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H.M.S. Surprise

From: Jerry Shurman
Sent: Sunday, October 28, 2001 12:17 PM
Subject: Groupread: HMSS: Jumping the Gun

Did anyone else find that "Litle shit..." right at the beginning a bit jarring? Especially since -- as we've discussed -- the canon's approach to profanity varies quite a bit...

Also I note Stephen referring to Jack as "the animal," an inferior prototype for the far more delightful "the creature."

-Jerry, nerdily wishing there were radians in the canon after all and wondering whether Charlezzzz has explained the whole Baby as Cacafuego concept to its mother


From: P. Richman
Sent: Friday, November 02, 2001 8:39 AM
Subject: GRPREAD:HMSS:STEPHEN

When Jack rescues Stephen from the rack, Stephen can scarcely breath, but his first priority is the mission: he wants to interrogate the colonel, he formulates the language of the official report "while trying to escape," and he instructs Maragall where to find the French's papers. Courage and strength, by God.


From: Jerry Shurman
Sent: Friday, November 02, 2001 8:50 AM
Subject: Re: GRPREAD:HMSS:STEPHEN

And POB's use of suggestive detail and allusion is especially effective in describing of Stephen's torture and its effects.

Using the Wenger Method (TM), I read the passage where Sophia is present and a vixen screams in the background with new appreciation.

-Jerry


From: Ladyshrike@AOL.COM
Sent: Friday, November 02, 2001 6:13 PM
Subject: GroupRead: HMSS: Great Clanger

On page 8 Norton paperback (can you tell I just started?):

'And Captain Aubrey ... the name is familiar.'

'The son of General Aubrey, my lord,' whispered the secretary.

'Yes, yes. The member for Great Clanger, who made such a furious attack on Mr Addington....'

Great Clanger. A google search reveals some interesting items and people but nothing in the way of a place. In a UK slang dictionary, a "great clanger" is a big mistake. Was Jack's father representing a place called Great Clanger, or is this a euphemism for something else?

And speaking of name tie-ins (with Great Clanger - sort of), if you say Belle Poule out loud, it has a rather nice ring to it. (D'ye smoke it?)

Alice


From: Jbannonsr@AOL.COM
Sent: Friday, November 02, 2001 7:39 PM
Subject: Re: GroupRead: HMSS: Great Clanger

Ouccch- BTW what is a rotten borough?


From: Kerry Webb
Sent: Friday, November 02, 2001 9:26 PM
Subject: Re: GroupRead: HMSS: Great Clanger

According to EB, it's a depopulated election district that retained its original representation. The term was applied by English parliamentary reformers to such constituencies that were maintained by the crown or a patron.

Before the Reform Act of 1832, more than 140 out of 658 seats were in rotten boroughs, 50 of which had fewer than 50 voters.

A Google search on "rotten borough" gives quite a few hits.

Kerry

Kerry Webb
Canberra, Australia http://www.alia.org.au/~kwebb/


From: Susan Wenger
Sent: Saturday, November 03, 2001 5:27 AM
Subject: GroupRead: HMSS: Great Clanger

It's not in Gary Brown's "PASC." Which means the gauntlet is thrown - it's time for a new edition, to include the stuff omitted the first time, such as Great Clanger," and references from "Blue at the Mizzen."

=====
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From: Samuel Bostock
Sent: Saturday, November 03, 2001 6:16 AM
Subject: Re: GroupRead: HMSS: Great Clanger

... and of course the new First Lord makes a clanger regarding Maturin's status as an agent before the assembled civillians, admirals etc...

Sam


From: "Jean A"
Sent: Saturday, November 03, 2001 5:11 PM
Subject: Re: [POB] Moon-pall

GroupRead: HMS Surprise:

On the first page of Chapter five, we discover Stephen sleeping on deck, encased in a bag.

When awakened:

"What is it?" asked Stephen at last, with a bestial snarl.
"Nigh on four bells, sir."
"Well, what of it? Sunday morning, surely to god, and you would be at your holystoning?"
The bag, worn against the moon-pall, stifled his words but not the whining tone of a man jerked from total relaxation and an erotic dream."

Jean A.


From: Jim Biggerstaff
Sent: Saturday, November 03, 2001 9:16 AM
Subject: Re: Moon-pall

From: "Jean A" , Saturday, November 03, 2001 12:11 PM

"The bag, worn against the moon-pall, stifled his words but not the whining tone of a man jerked from total relaxation and an erotic dream."

Could moon-pall be another word for 'dew'?

Jim


From: Ladyshrike@AOL.COM
Sent: Sunday, November 04, 2001 2:48 PM
Subject: GroupRead: HMSS - two observations

On page 30 (Norton paperback), Jack is on the Lively while Hamond is away, representing his Whig interest in Coldbath Fields. Coldbath Fields is a real place.

On page 32 (ditto), Jack refers to the officers in the Lively's gunroom as "slightly Benthamite."

Straightaway to PASC went I, where there is neither a Benthamite nor a Coldbath of any kind to be found. On to Google:

Benthamite: Utilitarianism

From http://cepa.newschool.edu/het/schools/utilitar.htm:

"Although Utilitarianism is often closely associated with Jeremy Bentham, and, more generally, with English philosophical, political and cultural attitudes (as Nietzsche would later jeer, "only the Englishman seeks happiness"), the roots of this political and ethical doctrine are actually in Italy. [snip]

The Benthamite doctrine, perhaps most famously laid out in Bentham's 1789 treatise and updated by John Stuart Mill's 1850 tract, was explicitly opposed to the rationalist Natural Law, Enlightenment and Romanticist-individualist perspectives that yielded up the "metaphysical" concept of "natural". They opposed the concept of "natural rights" as enshrined in political documents such as the 1776 American Declaration of Independence and the 1789 French Declaration of the Rights of Man.

Instead, the utilitarians argued for a more "empirical" social philosophy and a consequentialist set of ethics. They argued that all human action was reducible to the "calculus of pleasure and pain". As these were the only guides for human action, then the utilitarians effectively proposed a restructuring of laws and the implementation of policy propositions which yielded the "greatest happiness to the greatest number of people". They used the concept of "utility" as the measuring rod of happiness, which they believed was comparable across people -- and consequently summable."[snip of more stuff]

Coldbath Fields (much more interesting):

Turns out there's been a prison there for enough time to encompass the time of Hamond. If I read Utilitarianism correctly, this would be quite a contrast to the prison. What's to be made of that juxtaposition?

From http://www.spartacus.schoolnet.co.uk/LONcoldbath.htm:

"There has been a prison at Coldbath Fields since the 17th century. It got its name because in the early days the prison was surrounded by fields near an important well. Coldbath Fields Prison was rebuilt in 1794 and was enlarged during the 19th century. By the time the building was completed, the jail could house over 1,000 prisoners.

Coldbath Fields Prison was a House of Correction which meant it was a jail run by local magistrates and that most of the prisoners served short term sentences. The prison contained men, women and children until 1850 when it was decided to restrict it to male offenders over 17.

In the 19th century Coldbath Fields Prison, like other jails, adopted the Silent System whereby prisoners were forbidden to communicate with each other. Hard Labour was also introduced. The idea being that prisoners should be forced to carry out unproductive work. The illustration below shows two prisoners working a crank to pump water. Those on the tread-wheel for six hours climbed the equivalent of 8,640 feet. Hard Labour was not officially abolished until 1948. However, for many years prisoners had been given more productive work to do in less severe conditions than those experienced in the 19th century."


From: Ray Martin
Sent: Sunday, November 04, 2001 3:02 PM
Subject: Benthamite

A good Jeremy Bentham site is

http://www.ucl.ac.uk/Bentham-Project/info/jb.htm

Wich includes a photo of the old sod's semi-mummified body which sits in a box for all to see at University College London. He had the highest motives, but has much to answer for. Dickens parodied his teachings via Mr Gradgrind in Hard Times (1854).

Cheers!

Ray@TheBay

55:044.17 North
1:48.90 West


From: Gerry Strey
Sent: Monday, November 05, 2001 7:19 AM
Subject: Moonpall

A quick dictionary check under pall suggest several possible interpretations of moonpall: having a gloomy or depressing effect; to lose savor or interest, or (rare) nausea or a qualm. Given the many superstitions related to moonlight or the full moon in particular, I would guess "moonpall" to be a minor depressing, weakening or sickening effect of moolight. It's surprising that the rational and sceptical Stephen should have believed in it, but perhaps this is another example of POB's finding a term he couldn't resist.

Gerry Strey
Madison, Wisconsin


From: Barney Simon
Sent: Monday, November 05, 2001 7:07 AM
Subject: Groupread: HMSS: Religous sects

On page 122, we hear of Harrowby who "was a lay preacher, belonging to some west-country sect...." In other books of the canon, sects and sect members are mentioned again. How did these sects relate to the country as a whole and how have they evolved today?

Barney


From: Barney Simon
Sent: Monday, November 05, 2001 7:07 AM
Subject: Groupread: HMSS; JA and Cochrane

I'm sure it has been discussed here before, but is there a consensus as to POB's need to separate JA and Cochrane on page 123 of my Norton HB:

SA observes: "but no, Cochrane ashore was too flamboyant to be typical, too full of himself, too conscious of his own value, too much affected by that Scotch love of a grievance; and there was that unfortunate title hanging about his neck, a beloved millstone. There was something of Cochrane in Jack, a restless impatience of authority, a strong persuasion of being in the right;...."

and further on page 159, SA thinking of his letters from Sophie, mentions that Mrs. Williams wants her daughter to end up " not in seaside lodgings the other end of England or in Peru;..."

Barney


From: Kerry Webb
Sent: Sunday, November 04, 2001 12:44 PM
Subject: GroupRead: HMSS - In the dark

Early in the book, there's a reference to a glowing compass. Can anyone enlighten me (Gregg?) on how they achieved this? Was phosphorescent paint used in those days?

thanks

Kerry
Kerry Webb
Canberra, Australia http://www.alia.org.au/~kwebb/


From: Gregg Germain
Sent: Monday, November 05, 2001 10:08 AM
Subject: Re: GroupRead: HMSS - In the dark

No phosphorescents.

The binnacle was divided into compartments. the central compartment held the compass; one or both of the compartments to the side held a light source. Candle or oil lamps.

I do believe they had red glass to avoid killing your night vision.


From: Don Seltzer
Sent: Monday, November 05, 2001 8:53 AM
Subject: Re: GroupRead: HMSS - In the dark

Perhaps it is the small oil lamp or candle inside the binnacle which is illuminating the compass and casting the glow.

Don Seltzer


From: Kerry Webb
Sent: Monday, November 05, 2001 1:09 PM
Subject: Re: GroupRead: HMSS - In the dark

Thanks for the explanation, but the scene I was referring to was in the Lively's launch, so I envisaged a hand-held compass, which I wouldn't expect to have a candle or oil lamp.

Kerry

Kerry Webb
Canberra, Australia http://www.alia.org.au/~kwebb/


From: Steve Ross
Sent: Monday, November 05, 2001 12:14 PM
Subject: HMSS: Great Clanger

Bringing up the rear here as usual . . .

Great Clanger: Another one of those whimsical made-up names O'Brian is so good at. (Scrivener; Corporal Dredge of the Marines -- are we supposed to infer that the latter is some sort of bottom-feeder?)

