNING

I am about to descend into lit-crittery: can't believe it! Makes me think someone has already posted this - if so, apologies.

pg 82-83 (Norton h/c): SM is walking to Mapes to visit Diana. It is night-time: "... far on his right hand the barking of a roe-buck in search of a doe, and on his left the distant screaming of a rabbit with a stoat at work upon it. An owl."

Applicability of all this to SM is too obvious to be coincidence - or is it?
On the right (the lucky side), the buck in search of a doe; the suffering rabbit on the left, the unlucky side. All aspects of what SM experienced in and brought to the relationship with Diana exemplified: the lust, the suffering/dying (for she certainly killed part of Stephen) and the wisdom. Even a friendly wisdom, if owls may in general be said to represent that quality. And all of this the more striking because immediately following this passage, Stephen sees the house "And under the elms his own cob tethered to a hazel-bush."

London Lois
51° 28' 50" N
000° 10' 53" W


From: Gregory Edwards
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 21:11:00 -0800
Subject: Re: Groupread: PC nature applied to Stephen SPOILER WARNING

And elsewhere in PC where Diana invites SM and JA to dinner to dine on Dover Sole, I wonder who is dining on whose soul...

Was Dover Sole then a famous dish?

Greg Edwards, prefering abalone


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 13:53:41 -0000
Subject: Groupread: PC SM and nautical knowledge SMALL SPOILER

There is an instance of unusual nautical knowledge displayed by SM at p198 (Norton h/c) where he writes in his diary: " ... a powerful squadron moving out past Haslar in line ahead, all studdingsails abroad ..."

Not very great knowledge, to be sure, but he recognises the formation and the sails carried ... unwonted expertise that I don't think would occur in the later books of the Canon.

London Lois
51° 28' 50" N
000° 10' 53" W


From: Gregg Germain
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 08:39:00 -0800
Subject: Re: GRP:PC The Cover

Gregg Germain wrote:

I'm doing this from memory (don't have the book with me), but doesn't the ship in the illustration have pitifully low barricades? More like present day HMS Rose than what ships had back then on the weather deck?

To expand:

I located a very small image of the PC cover. First off, that doesn't look like a bow chaser to me. It's really just ahead of the fore-shrouds which puts it just ahead of the foremast.

And from this very small image, it does look to me like the barricades are pitifully short. Perhaps it is not a frigate at all?

Gregg
Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)


From: Don Seltzer
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 11:44:13 -0500
Subject: Re: GRP:PC The Cover

Steve Ross wrote:

Don, thank you for this answer! On the question of the chasers, though, wouldn't this indicate that the ship in question is not the Lively, but the Polychrest? My already-dim memory of what I read a few days ago seems to indicate that the Polychrest was equipped only with carronades, and that Jack had two of them moved to the bow when he needed a chaser.

No, this is not the Polychrest because most of the guns shown are regular cannon on trucks. Only the bowchaser is a carronade, mounted on a slide if you look very carefully.

I don't have the cover in front of me, but what kind of gold epaulette is Jack wearing? A single one on the left shoulder for commander, or shifted to the right side after his promotion and appointment to Lively?

Don Seltzer


From: "C. Mark Smith"
Date: Fri, 2 Nov 2001 06:13:25 -0600
Subject: Re: GRP:PC The Cover

Don, he's wearing an epaulette on BOTH shoulders. Maybe he had a visiting Post Captain or Admiral on board?

Mark


From: Ladyshrike@AOL.COM
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 12:35:38 EST
Subject: Re: GRP:PC The Cover

With me little glass, it appears there's one aboard each shoulder.

Alice, much better with gold than with conservation of momentum (still digesting your answer, Don)


From: Don Seltzer
Subject: Re: GRP:PC The Cover
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 13:29:03 -0500

In which case, Geoff Hunt must have nodded. In 1804, a post captain with less than 3 years seniority, like Jack, would wear just a single epaulette on the right shoulder.

Steve Ross was wondering about the dark shape, just above the smoke. That seems to be the stock of the bower anchor. A similar stock of the sheet anchor is seen further aft.

Don Seltzer


From: Ladyshrike@AOL.COM
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 20:41:53 EST
Subject: Re: GRP:PC The Cover

But I thought Geoff Hunt said that none of the characters actually appear on the cover - that's certainly a statement which would cover his noddings. And why a long time ago, I quit looking for anyone I might recognize.

Alice


From: "Jill H. Bennett"
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2001 11:37:16 -0800
Subject: Re: GRP:PC The Cover

The figure on the cover of PC definitely has an epaulette on each shoulder, but who else could it be, but JA? The discription of transferring the epaulette from one shoulder to the other was so fleeting and minor (the epaulette only seemed of great importance in MC) that it could easily have been overlooked by Geoff Hunt. The one definite picture of JA is on the cover of MC, standing in the stern with one epaulette on the left shoulder. I have them both on my desk with a strong magnifying glass.

Jill
35º 18' 23" N 120º 51' 37" W


From: Don Seltzer
Date: Fri, 2 Nov 2001 14:53:06 -0500
Subject: GRP:PC Other Covers

For those who have never seen it, the cover illustration for the original US Lippincott edition of Post Captain in 1972 seems more appropriate for a romance novel. Jack is portrayed as a slim handsome man with light brown hair with just a hint of a ponytail. Standing on the quarterdeck in the midst of a battle, he is scowling and brandishing his sword at some unseen enemy off-stage to the right. A lovely dark-haired damsel, a shawl draped demurely around her shoulders, is gazing fondly at Jack from the foot of the mainmast. Off in the distance is a two decker ship of the line, her mizzen mast blown to a stump, but all plain sail set on the fore and main masts.

I've also seen an early Collins edition which shows a Victorian-looking lady riding a horse sidesaddle, all dressed in green, I believe.

Don Seltzer


From: Steve Ross
Subject: Re: Tension in great literature (possible vague spoilers)
Date: Fri, 2 Nov 2001 16:21:10 -0600

Nathan the "lurker" wrote:

Is tension necessary in great literature? Perhaps, yes I would agree with that. However, tension and unpredictability can be derived from many sources other than threat of death. Indeed, the Canon is fraught with tension: Stephen's pursuit of Diana, Jack's trials on land, the political intrigue. These are just a *very* few of the unpredictable events in the Canon.

Yes indeed; and after all, as we have just been discussing, there *is* a death towards the end of PC: the "Diana at the Opera" scene.

"Had he had a hand in her death? He shook his head to deny it."

O'Brian said, famously, that M&C was not intended as the start of a series; I seem to recall having read somewhere that he originally didn't intend to continue past PC either. If that is the case, how does it affect the argument in terms of our knowledge/expectation about the future for the main characters?