Not knowing the idiomatic sense of the word, I associated "Clanger" with the noun "clangor." Isn't it true that Jack would prefer that his dear father would cease making such an infernal racket in the Commons?

Steve Ross
30° 24' 32"N
91° 05' 28"W

"Wail, wail, wail!" set disk wicket woof, "Evanescent Ladle Rat Rotten Hut!"


From: Larry & Wanda Finch
Sent: Monday, November 05, 2001 12:56 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS: Great Clanger

In the great tradtion of Anthony Trollope -- e.g., the Duke of Omnium and Gatherum, Mr. Slope, ...

Larry

--
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::finches@bellatlantic.net larry@prolifics.com
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N 40° 53' 47"
W 74° 03' 56"


From: Don Seltzer
Sent: Tuesday, November 06, 2001 6:33 AM
Subject: Re: GRP HMSS; JA and Cochrane

At 10:07 AM -0500 11/5/2001, Barney Simon wrote:

I'm sure it has been discussed here before, but is there a consensus as to POB's need to separate JA and Cochrane on page 123 of my Norton HB: SA observes: "but no, Cochrane ashore was too flamboyant to be typical, too full of himself, too conscious of his own value, too much affected by that Scotch love of a grievance; and there was that unfortunate title hanging about his neck, a beloved millstone. There was something of Cochrane in Jack, a restless impatience of authority, a strong persuasion of being in the right;...."

I think that is so. POB wanted to make clear that Jack Aubrey was his own creation, and was not intended to be just a fictionalized version of Cochrane. The passage preceding the one Barney quoted also gave him the opportunity to comment on the nature of naval officers in general (although it is extremely dubious that Stephen could have known Capt. Riou).

Don Seltzer


From: Susan Wenger
Sent: Tuesday, November 06, 2001 7:32 AM
Subject: GroupRead:HMSS:reading by phosphorescence

On page 151-152, Stephen has made a bet with Mr White, the envoy's chaplain, that he can read by starlight. He is to open to a random page and read what is there written.

SIGNIFICANT COMMENT: Jack Aubrey, who knows such things, glances at the sky and says that there won't be much starlight.

When the sun set, "Stephen opened the book, and holding it with the page to the bow-wave he read,
'Speed the soft intercourse from soul to soul
And waft a sigh from Indus to the Pole.'

"Mr. White, I exult, I triumph. I claim my bottle;"

Very convenient, that the page he opened to just happened to start with a poem. DID Stephen read by starlight, or did he con the chaplain by opening at random and reciting what he'd pre-memorized, without anyone else being sharp-eyed enough to verify that was what was on the page?

And if it was a con, WHY? He wasn't that hard-up for a bottle of ale, was he? And what is the relevance of that particular poem?


From: Gregory Edwards
Sent: Tuesday, November 06, 2001 7:38 AM
Subject: Re: GroupRead:HMSS:reading by phosphorescence

It is amazing how much one can see if one looks carefully. An how little light is needed if one fully dark adapts.

Greg Edwards
who has seen amature astronomers complain at how the Milky Way is wrecking their night vision and shadows from Jupiter.


From: claude
Sent: Tuesday, November 06, 2001 8:54 AM
Subject: Subject: GroupRead:HMSS:reading by phosphorescence

Actually, I believe that Stephen was to read by the the light of the phosphorescence of the disturbed plankton in the wake of the Surprise, not by starlight. I don't believe it for a second. Not that Stephen was conning White, but rather this is another case of POB not letting the facts interfer with a good story;) I've been told that reading a modern newspaper is not possible by moonlight and I know starlight is dimmer and I suspect that glowing plankton are dimmer than moonlight. And has anyone been watching the aurora over the Midwest USA the last two nights? Even with a 3/4 moon, the very clean and dry air is clear enough for me to see red and blue/white patches at 41N from the street in front of my house.

Claude, enlisted for drink


From: Jerry Shurman
Sent: Tuesday, November 06, 2001 10:11 AM
Subject: Re: GroupRead:HMSS:reading by phosphorescence

On Tue, 6 Nov 2001, Susan Wenger wrote:

Very convenient, that the page he opened to just happened to start with a poem.

Strictly, we don't know that it _started_ with a poem, but still I like your point. Do we know what volume he was reading from?

DID Stephen read by starlight, or did he con the chaplain by opening at random and reciting what he'd pre-memorized, without anyone else being sharp-eyed enough to verify that was what was on the page?

Having bluffed my way through a language reading profiency exam this way once, I love this thought!

And if it was a con, WHY?

Stephen does love to tease. And didn't he not think so highly of the envoy's entourage? (One of them was particularly obnoxious but I don't remember if it was the chaplain.)

And what is the relevance of that particular poem?

Diana?

Two other small commments for the HMSS groupread:

(1) The mystical mathematician who Stephen befriends seems partly modeled on Ramanujan, who we discussed here recently in connection with taxicabs and the number 1729.

(2) Around page 170 (don't have the book here) Jack and Stephen conclude a heart-to-heart conversation by shaking hands. A footnote in my copy of _Emma_ says (after Emma and Knightley shake hands after an emotionally cathartic conversation of their own) that in those times shaking hands meant something more personal and intimate than it does to us now. I think O'Brian lifted the moment from Austen as a homage.

-Jerry


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 12:18 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS: Great Clanger - SPOILER WARNING

And the name Waakzaamheid, which means "vigilance", is equally appropriate in view of the Dutch captain's many successes in outguessing and outmanoeuvring JA - though this may be serendipitous: I have no idea whether a real ship of that name foundered in far southern latitudes at the dramatic date of DI.

London Lois

51° 28' 50" N 000° 10' 53" W

Lois Anne du Toit
lois@glomas.com

"Man is the only animal that both laughs and weeps for man alone is struck by the difference between what things are and what they ought to be." (William Hazlitt)


From: Reinhard Gloggengiesser
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 1:52 AM
Subject: Re: GroupRead:HMSS:reading by phosphorescence

Amazing indeed, the ability of the human eye to adapt to the darkest conditions, though I don't have that ability, stumbling through even modestly starry nights like a mole. Still more amazing, that in my recollection it wasn't the sun that they waited for to set, but Venus, that bright planet that can be seen as a sickle in even the smallest telescope when it is close to the sun (circling the sun within earth's orbit).

Reinhard Gloggengiesser
47? 40' 41" N
11? 10' 15" E
reglogge@planet-interkom.de


From: Tony Davison
Sent: Tuesday, November 06, 2001 9:21 PM
Subject: Groupread:HMSS:reading by phospherence

IMHO Stephen was not "conning" Mr. White, no one seems to have thought of the type size? One cannot compare reading a newspaper with text set in 8-9 point with a book which could be anything from 12-14 point. What is more, his luck could have been increased by the chance of verse, which is much easier to read than a paragraph of solid type. Try it.

Tony Davison
from KwaZulu-Natal


From: Reinhard Gloggengiesser
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 4:00 AM
Subject: GRP: HMSS Jack naked

There are two pages in the Norton paperbag edition that I find to be the most beautiful of the entire canon - period. The beginning of chapter five, pp 98-99 starts out with a description of a noon-day-scene over Bombay with the hot and fiery sun beating down upon the bazaars and then following that very same sun over to the Atlantic ocean where it just rises above the horizon to bathe the wallowing Surprise in sudden sunlight.

The ensuing scene with Stephen being woken up by the captain of the afterguard and ending up holystoning the deck under the shadow of a stark-naked Captain Jack Aubrey ist just wonderful IMHO.

Those two pages make up a whole novel within a novel within a magnificient series - they have it all: Stephens cantakerous character (judaic superstitial ritual cleanliness - archaic fools!), his unseamanlike behaviour (who ever heard of an officer cleaning the decks!), his sometimes erratic scientific methods (protecting his head with a bag against the moon-pall). Also again we find animals *commenting* on human actions (the cock crowing in the nearby coop, the hen crying that she has laid an egg, an egg!). The final appearance of Jack on the deck is just too much to bear - the entire scene is brought to a surprising and at the same time promising end. You could just leave it there and then and be hopelessly addicted to this gifted writer - just with these two pages.

Awed

Reinhard Gloggengiesser
47° 40' 41" N
11° 10' 15" E
reglogge@planet-interkom.de


From: Jerry Shurman
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 5:59 AM
Subject: Re: GRP: HMSS Jack naked

On this pass through the Canon I better appreciate a Gunroom post from last winter saying that O'Brian really found his rhythm in HMSS, especially in humor.

I was dropping off to sleep as I read last night, but do we learn from Bonden that Jack -- offstage -- has not only ordered some floggings but carried them out himself with zeal? If I read that passage correctly, I'm curious what response it generated from other Lissuns.

-Jerry


From: Gerry Strey
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 6:24 AM
Subject: Re: Groupread:HMSS:reading by phospherence

IMHO Stephen was not "conning" Mr. White, no one seems to have thought of the type size?

And remember that Stephen excluded footnotes from the test.

Gerry Strey
Madison, Wisconsin


From: Charlezzzz@AOL.COM
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 8:14 AM
Subject: Group Read: HMSS; Reading by phosphorescence

Gerry Strey comments about Maturin 's effort to read once the moon goes down: "And remember that Stephen excluded footnotes from the test."

What Stephen read was a couple of lines from Pope's poem, wch "is" a letter from Heloise to Abelard. "Eloisa to Abelard." You can find the whole poem by Googling. You remember the situation, of course: Abelard had been castrated by thugs sent by Heloise' uncle. Heloise goes into a convent; Abelard becomes a monk. The lovers, no longer capable of sexual love, write from a distance...yet what passion there is in the lines quoted, as Heloise moves from sexual toward spiritual love.

So here's my problem:

It's *almost* true that POB never wastes a quotation. Everything echoes. Nothing stands all by itself, meaning nothing else but its bare words. So why did he pick these particular words for Maturin to read in his dim triumph? Why? Love, OK. Distance, OK. But castration? Convent? Why this particular poem? (POB cd have selected any poem from 18th century literature. Or, for that matter, from any literature from any century, as he does elsewhere.) Was there something particularly Maturinoid about Pope's poem?

Here's a comment by A. Franklin Parks that may have some bearing: "Eloisa's persisting tendency to translate the spiritual experience into erotic terms indicates that the spiritual union she attains in the course of her contemplation, a state surpassing anything she has heretofore achieved, encompasses rather than eliminates sexual response."

Well, go figure. One of the aspects of life which POB does *not* bring into the canon (pace list clergy) is precisely the question of spirituality, though you can find it in the short stories...or, to be more precise, you find life after death and a search for judgment in those stories--maybe not spirituality itself?

'Speed the soft intercourse from soul to
soul And waft a sigh from Indus to the Pole.'

A few points: the lines are by Alexander Pope, and I suppose it was a volume of poetry that Stephen was holding. The lines...

Speed the soft intercourse from soul to soul
And waft a sigh from Indus to the Pole

(1) are not entirely irrelevant to Surprise's voyage, are they? (2) and "soft intercourse" is a phrase--that Pope was a subtle poet--that is not entirely irrelevant to Stephen's wishes, are they? (3) and maybe most important of all, it wasn't the sun that set, nor was it the moon: it was the planet Venus. Venus!