With apologies for drawing out the PC discussion ... ready to move on

Steve Ross
30° 24' 32"N
91° 05' 28"W


From: Martin Watts
Subject: Re: GRP:PC Barking mad
Date: Sat, 3 Nov 2001 09:30:57 -0000

From "World Wide Words" today:

Someone had enquired about the origin of the phrase "Barking Mad": "Nicholas Shearing of the OED kindly hunted through their database of citations and found that their earliest reference - almost certainly anachronistic, as it's in a historical novel about the Napoleonic wars - is from Patrick O'Brian's Post Captain of 1972: "A thief from the Winchester assizes had gone raving, staring, barking mad off Ushant". "

Martin @ home:
50° 44' 58" N
1° 58' 35" W


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Date: Mon, 5 Nov 2001 13:10:56 -0000
Subject: PC: topping one's boom

Still hirpling along trying to catch up to the group read.

PC p 261 (Norton h/c) Jack gives Babbington orders re going ashore "and desired him to 'top his boom'".

Explanation of topping one's boom, please. I hope it may not be some indelicate reference to Babbington's anatomy/libido - but suspect it to be just some way of saying 'get going asap'.
;)

London Lois
51° 28' 50" N 000° 10' 53" W


From: Adam Quinan
Date: Mon, 5 Nov 2001 21:43:40 -0500
Subject: Re: PC: topping one's boom

When tidying up a boat in harbour, one attaches a topping lift line to the end of the boom to keep it from flopping down on deck in an unseamanlike manner (at least before going to the bar ashore).

Adam Quinan


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Date: Mon, 5 Nov 2001 13:26:26 -0000
Subject: PC : Stephen's abstractedness - SMALL SPOILER

At PC p285 (Norton h/c) we have a wonderful instance of that abstractedness of Stephen's, caused by absolutely focussed concentration, to which Gary drew our attention in the M&C passage (sorry, copy not to hand) where Stephen, on being reminded that he is soaked, ponders for a while and comes up with "It is the rain."

In the present passage, Stephen has gone wandering on the Goodwin sands and been oblivious of the making tide. "Stephen retracted [sic ?retraced] his footsteps towards the stump of a mast protruding from the sand where he had left his boots and stockings, and to his concern he found that these prints emerged fresh and clear directly from the sea. No boots: only spreading water, and one stocking afloat in a little scum a hundred yards away. He reflected for a while upon the phenomenon of the tide, gradually bringing his mind to the surface, and then he deliberately took off his wig, his coat, his neckcloth and his waistcoat."

This whole incident, especially pgs 284-286, with the detailing of the boat's crew's remarks upon and to Stephen, is POB's humour at its best.

London Lois
51° 28' 50" N 000° 10' 53" W


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Date: Wed, 7 Nov 2001 17:32:47 -0000
Subject: PC: Stephen's coach journey with Diana - SMALL SPOILER

Could some listswain who is both kind and intelligent (ie any one of you out there) please enlighten my darkness? In PC pg 323-326 (Norton h/c), Stephen takes Diana to Brighton by chaise and they have a conversation whose import, I think, I am far from fathoming. Stephen catches Diana out in a half-lie about the extent of her acquaintance with Brighton: we hear that JA disapproves of Brighton and, in particular, the Prince of Wales' set, as being dissolute. Diana is quite critical of JA; Stephen speaks of the strains in his friendship with JA. Diana mourns the failure of the dinner party at which Canning, JA and SM were guests and Stephen says of Diana's attitude to Canning at the dinner:

"'The preference was very marked.'

'Oh no, no, Stephen. It was only common civility. Canning was the stranger, and you two were old friends of the house; he had to sit beside me and be attended to ... '"

Diana is at some pains to be unusually nice to Stephen: "'Oh, what is that bird?'" but Stephen is more than a little acerbic in his reception of these pleasantries. Finally, he is almost overcome by the loneliness he feels, but not quite; he dissembles about his plans, mentioning, inter alia, that his next stop will be London.

Diana exclaims: "'... But Brighton is quite out of your way - I had imagined you had to go to Portsmouth when you offered me a lift. Why have you come so far out of your way?'

'The dew-ponds, the wheatears, the pleasure of driving over grass.'

'What a dogged brute you are, Maturin, upon my honour,' said Diana. 'I shall lay out for no more compliments.'

'No, but in all sadness,' said Stephen, 'I like sitting in a chaise with you; above all when you are like this. I could wish this road might go on for ever.'

There was a pause; the chaise was filled with waiting; but he did not go on, and after a moment she said with a forced laugh, 'Well done, Maturin. You are quite a courtier. But I am afraid I can see its end already. There is the sea ... ' "

Finally, Stephen finds she is to stay with Lady Jersey (whose crowd he connects with Canning). Diana is at pains to point out the family connections and the respectability of her hostess. Conversation becomes merely superficial: and the incident ends thus:

"They parted at Lady Jersey's door, having said nothing more, amidst the flurry of servants and baggage: tension, artificial smiles."

Among the questions I have here:
1. "the chaise was filled with waiting" : for what from whom? is Stephen waiting for some equally tender remark from Diana? Might he, given the smallest encouragement, actually have gone on to declare his feelings? And what of Diana? Is she waiting for some more fervent avowal from him, and does she become cruel when this is not forthcoming? Or, handed what she has been angling for, does she simply play the coquette and withdraw? Or does Stephen give her more than she expected, enough so for her to get "stage fright" and and make a hasty and incidentally cruel withdrawal?
2. am I right in thinking the fruitless wait, rather than Lady Jersey's crowd with its implication of Canning (and possibly rakishness), is what drove them to the "tension, artificial smiles"?
3. what is the significance for all the conversation that follows of Diana's having refused Stephen's conversational gambit about his friendship with JA?

London Lois wondering whether she's just having a bad brain day or whether this passage is really unusually elliptical ...


From: Mary Arndt
Date: Wed Nov 07 2001 - 13:32:26 EST
Subject: PC: Stephen's coach journey with Diana - SMALL SPOILER

Lois Anne du Toit wrote:

Among the questions I have here: 1. "the chaise was filled with waiting" : for what from whom? is Stephen waiting for some equally tender remark from Diana? Might he, given the smallest encouragement, actually have gone on to declare his feelings? And what of Diana? Is she waiting for some more fervent avowal from him, and does she become cruel when this is not forthcoming? Or, handed what she has been angling for, does she simply play the coquette and withdraw? Or does Stephen give her more than she expected, enough so for her to get "stage fright" and and make a hasty and incidentally cruel withdrawal?

I have not reread PC for sometime, so I may not still remember properly, but I always thought of this passage as "The Great Passage of Missed Opportunities". I imagined at this point that Stephen really wanted to ask Diana to marry him, but was still much too afraid that she would turn him down and that he would not be able to bear it. Diana, for her part, had had a taste of Jack and Canning and Mrs Williams and the Teapot and was starting to think that maybe Stephen was a good choice after all. But she couldn't quite bring herself to say it either. At this point, they each required the other to make the move, and unfortunately, they were both too bruised by their pasts and their personalities to proceed. If either of them could have gone past pride to say what was really on their minds, the impasse might have been broken, they might have lived happily ever after, and there would have been a lot of tension and plot lines missing from the rest of the canon. But neither was able to clear that self imposed hurdle and so they went their separate ways, causing themselves and each other great unhappiness.