Charlezzzz, praying for a nifty solution that will tie it all together...and lurking in the archives


From: Gregg Germain
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 8:26 AM
Subject: Re: GRP: HMSS Jack naked

Jerry Shurman wrote:

On this pass through the Canon I better appreciate a Gunroom post from last winter saying that O'Brian really found his rhythm in HMSS, especially in humor.

That's my opinion as well. The first book was a little awkward what with the jumping around in place and time. PC was a little better in that regard.

But in HMSS, we get what I consider to tbe THE best line I've read anywhere:

[referring to Mrs. Williams}..is the most unromantic beast to ever urge her thick, squat bulk over the face of the protesting earth."

=====
Gregg
Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)

See my replicas of ancient nautical navigational instruments:

http://people.ne.mediaone.net/saville/backstaffhome.html


From: Mary S
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 10:41 AM
Subject: Re: Group Read: HMSS; Reading by phosphorescence

In a message dated 11/7/01 10:15:59 AM Central Standard Time, Charlezzzz@AOL.COM writes:

Abelard had been castrated by thugs sent by Heloise' uncle.

As a kid I cracked up reading Mark Twain's account of this story in (I think) THE INNOCENTS ABROAD: Heloise's uncle was a canon of Notre Dame Cathedral, and Twain keeps referring to him as "the old howitzer."

a wicked contumelious discontented froward mutinous dog,[FSW1]

Mary S
35° 58' 11" N
86° 48' 57" W


From: Don Seltzer
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 10:45 AM
Subject: Re: Group Read: HMSS; Reading by phosphorescence

At 11:14 AM -0500 11/7/2001, Charlezzzz@AOL.COM wrote:

What Stephen read was a couple of lines from Pope's poem, wch "is" a letter from Heloise to Abelard. "Eloisa to Abelard."

So here's my problem: It's *almost* true that POB never wastes a quotation. Everything echoes. Nothing stands all by itself, meaning nothing else but its bare words. So why did he pick these particular words for Maturin to read in his dim triumph?

It is puzzling. Heloise and Abelard are the perfect lovers, with their love remaining steadfast over distance and even death. What a contrast with the fickle, faithless Diana. Perhaps that is the point of the quotation, to hint how shallow their relationship really was, only a pale imitation of the true love between H & A.

I believe that POB's attitude and intentions regarding Diana changed throughout the canon, and she underwent three or four distinct phases. In the first phase of PC and HMSS, she is comparable to Dillon as a major, but temporary character brought in for the space of a book or two to first test the friendship of Stephen and Jack, and then to further torment Stephen.

The second phase of Diana did not come for six years and three books later, when she once again appeared onstage, humbled and rehabilitated.

Don Seltzer


From: Martin Watts
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 11:35 AM
Subject: Re: GRP: HMSS Jack naked (plus DCT)

Gregg wrote:

[referring to Mrs. Williams}..is the most unromantic beast to ever urge her thick, squat bulk over the face of the protesting earth."

Which reminds me that recently I thought of the ideal casting for Mrs Williams - but I will not mention the name of the lady, a former prime minister of this country, in these circumstances. Martin @ home:
50° 44' 58" N
1° 58' 35" W


From: Kerry Webb
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 11:56 AM
Subject: Re: GRP: HMSS Jack naked (plus DCT)

Rubbish. Ted Heath looks nothing like Mrs Williams.

You, sir, are seriously weird.

Kerry

Kerry Webb
Canberra, Australia http://www.alia.org.au/~kwebb/


From: Jebvbva@AOL.COM
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 12:50 PM
Subject: Re: GRP: HMSS Jack naked

In a message dated 11/7/2001 7:10:46 AM Eastern Standard Time, reglogge@PLANET-INTERKOM.DE writes:

There are two pages in the Norton paperbag edition that I find to be the most beautiful of the entire canon

I have just got back to HMS Surprise(I am trying to complete the canon and am up to "The Commodore" , also catching up missing "Treason's Harbour- )

I immediately went to HMSS and reread that chapter and agree that it is a most complete and descriptive section.

It overcomes my objections to some parts of POB that are jumpy in time and lack transition of space. It describes the vicissitudes of wind on the track of the voyage and indicates how many miles can be made in days and then few made in weeks. It is described much clearer here than in some of the other instances in the novels

John B


From: Jebvbva@AOL.COM
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 1:29 PM
Subject: Re: Group Read: HMSS; Reading by phosphorescence

In a message dated 11/7/2001 11:15:59 AM Eastern Standard Time, Charlezzzz@AOL.COM writes:

So why did he pick these particular words for Maturin to read in his dim triumph?

In a later book, when Maturin foregoes his laudanum, he starts to recover his sexual feelings- which he has lacked- - I think he mentions that he wwas aware that his thoughts of love were more ethereal than sexual. perhaps in the present period, he is thinking on that plane?


From: Jebvbva@AOL.COM
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 1:40 PM
Subject: Re: GRP: HMSS Jack naked

In a message dated 11/7/2001 11:26:35 AM Eastern Standard Time, gregg_germain@YAHOO.COM writes:

[referring to Mrs. Williams}..is the most unromantic beast to ever urge her thick, squat bulk over the face of the protesting earth."

I do love his descriptions of Mrs. williams, tho he becomes more tolerant in later books.


From: Samuel Bostock
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 1:23 PM
Subject: Re: Moon-pall

"Well, what of it? Sunday morning, surely to god, and you would be at your holystoning?" The bag, worn against the moon-pall, stifled his words but not the whining tone of a man jerked from total relaxation and an erotic dream."

We all know of POB's trick of putting some of the description in the words of the lower deck, eg - da da - 'the grass combing bugger' etc. Could this be a more subtle example?

Stephan is a notoriously light sleeper - star/moon light may keep him awake - but the lower deck would attribute the bag to him being subject to the same superstitions as themselves.

Or perhaps it is POB's irony - SM makes light of JA's supersitions but is subject to them himself?

Toss a coin!

Samuel


From: Adam Quinan
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 3:06 PM
Subject: Re: Group Read: HMSS; Reading by phosphorescence

It is quite clear that Stephen read that particular poem because it happenned to be in the book he had and that was the page that opened at random. POB merely recorded the incident as it occurred aboard HMS Surprise that evening. I always thought that Charlezzzz believed that Homer and POB never nods.


From: Kathryn Guare
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 5:38 PM
Subject: Group Read:HMSS: Psychoanalyzing O'Brian (Spoiler)

Just returning from a local POB discussion group, where coincidentally we were discussing HMSS, and the question of Dil's death was discussed at some length. Why did O'Brian feel it necessary to kill off this character, when it would have been the simplest thing in the world for the ship to sail away from India and we the readers would not think it strange if she did not appear again as a character?

One gentleman had this intriguing opinion: that O'Brian has a limit to his level of emotional involvement with his characters, that Dil was the most emotionally pure character in the entire canon, that she had become too real and too poignant for O'Brian, and having found himself out of his emotional comfort level he felt the need to abandon her. The gentleman (a psychologist) wondered if there was something in O'Brian's personal life that would correspond to this, and when another in the group explained the story of O'Brian's young daughter, born with spina bifida I believe, whom O'Brian abandoned (along with the rest of the family I guess), we all thought this psychologist bloke had gotten off a pretty good one! What say the lissuns? Is there something subconsciously personal being played out in O'Brian's sacrifice of Dil?

Kathryn Guare


From: William Nyden
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 5:48 PM
Subject: Re: Group Read:HMSS: Psychoanalyzing O'Brian (Spoiler)

Dil isn't the subject of her own story, but rather an object in Stephen's story. That is to say that what we are seeing is his reaction to another person-- perhaps a mirror image of his relationship with Diana? He gives Dil her life's desire, the silver bangles, and it kills her. Would getting his life's desire-- Diana-- kill him? We don't find out this time because Jack saves him from himself by denying Diana passage on Surprise.

--
Bill Nyden
a Rose by another name
37° 25' 15" N 122° 04' 57" W


From: Stephen Chambers
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 6:02 PM
Subject: Re: GroupRead:HMSS:reading by phosphorescence

I sometimes wish I didn't have that ability. riding home through the darkened countryside with the most appalling headlights man could devise, my eyes tend to strain far beyond their illumination. Then some prat comes the other way with full beam on and dazzles me so that I cannot see properly for some time.

Incidentally for a couple of nights last week the sky was so clear and the moonlight so bright, that I could see better with just the side lights than with head lights. If it wasn't so damned cold I would have been tempted to sit down at the side of the road and read for a bit, I'm sure it would have been possible.:-)

Stephen Chambers
50° 48' 38" N 01° 09' 15" W
Approx. 180 inches above sea level
When the pin is pulled Mr Grenade is no longer our friend.


From: Steve Turley
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 6:31 PM
Subject: Re: Group Read:HMSS: Psychoanalyzing O'Brian (Spoiler)

I love this entire section of the book - the first half of chapter 7: the dense, lyrical, evocative, non-stop descriptions of India. It is O'Brian at his best, a master at the top of his form. His descriptions of Dil, especially her delight with the bangles, are beautiful; he always describes children with a special affection even though he often kills them soon after.

O'Brian can create an entire scene with a very few words. "She burst into wild laughter, slipped them all on, all off, all on in a different order, patting them, talking to them, giving them each a name." The image is perfect - you know exactly how Dil feels, you see her there and envy her her joy, and share Stephen's happiness, and smile to yourself, too. This is what makes O'Brian so wonderful to read. He can pick out the one simple action or word that reveals up the whole scene to his readers. This is, of course, what this list is all about: sharing those wonderful evocative moments with others - "I can't believe he got so much into one sentence..."

One of my favorite passages is in PC, where Diana meets Stephen and says something like "You do know I'm a woman, Maturin?" "Yes, I assume you must be since you have so little notion of time..." - forgive me for mangling it. But there it is, their entire relationship. They love each other because they can't control each other. They would eventually have only contempt for someone whom they could manipulate. Stephen knows he's smarter than anyone else around and could play them however he chooses - except Diana. She knows she's beautiful and sexy and can make a fool of any man she chooses - except Stephen. And they know that they won't try their games on each other.


From: Jebvbva@AOL.COM
Sent: Wednesday, November 07, 2001 7:31 PM
Subject: Re: Group Read:HMSS: Psychoanalyzing O'Brian (Spoiler)

In a message dated 11/7/2001 10:04:28 PM Eastern Standard Time, sturley@MICROSOFT.COM writes:

another in the group explained the story of O'Brian's young daughter, born with spina bifida I believe, whom O'Brian abandoned (along with the rest of the family I guess)

Is this factual? documented? where, may I ask?

John B


From: Steve Ross
Sent: Thursday, November 08, 2001 6:54 AM
Subject: GRP: HMSS Wrong side of the blanket

I feel as if I have dropped something along the way. A correct interpretation of this passage will help me pick it up:

On p. 87 of the Norton paperback edition: Sir Joseph is filling in Mr. Waring, his replacement as intelligence chief, on Stephen's background:

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"He is himself a perfect Quixote: an enthusiastic supporter of the Revolution until '93; a United Irishman until the rising, Lord Edward's adviser--his cousin, by the way--"

"Is he a Fitzgerald?"