2. am I right in thinking the fruitless wait, rather than Lady Jersey's crowd with its implication of Canning (and possibly rakishness), is what drove them to the "tension, artificial smiles"?

I think you are.

3. what is the significance for all the conversation that follows of Diana's having refused Stephen's conversational gambit about his friendship with JA?

I am not sure I understand your question, but I thought most of the conversation was of the stilted type people might engage in when they are trying to pretend that they do not care about the conversation; when they are trying to convince themselves that it doesn't matter a bit; when they are not suceeding very well at their self deception. When they are trying to talk about everything except what they really want to talk about.

"Mother of thyme, crushed by our carriage wheels", says Stephen. That wasn't all that was crushed. The Golden Opportunity was stomped on too.

Mary A


From: Ray McPherson
Date: Wed, 7 Nov 2001 17:23:22 -0800
Subject: Re: PC: Stephen's coach journey with Diana - SMALL SPOILER

I've always felt that one of the things that kept Stephen and Diana apart at this point was that they both had/have a relationship with Jack.

Ray McP


A POB Question: Diana
From: Bob Saldeen (bs@BS.NU)
Date: Thu Nov 08 2001 - 11:32:22 EST

How is Diana's last name pronounced?

Is it, could it have been, anglicized?

Bob, ignorant in French except for food and kissing


From: Gerry Strey (gestrey@MAIL.SHSW.WISC.EDU)
Date: Thu Nov 08 2001 - 12:06:00 EST
Subject: A POB Question: Diana

Well, my Midwestern mental ear hears it as VILL-yers.

Gerry Strey
Madison, Wisconsin


From: William Nyden
Subject: Re: A POB Question: Diana
Date: Thu, 8 Nov 2001 14:20:19 -0800

Tull pronounces it "VILL-ers" -- the second i is elided.

Bill Nyden
a Rose by another name
37° 25' 15" N 122° 04' 57" W


From: Stephen Chambers
Date: Fri, 9 Nov 2001 02:26:28 -0000
Subject: Re: A POB Question: Diana

I've always thought of it pronounced as it is spelt (to me) - Villyers

Stephen Chambers
50° 48' 38" N 01° 09' 15" W
Approx. 180 inches above sea level
When the pin is pulled Mr Grenade is no longer our friend.


From: Dan Reed (danreed@SYMPATICO.CA)
Date: Thu Nov 08 2001 - 21:31:49 EST
Subject: A POB Question: Diana

Assuming the origin is French - they would pronounce it Vill - Yay. The Limeys would pronounce it Vill - Ears


From: Stephen Chambers
Date: Fri, 9 Nov 2001 02:53:50 -0000
Subject: Re: A POB Question: Diana

Well I am a Limey and your phoneticism s pretty much the same as mine. :-)

Stephen Chambers
50° 48' 38" N 01° 09' 15" W


From: DJONES (DJONES01@DEMJ.FREESERVE.CO.UK)
Date: Fri Nov 09 2001 - 16:17:33 EST
Subject: A POB Question: Diana

I always imagine Stephen and Jack pronouncing it in the anglicised form - Villyers. But how would Diana herself pronounce it? I'm not sure. Would there have been some kind of social kudos in having a name with French origins, some romantic connotations perhaps, or was it to be played down in times of war against France?

For myself, I can't hear the French pronunciation without thinking of the Metro station in Paris, bringing back happy memories of working at the OECD. Crossing over to another thread - lunch breaks ? an hour and a half at least!

Elaine Jones
Walsall, England
52°36'01" N 1°55'46" W


From: Adam Quinan (adam.quinan@HOME.COM)
Date: Fri Nov 09 2001 - 21:15:23 EST
Subject: A POB Question: Diana

Villiers is a well established English name pronounced in an English style as Vill-yers. George Villiers, the 1st Duke of Buckingham (1592-1628) did feature in Dumas' The Three Musketeers.

Adam Quinan
'Grab a chance and you won't be sorry for a might-have-been'
Commander Ted Walker R.N.
Somewhere around 43° 46' 21"N, 79° 22' 51"W


From: Al Revzin
Date: Thu, 22 Nov 2001 20:44:59 -0700
Subject: Back to Post Captain --- & Characters.

Post Captain was an interesting exercise in a writer's working out decisions about his characters.

In any series of books, or Saga, the author(s) can use perhaps three ways to deal with the leading characters. These are, to grossly oversimplify:

1. Hornblower: all of the lead characters (Hornblower, Bush, Brown, Lady Barbara) remain more or less "in character" for the entire series. The interest lies, in part, in how these fixed characters respond to different situations;

2. Sherlock Holmes: Holmes' character remains constant, but Watson, the occasional Mrs. Watson, Mrs. Hudson and even Lestrade vary substantially as the demands of the stories dictate;

3. Poirot: Dame Agatha varies the characters of /everyone/ according to the visions presented to her in the bathtub.

I think that POB was, in PC, trying to decide on which model to adopt. He finally chose, I believe, a variant of Conan Doyle's structure. Jack, most of the Naval personnel and Sophie remain fairly constant over the Saga. If the story demands different "constant" characters, POB drops some people out (Rev. Martin) and introduces others (Dil). OTOH, Maturin's and Diana's characters vary quite wildly, depending on POB's ideas while writing.

Thus, the characters of Diana and Maturin /are/ complex, confusing and unbelievable, to me, because POB varies them, book to book or even within a book, as the story in his mind demands --- there is no "standard" Stephen or Diana.

So, as I begin each book again, I pretend that the Stephen and Diana in that book are completely different people than the characters of those names in the preceding books. This seems to make both characters more ---- acceptable, or real, to me.

Cheers

Al Revzin
I trust that no Lister over-ate excessively this Thanksgiving


From: Steven K Ross
Date: Fri, 23 Nov 2001 08:08:49 -0600
Subject: The Dread Clothing Theory Strikes Again! WAS Re: [POB] Back to Post Captain --- & Characters.

Al Revzin Wrote:

Jack, most of the Naval personnel and Sophie remain fairly constant over the Saga. If the story demands different "constant" characters, POB drops some people out (Rev. Martin) and introduces others (Dil). OTOH, Maturin's and Diana's characters vary quite wildly, depending on POB's ideas while writing.

Thus, the characters of Diana and Maturin /are/ complex, confusing and unbelievable, to me, because POB varies them, book to book or even within a book, as the story in his mind demands --- there is no "standard" Stephen or Diana.

Very insightful! I hadn't thought of it this way, but it does fit into something I have been thinking about, after having first sprained my brain trying to puzzle out the symbolism of Stephen's different states of dress in HMSS: By contrast with Stephen's ambiguities, Jack is much more black-and-white. As far as his clothing is concerned, he is either fully dressed or stark naked (waking Stephen on deck ready to go swimming) . . . never anywhere in between, though his "full dress" can be either formal or informal.