"The wrong side of the blanket."

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Just what does this last phrase signify? Thanks in advance . . .

Steve Ross
30° 24' 32"N
91° 05' 28"W


From: Simon Holmes
Sent: Thursday, November 08, 2001 8:23 AM
Subject: Re: GRP: HMSS Wrong side of the blanket

bastardy, I believe

Simon


From: Mary Arndt
Sent: Thursday, November 08, 2001 7:01 AM
Subject: Re: GRP: HMSS Wrong side of the blanket

A person born "on the wrong side of the blanket" was illegitimate, a bastard. So Stephen is biologically related to the Fitzgeralds, but not officially related.


From: Mary Arndt
Sent: Thursday, November 08, 2001 7:10 AM
Subject: On His Majesty's Ship "Great Clanger"

Ever since we started the Group Read for HMS Surprise, I have been stuck in a brain cramp that will not go away! The posts are sensibly marked HMSS, but I persist in reading it as HMS with the subject of the thread as the name of a ship. Thus I am now imagining a fleet of lovely ships with names such as : "Jack Naked", "Great Clanger" and "Wrong Side of the Blanket".

Mary A


From: Ray McPherson
Sent: Thursday, November 08, 2001 9:26 AM
Subject: Re: Group Read:HMSS: Re: Dil (poss spoiler)

The episode with Stephen and Dil is one of my favorites also, especially in the audio version where Stephen finds Dil has died and the bracelets are gone from her arm. O'Brian does not tell us how she's died, but we know the guilt Stephen feels for her death. And he carries her to the shore to her funeral pyre. "Prayers, lustration; chanting, lustration." This is both O'Brian and Tull at their best.

Ray McP


From: JohnMckD@AOL.COM
Sent: Thursday, November 08, 2001 1:03 PM
Subject: Re: GRP: HMSS Wrong side of the blanket

In a message dated 11/8/2001 11:22:33 AM Central Standard Time, LISTSERV@HMSSURPRISE.ORG writes:

A person born "on the wrong side of the blanket" was illegitimate, a bastard. So Stephen is biologically related to the Fitzgeralds, but not officially related.

And thereby a bit of a double bastard, as the "Fitz" prefix signified descent from a named group without benefit of clergy.

John Donohue
Evanston by the Illiwimichiana Sea


From: Stephen Chambers
Sent: Thursday, November 08, 2001 5:18 PM
Subject: Re: Group Read:HMSS: Psychoanalyzing O'Brian (Spoiler)

At the time of POB's death certain journalists began their process of 'we've built him up now let's drag him down', and at the same time Dean Kings biography came out.

I have not actually read the bio yet, but some excerpts I have seen alluded to some darker areas of his life that he would rather have had left buried. At the same time the journalists started there own 'muck raking' and produced several articles about how he abandoned his first family, with one of the main reasons being his disabled child. This all occurred just before WW2 from what I remember. Try a Google search and see what that returns.

Stephen Chambers
50° 48' 38" N 01° 09' 15" W
Approx. 180 inches above sea level
When the pin is pulled Mr Grenade is no longer our friend.


From: Jebvbva@AOL.COM
Sent: Thursday, November 08, 2001 5:57 PM
Subject: Re: GRP: HMSS Wrong side of the blanket

That one is easdy- he is illegitimate- True?


From: Jebvbva@AOL.COM
Sent: Thursday, November 08, 2001 6:49 PM
Subject: Re: GRP: HMSS Wrong side of the blanket

Question- Do two wrong sides make a "legitimate right?"


From: Jean A
Sent: Thursday, November 08, 2001 7:01 PM
Subject: Re: Fitz, was wrong side of the blanket

The respected John Donohue wrote:

"And thereby a bit of a double bastard, as the "Fitz" prefix signified descent from a named group without benefit of clergy."

I think this is true in latter days; for example, illegitimate children of Charles II, were given surnames beginning with "Fitz". For example, Fitzroy. However, I believe that in the beginning - at the time of the Norman invasions of England, and later, Ireland, Fitz was merely Norman French for Fils, that is, son of.

Stephen's "relatives", the Fitzgeralds, were very grand indeed.

(Here are some more books to add to your collections.)

The recent biography of Stephen's 'cousin', Lord Edward Fitzgerald, by Stella Tilyard. He fought in the British army in the Revolution, was gravely wounded, and carried off the battlefield ( I forget the name of the battle) by a runaway slave, who stayed with him for the rest of his life and became his great friend. Together, they made their way from Indian tribe to tribe and eventually went down the Mississippi to New Orleans. Of course, he lost his life in the Rebellion of 1798, disregarding Stephen's advice.

"The Aristocrats", also by Stella Tilyard. This was also a Masterpiece Theatre production in the last year or so. Lord Edward Fitzgerald's mother was the illegitimate grand-daughter of Charles II. Her father was the Duke of Lennox.

"The Twilight Lords", by Richard Berleth. The first half of the book deals with the "The Rebel Earl", Maurice Fitzgerald, in the ghastly Elizabethen Wars of the 16th century. The Fitzgeralds came to Ireland at the time of the Norman invasion in the 12th century, and like most of the Normans, became " more Irish than the Irish" in a century or so.

The Fitzgeralds were very close to being "uncrowned kings." Edward's father was the Duke of Leinster, the premier nobleman of Ireland. Oddly enough, being the descendent of English kings, he was brought up by his mother under strictly Rousseauan principles and after he resigned from the British army, he went to Paris, where he sympathized with the Revolution.

There is also a very good recent biography of the Irish playwright, Richard Brinsley Sheridan, in which Lord Edward is a principle player. He fell in love with Sheridan's wife, who had a child by him. Both Sheridan and Lord Edward adored the child, as they adored her mother, and Sheridan brought her up as his own ( his wife had died in the meantime) until her tragic death as a two-year old.

Jean A.
( Sorry if I told you more than you'd care to know.)


From: McEachern & FitzRoy LC - Attorneys and Counselors
Sent: Thursday, November 08, 2001 1:24 PM
Subject: Re: GRP: HMSS Wrong side of the blanket

I will use this on my partner who not only acts like Charles II once in a while, he even looks like him.

Dick

McEachern & FitzRoy LC
Attorneys and Counselors
Saint Louis, Missouri, USA


From: Don Seltzer
Sent: Friday, November 09, 2001 6:52 AM
Subject: GRP HMSS: Worst opening?

We often post our opinions on the best of POB - favorite book, cover, passage, first chapter, etc. In a new category, I vote for HMSS as the worst opening scene in the canon.

The description of the meeting of the Admiralty Board is difficult enough to follow even after several readings. For a first time reader it is an extremely confusing start, plunked down in the middle of a debate about an unfamiliar issue. It is one of the rare passages that is from the viewpoint of a character other than Jack or Stephen, and this person isn't identified at first. Even when named as Sir Joseph Blain [sic], we don't really know enough about him to fully understand the nature of the debate. Uncharacteristically, POB also gets some of the facts wrong.

What a contrast to the wonderful opening scene in the Governor's House in M&C, aboard the Charwell in PC, or the two domestic scenes in TMC and DI.

Can anyone suggest a worse opening scene?

Don Seltzer


From: Gerry Strey
Sent: Friday, November 09, 2001 8:05 AM
Subject: Re: GRP HMSS: Worst opening?

Offhand, I can't think of a "worse" opening, though personally I had no problem in understanding the action and context. It's characteristic of POB that he makes no cencessions to the reader, though as the series extends I think this particular idiosyncracy of transposed and inverted scenes fades away and the narration becomes more straightforward.

How about worst/best closingings? I'd bet that many lissuns would vote for the closing of LOM.

Gerry Strey
Madison, Wisconsin


From: Gregg Germain
Sent: Friday, November 09, 2001 8:21 AM
Subject: Re: GRP HMSS: Worst opening?

I didn't think it was too bad. It became clear right away that they were thinking of the pile of pounds that came from the action at the end of PC. And it was clear what it all meant to Jack.

And there were some nuggests in there that I liked - like the one where reference to the yellow folder would be equal to flinging an inkwell at the head of the dopey recipient.

=====
Gregg
Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)


From: Greg White
Sent: Friday, November 09, 2001 8:28 AM
Subject: Re: GRP HMSS: Worst opening?

Can anyone suggest a worse opening scene?

FWIW, though I agree with your assessment of the opening for HMSS, I dislike the opening of PC just about as much.

I can't wait for the opening of TMC. My second favorite, after TSM.

Greg

42º32'34.5" N
71º20'13.2" W


From: Steve Ross
Sent: Friday, November 09, 2001 9:33 AM
Subject: Re: GRP HMSS: Worst opening?

Someone wrote recently that as soon as they started HMSS, they could tell that O'Brian had moved into "series mode." Could this be because of the opening, assuming as it does some awareness of the events of the last novel? I agree that anyone who started out with HMSS would feel lost for a while. In my case, however, the opening felt fine. Perhaps the book should come with a disclaimer for non-initiates!

Steve Ross
30° 24' 32"N
91° 05' 28"W


From: Don Seltzer
Sent: Friday, November 09, 2001 10:30 AM
Subject: Re: GRP HMSS: The series, was Worst opening?

At 11:33 AM -0600 11/9/2001, Steve Ross wrote:

Someone wrote recently that as soon as they started HMSS, they could tell that O'Brian had moved into "series mode."

The question has been raised several times of when POB began writing the novels as a series. I believe that he wrote HMSS with the idea that it was the last Aubrey-Maturin book that he would undertake. He then went off on different literary pursuits, including his biography of Picasso.

After a space of several years, he returned to A-M with TMC. Most will agree that this is the "oddball" book, capable of standing alone, and the most easily excised from the canon without disrupting the other books. Most notably, POB skips over several very eventful years of Jack and Stephen's lives, advancing Jack to the role of a senior captain, and thus limiting his possibilities for future books.

It is with DI that POB clearly undertakes a plan for a series, creating plots that are not intended to be brought to completion within the span of a single book. And by TGS, he has reached what I think John Berg once called "sausage-making" mode; writing a continuing saga while pinching off a book every ten chapters/100,000 words.

Don Seltzer


From: Jebvbva@AOL.COM
Sent: Friday, November 09, 2001 11:30 AM
Subject: Re: GRP HMSS: Worst opening?

In a message dated 11/9/2001 9:50:30 AM Eastern Standard Time, dseltzer@DRAPER.COM writes:

Can anyone suggest a worse opening scene?

"It was a dark and stormy night....."

Seriously, I agree- and find that lack of introduction and transition often leaves me two paragraphs behind in these books- Also the filling out of characters which I expect to contribute to story and they suddenly die or disappear without warning- I think of that young cavalryman who wore spurs and was always in a catastrophe- What happened to HIM?


From: DJONES
Sent: Friday, November 09, 2001 1:58 PM
Subject: Re: GRP HMSS: Worst opening?