I trust that no Lister over-ate excessively this Thanksgiving.

Thanks . . . I over-ate only moderately; but I did indeed over-eat. Then I did it again.

Steve Ross


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Date: Wed, 28 Nov 2001 08:13:26 -0000
Subject: PC and HMSS - surprising error by POB

References to Norton h/c
In PC p426 and HMSS p46 there are statements that HMS Orion blew up at the battle of the Nile whereas we all know it was the French flagship L'Orient. The former is in a passage of direct speech by JA: if intended to be a howler, it's an ill-chosen one, imo, a mistake one simply cannot imagine JA making. The latter, though referring to JA's memories, is not direct speech.

I find this basic mistake (like the latitude one) disquieting: I take a lot on trust from POB.

Am also fairly amazed that this stuff hasn't been corrected in these recently published editions.

London Lois which she's wondering if she should just masthead herself without waiting for the axe to fall ;)

51° 28' 50" N 000° 10' 53" W


From: Bill Nyden (w.a.nyden@WORLDNET.ATT.NET)
Date: Wed Nov 28 2001 - 10:21:09 EST
Subject: PC and HMSS - surprising error by POB

The latitude-longitude confusion was recognized long ago. When it was pointed out to O'Brian, his response was "Oh, I'm left-handed."

No explanation for the "Orion", though maybe it was a matter of an English mispronunciation of the French "Orient."

Bill Nyden
a Rose by another name at Home
37° 23' 28" N 122° 04' 09" W


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Date: Thu, 29 Nov 2001 07:55:14 -0000
Subject: Re: PC and HMSS - surprising error by POB

Seems unlikely that "Orient" would trip even JA's tongue ... and then there's the question of the HMSS passage which isn't direct speech. However, my wits seem more than usually ahoo this morning, so I've probably misunderstood you - sorry!

London Lois
51° 28' 50" N 000° 10' 53" W


From: martin_sj_watts@lineone.net
Date: Thu Nov 29 2001 - 13:43:10 EST
Subject: PC and HMSS - surprising error by POB

I have checked my Harper Collins paperback of PC and on p426 it definitely say "the L'Orient".

Martin @ home with email problems:
50° 44' 58" N
1° 58' 35" W


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Date: Thu, 29 Nov 2001 07:59:36 -0000
Subject: Re: PC and HMSS - surprising error by POB

Martin! how fascinating! so was the error in POB's manuscript and was typesetting of the Norton editions done from POB's manuscripts rather than from the Harper Collins eds? Or did some benighted Norton copy editor introduce the error?

London Lois
51° 28' 50" N 000° 10' 53" W


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Date: Wed, 28 Nov 2001 09:05:06 -0000
Subject: PC: some questions/comments

References to Norton h/c ed.

1. Questions:

p332 SM reflects upon immediate past events: "He had been much caressed at the Admiralty; a very civil, acute, intelligent old gentleman called in from the Foreign Office had said the most obliging things ... " Do we know who this was?

The JA/SM duel: at what point is it actually, formally called off - or isn't it? It just, kind of, sorta, vanishes ... nearest I can find is p384 at the end of the Chaulieu-Fanciulla exploit where JA stands watching poor Polychrest sink and: "'Come, brother," said Stephen in his ear, very like a dream. 'Come below. You must come below - here is too much blood altogether. Below, below. Here, Bonden, carry him with me.'" Sorry for this question - I'm not the sharpest scalpel in the sickbay.

2. Comments: p 331: SM is riding through Aragon: "A shower on the Maladetta, and everywhere the scent of thyme ... 'My mind is too confused for anything but direct action,' he said ... "
Another instance of SM haunted by unhappy memories/thoughts conjured up by scent: in this case (at least, I like to think so), the sad journey to Portsmouth with Diana (pp 323ff) " ... 'Do you think I may ask what this delightful smell is without being abused?' 'Thyme,' said Stephen absently. 'Mother of thyme, crushed by our carriage-wheels.'" (p325)

p. 333: "[Stephen] saw Heneage Dundas stop on the pavement outside, shade his eyes, and peer in through the window, evidently looking for a friend. His nose came into direct contact with the glass, and its tip flattened into a pale disc. 'Not unlike the foot of a gasteropod,' observed Stephen, and when he had considered its loss of superficial circulation for a while he attracted Dundas's attention, beckoning him in and offering him a cup of tea and a piece of muffin."
What quintessential POBian genius: a tiny incident adds volumes to the characterisation of SM and sets a gentle smile on my face.

The JA/SM duel: the tame evanescing of this duel which has so occupied centre stage with reactions to it from so many quarters down to the likes of Lakey and Plaice, leaves a bit of a blank feeling, a sense of being let down, almost of POB copping out of a very tricky situation: JA has lost Diana to Canning and knows the duel isn't worth fighting; but can't withdraw because of the dictates of honour and courage: SM stands revealed as a "deadly old file" and he too refuses to withdraw: hmmm. Will both parties delope? too blah. How about friends' intervention with the loading of the pistols? nope, done already by CSF. I can't imagine what a satisfactory outcome would have been, but a mere blank leaves rather the taste of those long-ago serial adventures where one episode ends with the hero chained in a cellar with poison gas seeping in and, probably, water rising as well, and the next begins with "Freeing himself in a single bound, he battered down the door and escaped."

London Lois
51° 28' 50" N 000° 10' 53" W


From: Bob Kegel
Date: Wed, 28 Nov 2001 19:10:08 -0800
Subject: Re: PC: some questions/comments

Lois wrote:

The JA/SM duel: at what point is it actually, formally called off - or isn't it? It just, kind of, sorta, vanishes ...

I think the matter is laid to rest when Stephen special status with the Admiralty is revealed to Jack:

"I am requested and directed to avail myself of the counsels and advice of S. Maturin, esquire, MD etc., etc., appointed pro hac vice a captain in the Royal Navy his knowledge and discretion.'
'It is possible that you may be required to undertake some negotiations, and that I may be of use in them.'
'Well, I must be discreet myself, I find,' said Jack, sitting down and looking wonderingly at Stephen. 'But you did say. . .'
'Now listen, Jack, will you? I am somewhat given to lying: my occasions require it from time to time. But I do not choose to have any man alive tell me of it.'
'Oh no, no, no,' cried Jack. 'I should never dream of doing such a thing. Not,' he added, recollecting himself and blushing, 'not when I am in my right mind. Quite apart from my love for you, it is far, far too dangerous. Hush: mum's the word. Tace is the Latin for a candle. I quite understand - am amazed I did not smoke it before: what a deep old file you are. But I twig it now.'
'Do you, my dear? Bless you.' "

I take this as Stephen's apology - he had in fact lied to Jack - and Jack's acceptance.