I don't find the opening of HMSS too bad at all. To my mind it reads like an almost seamless continuation of PC. The openings I don't like are the ones (later books, mainly) where POB goes through the ritual motions of introducing the central characters to us yet again. OK, he finds new ways of doing so each time, but I find myself thinking "yeah, yeah, let's get on with it, we know all this". It is frustrating to have to go through the introductions yet again, just in case a first-time reader has blundered into the series in the middle instead of starting at the beginning like a Christian ;-)

Elaine Jones
Walsall, England
52°36'01" N 1°55'46" W


From: Jebvbva@AOL.COM
Sent: Friday, November 09, 2001 4:52 PM
Subject: Re: GRP HMSS: Worst opening?

In a message dated 11/9/2001 12:29:03 PM Eastern Standard Time, skross@LSU.EDU writes:

Perhaps the book should come with a disclaimer for non-initiates!

I think each book should stand on its own with prior references coming in as the tale progresses. Not always does a person start with volume 1 and go right through

John B


From: thekaines
Sent: Friday, November 09, 2001 11:40 PM
Subject: Re: GRP HMSS: Worst opening?

From: Don Seltzer

The description of the meeting of the Admiralty Board is difficult enough to follow even after several readings. For a first time reader it is an extremely confusing start, plunked down in the middle of a debate about an unfamiliar issue.

I totally agree, Don, because this is exactly what happened to me. I *was* that first-time reader. The first book in the canon I read was an old copy of M&C, which I thought was "OK" (I know, shame on me). I didn't know at the time that there was a whole series, but a couple of years later I saw HMSS in our public library and thought "hello, here's another book by that O'Brian bloke". I borrowed it and started to read, couldn't make head nor tail of what was going on, found the humour in the scene rather heavy-handed and gave up.

Some time later, for some reason I started again, re-reading M&C then following on with the rest of the books in the correct order. Therefore, when I came to HMSS I knew what was happening, stayed with it, and ultimately found it perhaps the most rewarding book of them all.

Clive


From: Susan Wenger
Sent: Sunday, November 11, 2001 5:46 AM
Subject: Re: Characterizations

J Scates wrote:

Shall I throw out the question: what about similarities between Dil and Diana?

Buried at the end of an interesting post is an interesting question:

Was Diana in India at the same age as Dil? (maybe 11-12 years old?) The spirit is the same - was Dil the younger Diana?


From:
Sent: Sunday, November 11, 2001 12:06 PM
Subject: POB- reread of HMSS

I finally got a chance to get into HMSS and have so far have the following comments-

favorite expression- "You have debauched my sloth !!- Stephen- I can picture the censure on that discovery.

Great dramatic description- - the storm in the high latitudes- I could feel the cold, damp and fear.


From: Jerry Shurman
Sent: Sunday, November 11, 2001 3:11 PM
Subject: Groupread: HMSS: A few random thoughts

Gotta love the word sanglewich, courtesy of Killick.

The boy who is almost pulled overboard when Surprise is going so fast that the line runs out before 28 seconds is named Bent Larsen. Wasn't that the name of a prominent Danish chess master from around the time HMSS was written (1973)? What to make of this?

Canning held my interest a lot more this time through. What a fine rival for Jack and Stephen -- a mix of positive and negative traits by the inner standards of the book, perhaps a different mix by the standards of the reader...

-Jerry


From: Don Seltzer
Sent: Monday, November 12, 2001 5:58 PM
Subject: GRP HMSS: Lies & Deception

I came across this passage on page 215. It seems to relate to many of our recent threads about Dil, Diana, and POB's private life, and something I heard in Newport.

"I get so sick of lies: I have been surrounded with them and with deception in one form or another for so long. Disguise and subterfuge - a dangerous trade - the taint must come through at last. There are some, and Diana is one I believe, who have a separate truth of their own: ordinary people, Sophie and myself for example, are nothing without the ordinary truth, nothing at all. They die without it; without innocence and candour. Indeed the very great majority kill themselves long long before their time. Live as children; grow pale as adolescents; show a flash of life in love; die in their twenties and join the poor things that creep angry and restless about the earth. Dil is alive..."

Last week at Newport, Dean King related a story about why POB chose to have Dil die. Apparently, it was some type of retribution for Stephen's "betrayal" of Jack, pushing him towards marriage with Sophie not because of friendship, but because he wanted Diana for himself. Supposedly POB told a reporter (Mark Horowitz?) that "the point of the death of Dil is that [Maturin] had done a wholly dishonourable thing that has its image in the death of that child. You do something profoundly dishonourable and you've killed something, you've killed a part of your honour."

I'm rather stunned by that reasoning, if POB was accurately quoted and he sincerely believed what he was saying. In previous readings, I did not pick up on any dishonorable betrayal by Stephen. Perhaps he was not totally honest with Jack in his competition for Diana, but neither was Jack. Where is Jack's retribution? And why must innocent Dil suffer? Did POB really think this way?

Don Seltzer


From: Rowen 84
Sent: Monday, November 12, 2001 6:00 PM
Subject: Re: Characterizations HMSS Spoiler.

In a message dated 11-10-01 7:52:58 AM, jscates@TEXAS.NET writes:

Shall I throw out the question: what about similarities between Dil and Diana?

I'd be interested in your comments on this. I don't really see similarities.
I see differences. .(Spoiler space)

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Dil is innocent, pure, clear sighted, giver of unconditional love to Stephen; Diana is worldly, tainted, constantly involved in muddled thinking, and has no capability to love without payment of some kind. Stephen's touch kills Dil; Diana's touch 'kills' Stephen.

I'd be interested in other's opinions of WHY POB includes Dil. What is her function in the overall story?

Rowen


From: Vanessa Brown
Sent: Monday, November 12, 2001 7:44 PM
Subject: Re: GRP: HMSS Wrong side of the blanket

Question- Do two wrong sides make a "legitimate right?"

Two wrongs may not make a right. But three rights make a left.

-Vanessa, profound today


From: Ray McPherson
Sent: Monday, November 12, 2001 8:10 PM
Subject: Re: Characterizations HMSS Spoiler.

I don't know why POB includes Dil. But I think that Dil is a reflection of Stephen, not of Diana.

Ray McP


From: Marshall Rafferty
Sent: Monday, November 12, 2001 8:41 PM
Subject: Re: GRP HMSS: Lies & Deception

On Mon, 12 Nov 2001 20:58:01 -0500, Don S. gives and account of POB remarking to a reporter and concluding:

" You do something profoundly dishonourable and you've killed something, you've killed a part of your honour."

and asked:

Where is Jack's retribution? And why must innocent Dil suffer? Did POB really think this way?

Wow. This *is* startling. In three readings of the canon and numerous list messages this would never have occurred to me. I'd wonder if POB thought this up after the fact if he weren't so methodical.

Was he still feeling his own early dishonor? The source, perhaps, of the theme of many of his short stories?

A formalized sense of honor might become very important to someone who had once behaved badly. POB seemed very formal.

Very disturbing.

Marshall Rafferty

________
At, or about:
47°40'54"N. 122°22'8"W.


From: Steve Ross
Sent: Tuesday, November 13, 2001 7:24 AM
Subject: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

One disadvantage of this rollicking ongoing group is that it is easy to lose track of a thread. I like to read through to the end of the stack before replying to anything, since you never know when someone else will get the jump on you! But when the conversation spreads and tatters and gets all frizzy, in that wonderful way we have, it can be hard to go back and find the post you want to reply to. Hence I initiate a new topic to join the existing exchange about O'Brian's claim that Dil's death was a form of retribution inflicted on Stephen for what he had done regarding Jack and Diana.

As we all know by now, POB was skilled at misdirection and at creating a false image of himself and his work (I am still wondering whether there was any truth to his claim that he had experience on a sailing vessel of some kind; if not, that makes his artistry that much greater!). So we will never know the truth about what *originally* motivated him to write this episode in the way he did, despite his supposed "explanation" to an interviewer. But the fact that he could describe it that way shows that he could and did think about his characters in such terms, and I think that is the important thing. If you feel, as I do, that the author identified most strongly with Maturin, then the destruction of that beautifully drawn character is a painful experience O'Brian inflicted on himself, either because of what he had allowed Stephen to do to Jack, or because of what he had himself done in real life. Perhaps both.

Someone (Ray McPh?) said these speculations are "disturbing" . . . I agree. They are also enlightening.

Steve Ross
30° 24' 32"N
91° 05' 28"W


From: Robert Fleisher
Sent: Tuesday, November 13, 2001 9:36 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

I remember Don's original post with O'Brian's comments on the retribution idea, and I somehow jumped to the idea that Dil's death was Stephen's price for having killed Canning (it had been a while since I had read HMSS). But, of course, the duel occurs considerably later. So now I'm not at all clear on the issue--what is that that Stephen "had done regarding Jack and Diana" that required retribution? He and Jack were in competition for Diana, but I'm not clear on what he did that was "profoundly dishonourable." Somebody want to help me out?

Bob Fleisher Houston, TX


From: Greg White
Sent: Tuesday, November 13, 2001 9:39 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

He and Jack were in competition for Diana, but I'm not clear on what he did that was "profoundly dishonourable."

He manipulates Jack into staying away from Diana by pointing out his seeing Diana would greatly distress Sophie. This when they are discussing a letter that Jack has just received from Sophie, in which she releases him from their bond.

Greg

42º32'34.5" N
71º20'13.2" W


From: Pawel Golik
Sent: Tuesday, November 13, 2001 10:01 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

On Tuesday 13 November 2001 12:39, Greg White wrote:

He manipulates Jack into staying away from Diana by pointing out his seeing Diana would greatly distress Sophie.

But this is perfectly good advice. In the end Jack was much better off with Sophie, and Diana might have broken him completely. I imagine an impartial friend, withoud any interest in Diana would still give the same advice - stay away from that woman, keep to Sophie. Stephen did have interest in Diana, but still this advice was nothing "dishonourable".

The passage about Dil is one of the saddest parts of the Canon. My interpretation has always been that it's a metaphor for the relationships of Europeans with other cultures. We arrive, are welcome in good faith, also in good faith try to make other people happy our way, and the consequences are disatreous. Just like Stephen's gift caused Dil's death.

Pawel

--
Pawel Golik
http://www.gen.emory.edu/cmm/people/staff/pgolik.html
Currently at 33°48'53"N 84°19'25"W
Home is at 52°12'25"N 21°5'37"E


From: Jebvbva@AOL.COM
Sent: Tuesday, November 13, 2001 10:21 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

I think it is simplification to say"try to make people HAPPY our way" We, both european and american ,try to make people behave our way-- maybe we think they are happy but I doubt if most of them feel that way- The British empire is a good example- We hear of the 'great things' they did for the colonies- but not many are really grateful for their supervision- .The basic ideas are good and laid basis for godd, but the 'happy part' was more on the rulers' side than on the colonists.

Hawaii, Africa are other examples-Did the Boers care for the happiness of the natives?

In latter days, colonialism is less blatant but still there. Panama Canal zone, Oil interests in mid East.,etc

John B


From: Pawel Golik
Sent: Tuesday, November 13, 2001 10:27 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

That's what I meant. Still Stephen acted in perfectly good faith and couldn't possibly have predicted the outcome (although somebody more familiar with the facts of life there probably could).

Pawel


From: Jebvbva@AOL.COM
Sent: Tuesday, November 13, 2001 10:31 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

He might have been mislead by her valor and ability to defend herself. he mentions early in the scene that other children had bangles and were Ok- perhaps his were too extravagant .

John B


From: Michael R. Ward
Sent: Tuesday, November 13, 2001 11:24 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

At 11/13/2001 10:02 AM -0800, Pawel Golik wrote:

But this is perfectly good advice. In the end Jack was much better off with Sophie, and Diana might have broken him completely. I imagine an impartial friend, withoud any interest in Diana would still give the same advice - stay away from that woman, keep to Sophie. Stephen did have interest in Diana, but still this advice was nothing "dishonourable".

I think Pawel is correct here. In fact, doesn't Stephen himself grapple with whether his advice is honest or out of his ulterior motive? (I haven't kept up with the group read.) Nevertheless, he can't help believe that his actions were dishonorable.

The passage about Dil is one of the saddest parts of the Canon. My interpretation has always been that it's a metaphor for the relationships of Europeans with other cultures. We arrive, are welcome in good faith, also in good faith try to make other people happy our way, and the consequences are disatreous. Just like Stephen's gift caused Dil's death.

I like this interpretation a lot. Indeed, this little bit of HMSS could be excerpted as a parable on Westerners' dealing with other cultures.

Mike

40° 05' 27" N 088° 16' 57" W


From: Susan Wenger
Sent: Tuesday, November 13, 2001 11:56 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

I believe POB was describing the way there was no good solution to the "Dil" situation - Stephen could buy her for fourteen pence and keep her as a pet? Bring her to Mrs Broads for a life as a serving girl? Leave her where she was, and soon her grandmother would sell her and her maidenhead for fourteen cents? Dil's situation was hopeless, she had no future. Go live with Diana as a servant?

POB had other plans for Diana. POB may have thought Dil would be better off suddenly dead than living in misery, her free spirit broken. He described similar thoughts towards Diana - despair over any relationship that would break her spirit. Diana accepted OF HER OWN VOLITION various alternatives to living with Mrs Williams and the Teapot: Dil was too young to make a choice, so POB chose for her - death. Diana "died" in Stephen's eyes when she consciously moved with the goal of pleasing Canning. Dil was a revisiting of the same theme. IMHO.

- Susan


From: Kerry Webb
Sent: Tuesday, November 13, 2001 12:00 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

So what do we make of the subsequent treatment of Sarah and Emily Sweeting? Remorse on the part of POB/Stephen perhaps?

Kerry


From: Susan Wenger
Sent: Tuesday, November 13, 2001 12:07 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

That was POB's description of yet another possibe answer. Diana accepted the "patronage" of Canning and Johnstone to escape her unhappy circumstances. Dil died. Emily and Sarah were delivered to Mrs Broad's to be serving girls. Who was best off? POB didn't say - he just showed various situations that females without means, without support, without marriage, without fathers, could encounter. He had an idea he wanted to explore, and he explored different possibilities every time he revisited the problem. Maybe.


From: Robert Fleisher
Sent: Tuesday, November 13, 2001 12:51 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

I think Greg has the right of it, that the retribution is for Stephen's actions in keeping Jack away from Diane, even if it's good advice, even if it is probably unnecessary advice:

"Jack had nearly wrecked his career because of her [Diana], and his chance of marrying Sophia. In retrospect he resented it bitterly, just as he resented her unfaithfulness, although she owed him no fidelity. He hated her, in a way; he thought her dangerous, if not evil; and he dreaded an encounter - dreaded it for Stephen more than for himself." (Norton, p. 198).

But Stephen's self-acknowledged dishonor is right there; I just missed the significance the several times I read it. That's why it pays to reread these books. Thanks, Greg:

"'Stephen: I say, Stephen,...Here's Sophie writing me the damnedest rigmarole...the drift of it is, that if I choose to feel myself free, nothing would make her happier. Free to do what, in God's name?...What the devil can she mean by it? Can you make head or tail of it?' "'It may be that someone has fabricated - it may be that someone has told her that you have come to India to see Diana Villiers,' said Stephen, hiding his face with shame as he spoke. This was a direct attempt at keeping them apart, for his own purposes - partly for his own purposes. It was wholly uncandid, of course, and he had never been uncandid with Jack before. It filled him with anger; but still he went on, 'or that you may see her here.'" (Norton, p. 205)

And to address your question about Stephen grappling with the honesty of his advice, the sequence ends with:

"It was Stephen who took pen and ink and sat down to his diary...'But now [Jack] is at a stand. With that odious freedom I prattled on: in doing so I overcame my shame; but it was bitter cruel and sharp while it lasted. In the instant between his asking, could I make head or tail of it? and my reply, the Devil said to me, "If Aubrey is really vexed with Miss Williams, he will turn to Diana Villiers again. You already have your work cut out with Mr. Canning." I fell at once. Yet already I have almost persuaded myself that my subsequent words were the same as those an honest man would have used: myself, if this attachment had not existed.'" (Norton, p. 208)

I would argue that O'Brian's position would be that, whether the advice was good or not, the motive was dishonorable, despite Stephen's self-justification. But Dil's death seems awfully Old-Testament, even if she was put into the book for that purpose alone.

Bob Fleisher
Houston, TX


From: Charlezzzz@AOL.COM
Sent: Tuesday, November 13, 2001 1:00 PM
Subject: HMSS Death and Retribution

Pawel wrote: "The passage about Dil is one of the saddest parts of the Canon. My interpretation has always been that it's a metaphor for the relationships of Europeans with other cultures. We arrive, are welcome in good faith, also in good faith try to make other people happy our way, and the consequences are disastrous. Just like Stephen's gift caused Dil's death."

To which I cry "Bravo!" And stamp my feet. And cheer.

And, as to POB's comments (which he may have indeed made) to the reporter, he was following the rule of never speaking quite truly to a long-eared undeedy journalist gowk. The gowk will misquote you anyway. [Journalist Members of the Gunroom are excluded from this comment.][Most of them, anyhow.][Or maybe just one or two.]

Charlezzzz, which does not, of course, preclude some of POB's own deepest feelings from *also* driving his art in the direction it took. (I love to remember that Freud himself pointed out the value--and the need--to "overanalyze.") Who will claim that POB was simpler and easier-to-see-through than any of us?


From: Rosemary Davis
Sent: Tuesday, November 13, 2001 1:06 PM
Subject: Dil/Book 19

Uh, but book 19 was The Hundred Days, not the Yellow Admiral...

Interesting discussion of Dil's significance. The explanation of her as the symbol of Stephen's lost innocence (Dil=Stephen's innocence, Stephen's gift=Dil's death, Stephen unwittingly kills his own innocence) is logical, but somehow I don't really see her in that way. And somehow I don't feel as if Stephen has lost his innocence. If he really had, he'd feel no remorse over his actions with Jack. I think that Pawel and Susan have given better interpretations of this situation.

To me, it seems that POB is presenting the question of whether it's worth getting our heart's desire if that attainment destroys us. Is it better to have had the moment of joy and lost everything as a result, or to have never experienced the joy? This comes up again and again in his work. Perhaps Dil has no symbolic significance at all...but I certainly cried my eyes out over this passage.

I do think there's a difference in the situation of Sarah and Emily, in that they are originally presented with less obvious personalities than Dil. And despite the fact that they end up as servants, they don't seem overtly unhappy.

Also, despite SMALL SPOILER .
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the fact that she does indeed marry Stephen, Diana never really strikes me as "tamed". We are constantly presented with the possibility of her infidelity and/or separation from Stephen. And it's her wildness in driving that ultimately destroys her. -RD


From: Peter Mackay
Sent: Tuesday, November 13, 2001 1:52 PM
Subject: Re: Dil/Book 19

Yes! Rosemary, that's exactly right.

She is never tamed for more than a moment. If she were to be Sophie-like, she would be boring. For the sake of the narrative, she must always be a blithe spirit, liable to run away with a passing adventurer. That Stephen succeeds, even for a moment here and there, is one of the triumphs of the Aubreyad, one of the roars of the canon.


From: Ray McPherson
Sent: Tuesday, November 13, 2001 4:47 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

I think that the episode of Dil, when Stephen causes her death with a gift of her heart's desire is a foreshadowing of Diana's death. When Stephen marries Diana he provides her the money and independence which ultimately leads to her death.

Vat denk je?

Ray McP


From: Marshall Rafferty
Sent: Tuesday, November 13, 2001 5:33 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

I've been kicking this retribution thing around in my head today (an odd thing for me to do at work), and am still undecided. I'm also not sure why I found POB's explanation (as related by an interviewer):

""the point of the death of Dil is that [Maturin] had done a wholly dishonourable thing that has its image in the death of that child. You do something profoundly dishonourable and you've killed something, you've killed a part of your honour."

almost twisted, when Rowen's statement:

"Dil is innocent, pure, clear sighted, giver of unconditional love to Stephen; Diana is worldly, tainted, constantly involved in muddled thinking, and has no capability to love without payment of some kind. Stephen's touch kills Dil; Diana's touch 'kills' Stephen."

seems to me quite straightforward.

Stephen's act of "dishonour" in misleading Jack seems kind of small potatoes to me, though Stephen is harder on himself. There are reasons he needs his drugs

Still, I can think of a number of reasons why Dil might die. Maybe she was that innocent, happy, youthful Stephen whom POB occasionally mentions. A youth whom Stephen, and probably others, killed years before.

Maybe POB felt an "insert tragedy here" mood coming on, and developed the need-to-pay rationale afterwards. He certainly felt, as someone just noted, a need to hurt Stephen, and possibly himself.

I also wonder why Dil so quickly lost her street smarts.

Marshall Rafferty

________
At, or about:
47°40'54"N. 122°22'8"W.


From: Gregg Germain
Sent: Wednesday, November 14, 2001 5:20 AM
Subject: Re: Dil/Book 19

Rosemary Davis wrote:

Interesting discussion of Dil's significance. The explanation of her as the symbol of Stephen's lost innocence (Dil=Stephen's innocence, Stephen's gift=Dil's death, Stephen unwittingly kills his own innocence) is logical, but somehow I don't really see her in that way. And somehow I don't feel as if Stephen has lost his innocence.

I agree with you because Stephen had to have lost his innocence LONG before these events. Consider his life as a spy; his involvement with the '98 rising. Those are innocence-killers.

=====
Gregg
Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)


From: Gregg Germain
Sent: Wednesday, November 14, 2001 5:34 AM
Subject: Re: Dil/Book 19

Peter Mackay wrote:

She is never tamed for more than a moment. If she were to be Sophie-like, she would be boring. For the sake of the narrative, she must always be a blithe spirit, liable to run away with a passing adventurer.

Hmm is it possible that there is some POB in the character Diana, when we think of his leaving his first family?

=====
Gregg
Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)


From: Gregg Germain
Sent: Wednesday, November 14, 2001 5:38 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

Ray McPherson wrote: I think that the episode of Dil, when Stephen causes her death with a gift of her heart's desire is a foreshadowing of Diana's death. When Stephen marries Diana he provides her the money and independence which ultimately leads to her death.

Nah. Diana was Diana and she took over the reins at all times, whether she had money (or was under the protection of someone who did) or not.

I cannot recall for sure at the moment, but did major figures (Diana plus one other who I shall not name for spoiler's sake) died AFTER POB's wife died? Could be as simple as a melancholy settling over POB.