Bob Kegel
46°59'18.661"N 123°49'29.827"W


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Date: Thu, 29 Nov 2001 11:41:52 -0000
Subject: Re: PC: some questions/comments

aha! thank you, Bob, I find that eminently satisfactory - the feeling is not unlike having some kind friend finally scratch the itch in that unreachable part of one's back ... It hangs together with the reconciliation when Polychrest sank and concludes that process beautifully.
THFTL*

London Lois
51° 28' 50" N 000° 10' 53" W

*thank heavens for the List


From: Mary S
Date: Thu Nov 29 2001 - 17:28:56 EST
Subject: PC: some questions/comments

Bob Kegel wrote:

Tace is the Latin for a candle.

I've never figured out what expression Jack is thinking of and mangling, here. Tace being Latin for "be silent," but what do candles have to do with it?

A sad, brutish grobian, [IM, p45]

Mary S
35° 58' 11" N
86° 48' 57" W


From: Peter Mackay (peter.mackay@BIGPOND.COM)
Date: Thu Nov 29 2001 - 17:36:08 EST
Subject: PC: some questions/comments

Perhaps he's thinking of candlestine?

Cheers, Peter


From: Adam Quinan
Date: Thu Nov 29 2001 - 22:06:19 EST
Subject: PC: some questions/comments

Actually it is an assumption that the intended hearer is able to understand Latin but an eavesdropper or servant will not know that Tace is the Latin for be quiet not candle. Jack would use it when one of his companions was mentioning matters which should not be spoken of openly. A similar idiom was to use the French phrase "pas devant les domestiques". (or les enfants) Only works with uneducated servants and children. What a problem our children's French immersion schooling has caused us. They now comment nastily on our accents, vocabulary and generally are highly amused or embarrassed by our attempts to speak French.


From: Mary S
Date: Fri Nov 30 2001 - 10:48:52 EST
Re: PC: some questions/comments

This question was handled in the Archives... way back in 1996!

Always Google before speaking is the moral, I suppose.

http://mat.gsia. cmu.edu/POB/APR96/0634.html

Brief excerpt

'Colloquial 1688: (Shadwell): I took him up with my old repartee;"Peace" said I, "Tace is Latin for a candle!" '

It also occurs in the works of Swift, Fielding and Scott.

So it is not Jack making up something, but an expression whose confusion is inherent in its original use. Presumably the uneducated would not "get" it, but the educated would know that the main point was in the word "Tace!" iow "shut up."

Deeply, obstinately ignorant, self-opinionated, and ill-informed,

Mary S
35° 58' 11" N
86° 48' 57" W


From: Steve Ross
Date: Wed, 28 Nov 2001 11:41:24 -0600
Subject: The Dropping of the Duel, the Archives, and the Aubrey/Maturin Trilogy (was Re: [POB] PC: some questions/comments

Susan wrote:

The main page is:

http://jfinnera.www1.50megs.com/pob.html

etc. ...
Thank you Susan; I now have that safely bookmarked. On checking the PC group discussion I find there was little mention of the duel or discussion of why it was dropped the way it was. But that may be because it *had* been discussed, fairly recently; the Archives show this question having been raised as recently as October 2000 (and as early as 1996). In sum, the sense of the group seems to be that Jack and Stephen tacitly agreed to let the issue drop [although some lissuns seem to think that, for form's sake, Jack must have given some sort of apology off-stage]. In the course of a battle scene, Stephen urges Jack to come below, with the significant words, "here is too much blood altogether." So, after having been unable (because of the press of events) to carry out their original plan to duel, S & J find their relationship has developed to a point that it would be unthinkable to duel at all.

All this speculation, however, helps us understand only why the characters ended up not trying to shoot one another. It still doesn't answer Lois' *original* question, which was (IIRC) why O'Brian wrote it this way. It seems like an unsatisfying loose end, at first. But maybe we can interpret it differently? Could it not be part of O'Brian's ingenious subtlety to "show" us, rather than "tell" us, how the two men's relationship has developed here? Very different from the proposed duel near the very beginning of the Canon, where Jack is forced to deliver a formal (and somewhat stiff) apology to remain on speaking terms with Maturin! As often, Charlezzz (in the Archives) showed the way: he pointed out how PO'B signals the evolution in their relationship, by having Stephen address Jack as "brother" at the critical point.

One more point (here I am going out on a limb again): I wonder if the mention of dueling in M&C, PC, *and* HMSS might not be an intentional unifying theme that sets off these books as a sort of trilogy (clearly they are separated in more than one way from the other books in the series). We have already talked about the many ways in which O'Brian signals the moral ambiguity of Stephen's duel with Canning. If I am right that Stephen's "moral crisis" is the major (or one of the major) theme(s) in HMSS, does O'Brian want us to think that, symbolically, by killing Canning Stephen killed himself or part of himself (after all, he did talk about how the two men were similar, both being religious/ethnic outsiders, etc.)? Here again Stephen's recital of Vergil's Aeneid may be relevant: in the height of his delirium, he quotes the line about how Aeneas impulsively slew Turnus. For many critics, this has been seen as Aeneas symbolically killing himself, or at least his "old" self.

I'll spare you any more tortured imaginings. BTW I did have fun browsing the archives; I even found this old entry from 1998, which today's lissuns might still enjoy, though it is a little dated:

http://mat.gsia.cmu.edu/POB/MAY0198/0588.html

Have fun, all.

a complacent pragmatical worldly fellow (HMSS p. 196) . . .

Steve Ross
30° 24' 32"N
91° 05' 28"W


From: Steve Ross
Date: Thu, 29 Nov 2001 09:38:03 -0600
Subject: Cicero; the Duel; was Re: [POB] The Nelson Question

You do recall very correctly, and yes, it was Cicero I meant. I didn't say the cases were exactly congruent, though; just that his treatment of the prisoners was controversial.

On the duel question (PC): I too find Bob's proposal helpful (Stephen revealing his special status and professional need to lie, serving as a kind of apology to Jack). In that very conversation, however, POB has Jack make reference to 'my love for you.' This tells me that I and Charlezzzz may still be right in thinking that what really stopped them from dueling was their new status as brothers. And I stand by my suggestions in my post of yesterday (who says we're not competitive?).

Steve Ross, A.K.A. Lord Clonfert
30° 24' 32"N
91° 05' 28"W


From: Ted
Sent: Saturday, August 17, 2002 10:46 PM
Subject: A few Thoughts on 'Post Captain' -SPOILERS- (100% POB)

I have been re-re-re reading 'Post Captain', mainly in spare moments on pilot boat ADOLPHUS & on my own little 'Surprise' at sea. I had a few thoughts Lissuns might find interesting, but first a major SPOILER space... (ie, be careful if you are yet to read the book folks).

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'Post Captain' thoughts: In this book POB has Jack Aubrey at his most stupid. IMHO in no other book is Jack shown as so deeply stupid -by land- immature & lacking in insight. Of course it is only the second book & Jack is not yet fully developed as a character. Certainly, in this book, he is less developed, as a character, than Stephen Maturin. In fact this is, to me, much more a book about Stephen than Jack.