=====
Gregg
Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)


From: Gregg Germain
Sent: Wednesday, November 14, 2001 5:41 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

Marshall Rafferty wrote:

Maybe POB felt an "insert tragedy here" mood coming on, and developed the need-to-pay rationale afterwards. He certainly felt, as someone just noted, a need to hurt Stephen, and possibly himself.

You know it coudl be as simple as that: The story was coming to and end. Stephen was leaving India, presumably. So what was POB going to do with Dil? Lots of options. Maybe he simply chose the most heart-rendering?

I also wonder why Dil so quickly lost her street smarts.

I've often wondered that myself. She would have known the dangers even before she got the bangles.

=====
Gregg
Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)


From: Don Seltzer
Sent: Wednesday, November 14, 2001 5:56 AM
Subject: Re: Dil/Book 19 (Spoilers)

At 5:34 AM -0800 11/14/2001, Gregg Germain wrote:

Hmm is it possible that there is some POB in the character Diana, when we think of his leaving his first family?

[Spoilers]

Or possibly POB was indulging in a personal fantasy related to events in his earlier life. In this fantasy, it is the mother who cannot cope and abandons the infant daughter with a birth defect (WDS). The love and care of the father then cures the child (COM). To complete the story, the mother must return just long enough to see what a fine job the father has done, and to become the dutiful wife (TYA). But it is too late; he has already found a potential replacement, and the bad wife's days are numbered (THD). Of course the father needn't worry about actually raising the child. That's what the servants are for.

Don Seltzer


From: Marian Van Til
Sent: Wednesday, November 14, 2001 6:42 AM
Subject: Stephen's dishonourable act (was: RE: [POB] HMSS Death and Retribution

Bob wrote:

I would argue that O'Brian's position would be that, whether the advice was good or not, the motive was dishonorable, despite Stephen's self-justification. But Dil's death seems awfully Old-Testament, even if she was put into the book for that purpose alone.

Marshall replied:

...Stephen's act of "dishonour" in misleading Jack seems kind of small potatoes to me, though Stephen is harder on himself. There are reasons he needs his drugs

I think the only way this is really understandable is if we try to step out of our 20th/21st century mindset, a time in which we've arrived at a kind of vague morality no longer grounded in "natural law," with the ultimate focus being on the individual and his/her rights, with far less thought for well-ordered *society* than Jack and Stephen had. That philosophical/moral underpinning which is normal to us (though some of us would argue its validity -- and effectiveness) was foreign to the 18th/early 19th century. Consequently, I think it's extremely difficult for us to comprehend in any gut way the concept of honour in that time (and earlier, of course).

We know things ultimately turned out with Jack and Sophie. But Stephen could just as well have helped destroy Jack's -- and Sophie's -- life with his dishonorable act. More, he was blatantly lying to his dearest friend to further his own ends, i.e., he was making his own word worthless, and making himself untrustworthy (whether Jack knew that or not is a moot point). That, I submit, is far more than "small potatoes" -- even in our time, I hope; but it's repercussions would have been far greater then in a time when one's word was -- had to be -- as good and as reliable as any written contract.

Marian


From: Rosemary Davis
Sent: Wednesday, November 14, 2001 9:03 AM
Subject: HMSS Groupread

Finally finished rereading HMSS last night...here are a few of my favorite bits not already referenced in the groupread.

Pages refer to the Norton hardcover.

P. 164, Stephen is teaching Bonden to write, and quotes a poem, "From thence our rolling neighbours we shall know/And on the lunar world securely pry By God I believe I see the albatross."

"...believe I see the albatross," said Bonden's lips silently. "It don't rhyme. Another line, sir, maybe?"

P. 186, "...sailing through a milky sea towards a possible though unlikely ecstasy at an indefinite remove was, if not the fulness of life, then something like its shadow."

And someone already pointed out the obvious: it's natural, ain't it, when one is composing fiction, to work out one's fantasies by having one's characters enact them.

Regarding Dil losing her street smarts: could this be a metaphor for the foolishness to which one is prone (even while knowing better) when one has fallen hopelessly in love? Been there, done that. -RD
42º44'8"N, 84º32'21"W


From: Isabelle Hayes
Sent: Tuesday, November 13, 2001 10:15 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

I know it's not done any more, but there is something to be said for what European culture did for other peoples, e.g. in those societies that were used to enslave their neighbors, and/or eat them, Christianity was an alternative way of looking at the world, and some of them actually were grateful for the opportunity to do away with the old ways.

Isabelle Hayes


From: Gregg Germain
Sent: Wednesday, November 14, 2001 10:26 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

Quite right. Not everything the colonialists did - or tried to do - was bad; and the myth of the "noble savage" has been debunked.

=====
Gregg
Sailing Master, Artillery Capt., Glover's Marblehead Regiment (GMR)


From: Jerry Shurman
Sent: Wednesday, November 14, 2001 10:10 AM
Subject: HMSS Groupread

Responding to Rosemary's post, a paragraph I especially enjoyed is the one where O'Brian describes Stephen helplessly starting to laugh in response to one of Jack's silly moments. Unlike the passages from Stephen's diary, were he's so analytical and cynical and hard on himself and on the world around him, here we directly see him responding to human warmth despite everything. A touching little moment.

-Jerry


From: losmp
Sent: Wednesday, November 14, 2001 11:45 AM
Subject: Re: Dil/Book 19 (Spoilers)

[Spoilers]
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Or possibly POB was indulging in a personal fantasy related to events in his earlier life. In this fantasy, it is the mother who cannot cope and abandons the infant daughter with a birth defect (WDS). The love and care of the father then cures the child (COM). To complete the story, the mother must return just long enough to see what a fine job the father has done, and to become the dutiful wife (TYA). But it is too late; he has already found a potential replacement, and the bad wife's days are numbered (THD). Of course the father needn't worry about actually raising the child. That's what the servants are for.

Or make the child so engaging and charming, that even a baby-killer would be happy to nurture and raise her.

Lois


From: Ray McPherson
Sent: Wednesday, November 14, 2001 12:07 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

Bob wrote:

I would argue that O'Brian's position would be that, whether the advice was good or not, the motive was dishonorable,

I beg your pardon, but I somehow missed the beginning of this tread. What is the dishonorable thing that Stephen did?

Ray McP


From: Peter Mackay
Sent: Wednesday, November 14, 2001 2:59 PM
Subject: Re: Dil/Book 19

Hmm is it possible that there is some POB in the character Diana, when we think of his leaving his first family?

I don't think there's any question. At one point she leaves behind her own daughter, a daughter in need of love and care to overcome her affliction.

The difference is that Diana always comes back.

I don't think I need to mention the curious role of children in the Aubreyad - so often they are not just children, but objects of guilt. Even Jack's brood - in TMC Stephen suspects that Jack throws the girls in the air, and Jack feels bad about it.


From: Marshall Rafferty
Sent: Wednesday, November 14, 2001 5:45 PM
Subject: Re: Stephen's dishonourable act (was: RE: [POB] HMSS Death and Retribution

On Wed, 14 Nov 2001 09:42:02 -0500, Marian wrote:

But Stephen could just as well have helped destroy Jack's -- and Sophie's -- life with his dishonorable act. More, he was blatantly lying to his dearest friend to further his own ends, i.e., he was making his own word worthless, and making himself untrustworthy (whether Jack knew that or not is a moot point). That, I submit, is far more than "small potatoes" -- even in our time,

Very well, I withdraw the potatoes, but I think that Bob's description of killing Dil in retribution for Stephen's falsehood is indeed "Old Testament." Kind of like those kids who were eaten by bears for making fun of old what's'isname.

I'm afraid that I don't share Marian's view of the decline in morality from Stephen's time to ours. I think people have been making this claim throughout recorded history. Frankly, I've never read anything in history, literature (including the canon) or Scripture which leads me to believe that people used to be better in their personal morality than they are today. Our views of societal roles, certainly they have changed, but I hear Cicero crying "Oh, the Times! Oh, the Morals!"

I also am not sure that honor precisely equals morality, even in Stephen's time. I'm trying to remember whether or not Stephen ever frantically sought out a priest for confession the way he sought those coca leaves. Did he ever mention confession of his sins? One would think he'd have dwelt on it from time to time.

I think that part of what I found "disturbing" about POB's supposed sense of honor was its stilted, formal sound. (Of course, the source is questionable, and he *did* have a mischievous way of answering questions.

If I'd only read the canon, I'd have thought that POB cared about honor, but not sin. If I'd only read his short stories, I'd have thought that POB was obsessed with sin.

Marshall, more questions than answers, as usual

________
At, or about:
47°40'54"N. 122°22'8"W.


From: Jebvbva@AOL.COM
Sent: Wednesday, November 14, 2001 6:40 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

In a message dated 11/14/2001 12:04:50 PM Eastern Standard Time, bhayes@CATSKILL.NET writes:

some of them actually were grateful for the opportunity to do away with the old ways.

The same argument could be made to make the Bolsheviks, the good guys!


From: Adam Quinan
Sent: Wednesday, November 14, 2001 7:11 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS Death and Retribution (Stephen, Dil, etc.)

Arthur Ransome, better known nowadays as a children's author, was present in Russia for most of WW1, first researching Russian folk tales and then as a journalist and war correespondent. He was a witness of the demise of the Tsarist regime and the first and second 1917 Revolutions. He was not a Communist, though he was on the Liberal side of early 20th century British politics, (so was that crusty old Conservative, Winston Churchill).

His opinion was that the tsarist regime was a total disaster for the Russian people and that the Kerensky government wasn't much of an improvement. However he was captivated by the Bolshevik leaders who he knew quite well, he played chess with Lenin and eventually married Trotsky's secretary. His opinion was that the Bolsheviks, particularly in the immediate aftermath of the Revolution and war, were a great improvement over the previous regimes.

He gave up publicising his political beliefs after his return to England in the early 1920s, so his views of subsequent Stalinist developments is unknown.


From: Marian Van Til
Sent: Thursday, November 15, 2001 9:16 AM
Subject: Re: Stephen's dishonourable act

I'm afraid that I don't share Marian's view of the decline in morality from Stephen's time to ours. I think people have been making this claim throughout recorded history. Frankly, I've never read anything in history, literature (including the canon) or Scripture which leads me to believe that people used to be better in their personal morality than they are today. Our views of societal roles, certainly they have changed, but I hear Cicero crying "Oh, the Times! Oh, the Morals!"

I didn't mean quite what Marshall inferred from what I said (but I understand why he inferred it!). I think he's right in terms of the individual, personal morality of some probably being not all that much worse than it's been throughout history (how's that for a qualified statement?).

What I really meant was that we are now, for the first time in human history that I know of, living in a time in which -- at least according to philosophers and sociologists and ethicists -- there is no longer any commonly acepted *objective standard*, outside our individual selves, by which to judge whether something is moral. Oh, the vestiges of that [Judeo-Christian] standard are still here, and many, many people still adhere to it, but in terms of the underlying philosophical underpinnings of society, that centuries-long foundation is crumbling -- to be replaced with ... what?

Most people, I would guess, haven't yet thought through the most unsetttling implications of where that's going to lead and, e.g, how it will change (and already has) human dignity.