My own impression is that both Jack & Stephen are certainly 'sleeping' with the awful Diana at different stages of this book. She really is a most horrible character: Cold, hard, manipulative, cruel, calculating & faithless, all together a bad lot. POB uses the 'sweet & innocent' & even slightly cloying, Sophie as a very clear contrast here. Bluff, what you see is what you get, Jack Aubrey is no kind of match for Diana. Stephen Maturin, intelligent, complicated, insightful, capable of being far, far, more ruthless than Jack, might be. In a sense of course both Stephen & Diana are far more 'damaged goods' than basically happy Jack & Sophie.

One very neat thing did strike me in this reading of the book for the first time. When Jack & Stephen's rivalry for Diana is at its height, Stephen shows, for the first time, that he is 'a man of blood' has fought many duels & is a 'deadly old file' with a pistol & sword. Jack is surprised. Just afterwards Jack jumps into the sea & saves one of his drowning sailors. Stephen is surprised & especially so, at the fact that Jack thinks so little of his life saving efforts. A neat revolving of the characters normal roles of warrior & life saver. Yet, to me Stephen is much more a killer, than Jack, despite the fact that Jacks job is killing his nations enemies & Stephen's is, at least ostensibly, saving lives as a Doctor.

Now POB was, IMHO, almost certainly something of a snob. He admired upper class society, at least to a point, yet he was not, for assorted reasons of finance -for many years- background & action, a true member of it. I suppose Jack & Sophie are fine examples of traditional 'society', while Stephen & Diana are examples of people, well brought up & finely mannered but not really of society & on the fringes of it, though more so in Stephen's case since he is both a bastard & a catholic with a past.

Now I wonder where POB got his inspiration for the awful Diana...

Ted


From: Pete the Surgeons Mate
Sent: Saturday, August 17, 2002 11:38 PM
Subject: Re: A few Thoughts on 'Post Captain' -SPOILERS- (100% POB)

Now I wonder where POB got his inspiration for the awful Diana...

He looked into his own heart.

I hadn't thought much about the role reversal before, but you are right. Stephen can be a coldly brutal lifetaker, while Jack can save them without thought. Remember how he leapt into the sea after his friend? That was set up many books in advance.


From: Ted
Sent: Saturday, August 17, 2002 11:51 PM
Subject: Re: A few Thoughts on 'Post Captain' -SPOILERS- (100% POB)

He looked into his own heart.

Yes, I suppose it must have been partly, at least, that.

Ted


From: Batrinque@AOL.COM
Sent: Friday, October 25, 2002 9:17 PM
Subject: Post Captain -- A Failure to Communicate

SPOILERS BELOW

Listening to the unabridged Patrick Tull audiobook recording of "Post Captain" (this must be at least my eighth time through the novel) I have been struck by the recurring theme of communication barriers which so thoroughly dominate the central part of the book. Again and again, characters are constrained from communicating in any effective way. Jack Aubrey of course is by the custom of the servicisolated from his officers aboard the cursed Polychrest; at dinner no officer may initiate conversation and their replies to the captain's words are confined to bland agreement. Although Jack observes his first lieutenant's harsh punishments for petty offenses, he feels unable to openly rebuke him for fear of undermining his authority. Jack cannot reveal the depth of his emotions to Sophie once his fortune is lost because she has ten thousand pounds and society would universally disapprove. Sophie is unable to reveal her feelings because society simply does not permit a single woman to do so. Heneage Dundas cannot convince Jack of the foolishness of his actions because Dundas was so long junior to Jack. Diana and Stephen maintain a brittle superficiality of words between themselves because Stephen considers himself inadequate and because Diana ... well, because Diana is Diana. Stephen and Jack can no longer open themselves to one another because of mutual jealousy over Diana. Even Canning cannot explicitly offer Jack command of a privateer because this would breach etiquette.

The obvious and conventional literary sequel to all this would be the author's subsequent pitch that establishing communication brings peace and h appiness. But Patrick O'Brian was seldom obvious or conventional. When Stephen Maturin at the behest of Dundas truly speaks his mind to warn Jack of his folly, near disaster results: a threatened duel between Jack and Stephen. Only the intervention of external events defuses the tension and allows the reestablishment of free and easy communication (within O'Brianesque limits, of course). The apparent moral is that communication is not a means to an end, but instead a consequence of exterior existence. And that is, I think, a thread which runs through O'Brian's novels: real communication is a fragile blossom at best, futile to attempt through direct effort, a gift of blind circumstance alone. Perhaps no man is an island, but in the world created by Patrick O'Brian, each man is surely a peninsula approached only by a very narrow and uncertain causeway.

Bruce Trinque
41°37'52"N 72°22'29"W


From: Randal Allred
Sent: Friday, October 25, 2002 10:19 PM
Subject: Re: Post Captain -- A Failure to Communicate

Bravo! Well said, Bruce.

In addition, there is a profound irony that music succeeds where words fail. I am just my first time through the books, alas, and am in the Ionian Mission. So, an example from this novel may suffice: Just before an action (or threatened action) SM and JA have a bit of music in the cabin, with no sheet music--Stephen plays a riff (sorry for the contemp California jargon here--the fault of my upbringing) on the cello, which Jack answers on the fiddle, and they engage in a Dueling Viols kind of question and answer with variations on a theme, "conversing" (the word used by POB) by music. They do this at various times in the books I have read so far (and sometimes the music is a debate or duel rather than a conversation), and this wordless communion between kindred spirits somehow expresses subtler matters that the two of them could never share in language, inept and awkward as human language is in the best of times. So many times, language fails them, even at the most crucial times.

I realize that I am observing nothing new, and you more experienced Man-o-War's men (and women) amongst the Lissuns have no doubt noted this long before now. But it helps me to set it down.

Randal
O'ahu


From: Alec O' Flaherty
Sent: Saturday, October 26, 2002 5:37 AM
Subject: Re: Post Captain -- A Failure to Communicate

Thanks Bruce for that brilliantly insightful piece -and as you say ~O Brian 'was seldom obvious or conventional'. Isn't it ironic that at a time when their friendship is at its lowest ebb, that Stephen is compelled to communicate the 'mutiny' information to Jack.

By the way we have often remarked how O Brian uses animals/insects as metaphors of human behaviour/feelings in his books. In Chapter 3 of Post Captain-the cockfight

'The owners of the birds set them to the ring, clasping them just so and whispering close to their proud close-cropped heads. The cocks stalked out on their toes, glancing sideways, circling before they closed.

SNIP-

:saw his shadow and lurched in to get his death wound. Still he would not die; he stood with the spurs labouring in his back until the mere weight of his exhausted opponent bore him dow -an opponent too cruelly lacerated ro rise and crow.'

I wonder if this was a 'premonition' of the upcoming potential duel between the ' proud heads' of Jack and Stephen. And also a view on the ultimate futility of it?

alec


From: Alec O' Flaherty
Sent: Saturday, October 26, 2002 5:55 AM
Subject: Re: Post Captain -- A Failure to Communicate

By the way -a thought that has struck me since I posted the above. In the cockfight'scene' is the following line-

'one eye gone and streaming blood'

The resolution of the 'Jack/Stephen conflict'-comes with Stephen's words-

'Come below. You must come below-here is too much blood altogether. Below,below. Here Bonden, carry him with me.'

Just a thought.

alec


From: Batrinque@AOL.COM
Sent: Saturday, October 26, 2002 8:38 AM
Subject: Re: Post Captain -- A Failure to Communicate

Thanks for reminding me of the cock fight scene, Alec. When recently listening to that episode, I too felt this was an example of POB's technique of making a parallel commentary on plot events through the use of animal observations.

Bruce Trinque
41°37'52"N 72°22'29"W


From: Susan Wenger
Sent: Saturday, October 26, 2002 7:43 AM
Subject: Re: Post Captain -- A Failure to Communicate

What a JOY it is to read gunroom this morning! Kudos to Bruce, Randal and Alec for their great insights into "Post Captain."

I'd like to tail onto Bruce's thesis that "a failure to communicate" is the theme of this book. O'Brian spells this out at least twice in "Post Captain:"

One, on the failure of words in communication:

page 287: "Smell is of all senses by far the most evocative: perhaps because we have no vocabulary for it - nothing but a few poverty-stricken approximations to describe the whole vast complexity of odour - and therefore the scent, unnamed and unnamable, remains pure of association; it cannot be called upon again and again, and blunted, by the use of a word; and so it strikes afresh every time, bringing with it all the circumstances of its first perception."

The second, on page 470:

A foolish German had said that man thought in words. It was totally false; a pe5rnicious doctrine; the thought flashed into being in a hundred simultaneous forms, with a thousand associations, and the speaking mind selected one, forming it grossly into the inadequate symbols of words, inadequate because common to disparate situations - admitted to be inadequate for vast regions of expression, since for them there were the parallel languages of music and painting. Words were not called for in many or indeed most forms of thought: Mozart certainly thought in terms of music. He himself at this moment was thinking in terms of scent."

So: I agree with Alec's insight about the role of music, and I think that we are onto the very key to this book. Well done, gentlemen!

- Susan


From: Charles Munoz
Sent: Saturday, October 26, 2002 9:16 AM
Subject: Re: Post Captain -- A Failure to Communicate

Susan Wenger quoted POB's writerly comments on the theme of inadequate communication...

A foolish German had said that man thought in words. It was totally false; a pernicious doctrine; the thought flashed into being in a hundred simultaneous forms, with a thousand associations, and the speaking mind selected one, forming it grossly into the inadequate symbols of words

TS Eliot puts similar thoughts into the mind of Apeneck Sweeney...

Death or life or life or death
Death is life and life is death
I gotta use words when I talk to you
But if you understand or if you dont
That¹s nothing to me and nothing to you
We all gotta do what we gotta do

from ³Sweeney Agonistes.²

Charlezzzzz


From: Alec O' Flaherty
Sent: Saturday, October 26, 2002 10:28 AM
Subject: Re: Post Captain -- A Failure to Communicate

Susan wrote

So: I agree with Alec's insight about the role of music, and I think that we are onto the very key to this book. Well done, gentlemen!

Just to say that that was Randall's insight-much and all as I'd like to claim it!

alec


From: Alec O' Flaherty
Sent: Sunday, October 27, 2002 6:25 AM
Subject: Re: Post Captain -- A Failure to Communicate

Just another thought on the 'communication' theme.

This series of poor/failed communication efforts serves as a backdrop to Jack's handling of the potential mutiny.

Suddenly now though, there is no time for blurred messages or useless noises.

The time for true leadership is here -and cometh the hour, cometh the man. With clear thinking and clear words Jack totally undermines the mutineers.

The fact that this is in such stark contrast to our previous experiences in PC adds to our perception of Jack's stature and sets him apart as a true leader of men (on the seas anyway).

alec


From: Charles Munoz
Sent: Monday, October 28, 2002 9:46 AM
Subject: Re: Post Captain -- A Failure to Communicate

A set of remarkable insights, Bruce. Thankee.

And there's more to be said. Think of the first challenge given and accepted on the first pages of the first book. The insult that leads to the challenge is not given in any words at all: the insult is Maturin's nudge in Jack's ribs during the concert.

And how is the challenge accepted? Not in so many words, but -- in accordance with convention -- by the mere exchange of addresses.

Charlezzzzz, shot rolling


From: Isabelle Hayes
Sent: Monday, October 28, 2002 10:58 AM
Subject: Re: Post Captain -- A Failure to Communicate

Alec O' Flaherty wrote: snip

The resolution of the 'Jack/Stephen conflict'-comes with Stephen's words-

'Come below. You must come below-here is too much blood altogether. Below,below. Here Bonden, carry him with me.'

Only one thing to add, that Stephen calls Jack "brother" while this happens, which salves our hearts.

Isabelle Hayes


From: Ted
Sent: Wednesday, October 30, 2002 1:06 AM
Subject: Re: Post Captain -- A Failure to Communicate

:saw his shadow and lurched in to get his death wound. Still he would not die; he stood with the spurs labouring in his back until the mere weight of his exhausted opponent bore him dow -an opponent too cruelly lacerated ro rise and crow.'

I wonder if this was a 'premonition' of the upcoming potential > duel between the ' proud heads' of Jack and Stephen. And also a view on the ultimate futility of it?

And then Jack says something like "... he did not really want to fight."

"He did not, though he was a game bird, to be sure. Why did you bet on him?" Stephen asks Jack.

"I liked him; he had a rolling walk like a sailor. He was not what you would call a wicked, bloody, cock, but once he was in the ring, once he was challenged, he would fight. He was a rare plucked 'un & he went on even when there was no hope at all. I am not sorry I backed him: Should do it again..."

This to me says much of Jack Aubreys character: both his liking of the game bird made to fight & his desire to back such a character.

One thing Jack & Stephen do share is courage & love of courage.

Ted


From: Astrid Bear
Sent: Wednesday, October 30, 2002 12:39 PM
Subject: Re: Post Captain -- A Failure to Communicate

Cockfighting is still around to a limnited extent in the US. Oklahoma has a ballot measure coming up that would outlaw it, and there's great hue and cry in some wuarters over the potential disappeance of this manly sport. Animals rights groups are of course appalled at such activities, but in Oklahoma, those clever good ol'boys figgured out how to shut them up, by gum! Apparently the Oklahoma Supreme Court managed to rule (sometime in the early 1960s) that chickens aren't animals, and therefore aren't subject to animal cruelty.

Astrid Bear


From: Batrinque@AOL.COM
Sent: Wednesday, October 30, 2002 8:35 PM
Subject: Post Captain - The Colour of Money

MINOR SPOILERS BELOW

Listening to my audiobook recording of "Post Captain" I have found a ... a what? A parallel image? I don't quite know what to call it, and I surely don't know what it signifies, but here it is:

On page 396 of the Norton edition Jack slowly awakens: "Some exquisite dreams: the Magdalene in Queenie's picture saying, 'Why do you not tune your fiddle to orange-tawny, yellow, green and this blue, instead of those old common notes?' It was so obvious: he and Stephen set to their tuning, the 'cello brown and full crimson, and they dashed away in colour along -- such colour! But he could not seize it again; it was fading into no more than words; it no longer made evident, luminous good sense."

And on page 448 Stephen writes in his diary of a concert he had attended in Plymouth: "Curious music, well played, particularly the trumpet: a German composer, one Molter. The music, I believe, had nothing to say, but it provided a pleasant background of 'cellos and woodwinds and allowed the tru mpet to make exquisite sounds -- pure colour tearing through this formal elegance. I grope to define a connection that is half clear to me -- I once thought that this was music, much as I thought that physical grace and style was virtue; or replaced virtue; or was virtue on another plane. But although the music shifted the current of my thoughts for a while, they are back again today, and I have not the spiritual energy to clarify this or any other position."

The colour of music. What is O'Brian playing at here? The connection to Diana in Stephen's jottings is clear enough (the reference to "physical grace and style") but how does this correlate to musical "colour"? Evidently, style is key here, not formal structure. Jazz, if you will, rather than dogged adherence to printed sheet music. And there may be something here which relates back to the playing of the adagio of Hummel's D major sonata by Sophie and Diana -- their very different styles of playing -- earlier in the book. And by Jack, too, later on, playing that same adagio very like Sophie, like a girl, like a sixteen-stone girl, notes true with nothing but platitudes. Does Jack's later dream of coloured music, coming immediately after he is made post, mark his transition from past limitations to new self-command? Or something else?

That's it. Just aimless musing.

Bruce Trinque
41°37'52"N 72°22'29"W


From: John Gosden
Sent: Wednesday, October 30, 2002 9:08 PM
Subject: Re: Post Captain - The Colour of Money

Bruce wrote:

The colour of music.

Which links to another thread - I have in front of me a paperback

"The Colour of Saying"

which is an anthology of verse spoken, mostly in radio broadcasts, by Dylan Thomas. Interestingly, the collection contains none of his own verse. The Introduction is by the two editors, but it quotes many of Thomas' own words:

"Poetry, to a poet, is the most rewarding work in the world. A good poem is a contribution to reality. The world is never the same once a poem has been added to it. A good poem helps to change the shape and significance of the universe, helps to extend everyone's lnowledge of himself and the world around him."

The title comes from one of his own poems:

Once it was in the Colour of Saying
by: Dylan Thomas

Once it was the colour of saying
Soaked my table the uglier side of a hill
With a capsized field where a school sat still
And a black and white patch of girls grew playing;
The gentle seaslides of saying I must undo
That all the charmingly drowned arise to cockcrow and kill.
When I whistled with mitching boys through a reservoir park
Where at night we stoned the cold and cuckoo
Lovers in the dirt of their leafy beds,
The shade of their trees was a word of many shades
And a lamp of lightning for the poor in the dark;
Now my saying shall be my undoing,
And every stone I wind off like a reel.

--
John R. Gosden
7*51'59"N / 98*20'28"E


From: Heather Robertson
Sent: Monday, November 04, 2002 6:22 PM
Subject: Re: Post Captain - The Colour of Money

On page 396 of the Norton edition Jack slowly awakens: "Some exquisite dreams: the Magdalene in Queenie's picture saying, 'Why do you not tune your fiddle to orange-tawny, yellow, green and this blue, instead of those old common notes?' It was so obvious: he and Stephen set to their tuning, the 'cello brown and full crimson, and they dashed away in colour along -- such colour! But he could not seize it again; it was fading into no more than words; it no longer made evident, luminous good sense."

apologies for re-opening a thread so long after the last post; I came across this during an heroic trawl through a week's worth of mail.

"Confusion" of the senses is a medically-documented condition, synesthesia, whereby a person may "hear" a colour, "taste" shapes, etc. A google came up with http://members.tripod.com/TarotCanada/Synesthesia.html for starters.

my humble and ignorant opinion is that syesthetes are able to make connections between their sensory that escape the rest of us; they think outside of the box, in a way; and exploit all the given information fully.

I think this scene shows Jack just briefly grasping a new angle on his position, before being dragged back into his conventional ways of thinking. Did O'Brian know of synesthesia? It's been known for a while, and he may have come across it in his research. It would certainly show genius to think up something so counterintuitive on his own.

I'll stop rambling vaguely now.
Heather


From: Charles Munoz
Sent: Monday, November 04, 2002 8:25 PM
Subject: Re: Post Captain - The Colour of Money

Naturally he did. Is there not a famous poem by Rimbaud, a poem in wch he assigns each vowel a different color, and was not POB a very frenchie for the language?

Voyelles

A noir, E blanc, I rouge, U vert, O bleu: voyelles,
Je dirai quelque jour vos naissances latentes:
A, noir corset velu des mouches éclatantes
Qui bombinent autour des puanteurs cruelles,

Golfes d'ombre; E, candeurs des vapeurs et des tentes,
Lances des glaciers fiers, rois blancs, frissons d'ombelles;
I, pourpres, sang craché, rire des lèvres belles
Dans la colère ou les ivresses pénitentes;

U, cycles, vibrements divins des mers virides,
Paix des pâtis semés d'animaux, paix des rides
Que l'alchimie imprime aux grands fronts studieux;

O, suprême Clairon plein des strideurs étranges,
Silences traversés des [Mondes et des Anges]:

Charlezzzzz


From: Batrinque@AOL.COM
Sent: Monday, November 04, 2002 8:59 PM
Subject: Re: Post Captain - The Colour of Money

By coincidence, in the last few days I read through Alfred Bester's classic science fiction novel "The Stars My Destination" at the climax of which its central character, Gully Foyle, experiences synesthesia.

Bruce Trinque
41°37'52"N 72°22'29"W


From: Stephen Chambers
Sent: Tuesday, November 05, 2002 3:59 PM
Subject: Re: Post Captain - The Colour of Money

The same experience can be had under the influence of drugs. While in hospital pumped up to the eyeballs with morphine I was listening to some CDs. There was one track where a load of violins started up half way through. I kept playing it over and over because I was almost 'hearing in colour' at the time and this gave wonderful sensations over and above anything I would normally get from listening to music.

Stephen Chambers
50° 48' 38"N 01° 09' 15"W
When the pin is pulled, Mr. Grenade is no longer our friend.


From: Martin Watts
Sent: Tuesday, November 05, 2002 5:58 PM
Subject: Re: Post Captain - The Colour of Money

Vladimir Nabokov had synesthesia, as does his son Dmitri. See: http://www.theinfinitemind.com/mind149.htm


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