Marian


From: sue reynolds
Sent: Thursday, November 15, 2001 8:55 PM
Subject: Dil

I can't quite follow that Dil had to die to punish Stephen for deceiving Jack. I think that the whole episode (which is, by the way, one of my favorites in the canon-and I like the bear suit too!) is a way to show that Stephen has the ability to immerse himself in a way of living that would be very different from the European mold. The only times he is stressed or conscious of how he should behave are when the Europeans erupt onto the scene. Had Diana not come into Bombay, he might never have returned to the ship.

Nonetheless, when Dil (a symbol of the culture, someone to whom he might have felt an ongoing obligation) is killed, he recognizes that he may not stay; he is foreign to the culture and his actions, no matter how well intentioned, will not result in what he desires. His grief beside the funeral pyre is at least partly a recognition that he has to leave the hope of oblivion and return to the world of rules and obligations and espionage.

Sue Reynolds


From: Susan Wenger
Sent: Friday, November 16, 2001 5:52 AM
Subject: Re: Stephen's dishonourable act (was: RE: [POB] HMSS Death and Retribution

Marshall Rafferty wrote:

Very well, I withdraw the potatoes,

I generally don't complain about spelling errors on the list, making my fair share I'm sure: but the proper canon spelling is:

potoooooooo


From: Steve Ross
Sent: Friday, November 16, 2001 11:04 AM
Subject: HMSS: Stephen in love; Sophie; Diana

Also recently quoted by another lissun:

"At times, whatever he might say, he was surely lost in a cloud of unknowing; but at least it was a peaceful cloud at present and sailing through a milky sea towards a possible though unlikely ecstasy at an indefinite remove was, if not the fulness of life, then something like its shadow."

Can there be any better description of the feeling of pleasurable wonderment/anticipation one feels when in love, yet separated from the object of one's love, by distance and/or by ignorance as to his or her attitude towards oneself?

I have been thinking about these things as I play catch-up, a few weeks behind the avante-garde (or so it would seem) in the Group Read. A few pages after the quoted passage, Stephen the naturalist is enjoying himself in the chains, reveling in the warm spray of the southern ocean while still pondering Diana and reciting to himself a psalm about being blessed and cleaned "whiter than snow" by ritual cleansing ("Asperges me, Domine . . ."). This, for me, rounds out the feeling of this episode as a kind of blessed period of "suspended animation" in which Stephen would be happy to remain forever, were it not inevitable that he would be brought up suddenly face to face with reality and possibly Diana's rejection (I don't want to be crudely symbolist here, but there has got to be some significance to the fact that the "Asperges me" scene ends suddenly with Stephen capturing a sea snake and the simultaneous cry of Land Ho!).

I don't know why I feel the need to go over that, since POB described it all better than I could ever hope to . . . but it forms a background to the questions I am still framing in my mind:

Given all that we have been observing about the Jack-Diana-Stephen triangle and Stephen's "betrayal" of Jack by manipulating him away from Diana, what, if any, is the import of Stephen's relationship with *Sophie*? Stephen and Jack spar verbally, with some embarrassment and misunderstanding (Stephen's feeling of shame playing counterpoint), immediately after each of them has read a letter or letters from Sophie[*see added question below!]. We know, or think we know, what Sophie means to Jack, but what does she mean to Stephen? Maybe this: she is the "ideal" friend of the opposite gender, and she and Stephen can be completely open with each other. This is the type of relationship that, at one point, seemed possible for Stephen and Diana; but that was derailed by Romance rearing its ugly head (to Diana's regret). In any case, it is their friendship (S. and S.) that makes it possible for Stephen to give Jack good (though not disinterested) advice about his relationship with Sophie, right? Because he knows Sophie's position and her mind, much better than Jack.

Sorry if I am boring you-all with all this. What I am wondering is whether it is not possible that it is his friendship with *Sophie* that makes it possible for Stephen to have any happiness, or at least the anticipation of happiness, as he seems to have during the trip across the sea to India. Despite all his disappointments, he at least has that one genuine relationship to fall back on. And, it seems, that may be exactly what is meant at the very end of _Post Captain_, where it is *Stephen*, not Jack, who says to himself, "Sophie . . . God bless her."

Thinking he may be trying to be too smart here . . .

Steve Ross
30° 24' 32"N
91° 05' 28"W
[*ADDED QUESTION: How come the mail always gets everywhere so much more quickly than the Surprise?]


From: Jebvbva@AOL.COM
Sent: Friday, November 16, 2001 12:56 PM
Subject: Mixaphors(groupread)

Just got a break from chores and read some more of HMS Surprise.

1- Am I right in thinking "Autre pays,autre merde"(206) might be a French mixaphor?

2 I was struck by the scene in which Jack is tring to explain his reluctance to writing Sophie Several times jack apologizes for possible 'insulting' Stephen and Stephen takes great offense at the remark- "It would be scarcely honourable to pay it off..."

I see no reflection,in this statement, on Stephen, but he rejoins "Do you pretend to teach me the difference between honourable and dishonourable conduct?"

Then Stephen turns around and graphically and brutally describers Jack as 'obese, 'scarred', 'old','earless','no Adonis', no 'flashing wit'-

Such an attacck should have desereved Stephen a very fat lip- but all jack does is gaze with a heavy , troubled, contenance and walk away- he even THANKS Stephen. In his subsequent penning, Stephen does explain his reason-The Debbil made me do it.

Blatherin' John B


From: Steve Ross
Sent: Friday, November 16, 2001 1:13 PM
Subject: Re: Mixaphors(groupread)

John B wrote:

Just got a break from chores and read some more of HMS Surprise. 1- Am I right in thinking "Autre pays,autre merde"(206) might be a French mixaphor?

John, you and I are at almost exactly the same point in our reading! Yes, I'm pretty sure you're right about the saying. What Jack meant to say was "autre pays, autre moeurs": "Another country, different habits" (kind of "when in Rome do as the Romans do"--but not exactly). What he ends up saying is "Another country, different s**t"!

As for the subsequent exchange, I kind of thought that Stephen's very prickly reply (to what Jack certainly didn't mean as a disparaging remark about his honor) sprang out of his irritation/anger at himself for half-consciously steering Jack away from Diana (as we were discussing at the beginning of the Death and Retribution thread!). When he then says, or writes, "the Devil made me do it" it seemed that he was remonstrating with himself over that "dishonourable" act. No?

I like how you draw the connection between that exchange and Stephen's graphic series of insults flung in Jack's face!

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a complacent pragmatical worldly fellow (HMSS p. 196) . . .

Steve Ross
30° 24' 32"N
91° 05' 28"W


From: Don Seltzer
Sent: Friday, November 16, 2001 5:34 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS: Stephen in love; Sophie; Diana

At 1:04 PM -0600 11/16/1, Steve Ross wrote:

Diana's rejection (I don't want to be crudely symbolist here, but there has got to be some significance to the fact that the "Asperges me" scene ends suddenly with Stephen capturing a sea snake and the simultaneous cry of Land Ho!).

There is no symbolism whatsover in Stephen's determined pursuit of the sea serpent, despite the warnings of the crew that it was poisonous. Nor is there any symbolism to be attached to the scorpion on the stairs, or the two tigers named Right and Wrong guarding the house, or the snake that spooks Johnstone's horse when he comes courting Diana.

Don Seltzer


From: Charlezzzz@AOL.COM
Sent: Friday, November 16, 2001 6:31 PM
Subject: Stephen in love (Sophie, Diana)

Don Seltzer saith: "There is no symbolism whatsover in Stephen's determined pursuit of the sea serpent, despite the warnings of the crew that it was poisonous."

Is Don hinting that Diana was a sea serpent? Not poss! That sea serpent, once caught, managed to kill itself.

Charlezzzz, remembering the story of Lamia, who appears (in Keats' poem) as a serpent in the guise of a beautiful woman (or is it vice versa?)...and who is identified by some wild scholars as Lilith. Diana as Lilith? Not poss.


From: Rowen 84
Sent: Friday, November 16, 2001 10:28 PM
Subject: Re: Stephen's dishonourable act (was: RE: [POB] HMSS Death and Retribution

In a message dated 11-14-01 7:46:31 PM, rafferty@DRIZZLE.COM writes:

If I'd only read the canon, I'd have thought that POB cared about honor, but not sin. If I'd only read his short stories, I'd have thought that POB was obsessed with sin.

Interesting comment, Marshall.

I've been trying to think how to explain what I think POB was after. I can't quite put it in words. I don't think it is either honor or sin but something that is deeply personal and related to his idea of self - self-respect, or self honesty, or anti-hypocrisy, or something like that. So Stephen KNOWS he's false to his friend and it doesn't matter that no one else knows, or that it has a good result for Jack and Sophie. It only matters that Stephen is false. He's lost control over some part of himself and it's that loss that matters. Control is one of the central issues for Stephen, but not control of others: self-control.

Does this make any sense?

Rowen


From: Marshall Rafferty
Sent: Saturday, November 17, 2001 7:25 AM
Subject: Re: Stephen's dishonourable act (was: RE: [POB] HMSS Death and Retribution

On Sat, 17 Nov 2001 01:28:15 EST, Rowen wrote:

I've been trying to think how to explain what I think POB was after. I can't quite put it in words. I don't think it is either honor or sin but something that is deeply personal and related to his idea of self - self-respect, or self honesty, or anti-hypocrisy, or something like that.

Ah, Rowen, you've done far better in putting it into words than I was able to. I was groping.

Self-respect. I keep wondering whether we're talking about Stephen or POB, or both.

So Stephen KNOWS he's false to his friend and it doesn't matter that no one else knows, or that it has a good result for Jack and Sophie. It only matters that Stephen is false. He's lost control over some part of himself and it's that loss that matters. Control is one of the central issues for Stephen, but not control of others: self-control. Does this make any sense?

It makes sense to me; not only for Stephen, with his blend of cold self-analysis and strained rationalizations (though, don't we all do that at times?), but his continual drug dependencies. Drugs must be wonderful things when thought is too painful.

I don't believe that Stephen ever did resolve his conflicts; neither did O'Brian, or he'd perhaps been more accepting, less angry when the story of his birth name and background came out.

So. This is also what's so wonderful about these stories and this special friendship between Jack and Stephen. Morality is not harped on, and conventional honor simply takes a back seat, just as that impending duel is dropped at the realization that enough blood has been shed.

I'm sure that this friendship was something which the sometimes lonely author must have dreamed about. Maybe his relationship with his brother Sydney had some of these qualities of natural warmth.

By the way, I've not yet read King's biography of POB.

Marshall Rafferty

________
At, or about:
47°40'54"N. 122°22'8"W.


From: Mary S
Sent: Saturday, November 17, 2001 7:42 AM
Subject: Re: Stephen in love (Sophie, Diana)

In a message dated 11/16/01 8:31:58 PM Central Standard Time, Charlezzzz@AOL.COM writes:

Diana as Lilith? Not poss.

Diana as Lilith, Sophie as Eve... seems rather poss to me.

pragmatical and absolute, [FoW8]

Mary S
35° 58' 11" N
86° 48' 57" W


From: Steven K Ross
Sent: Saturday, November 17, 2001 8:49 AM
Subject: Silly? Maybe not . . . how about facetious? (was Re: [POB] Stephen in love (Sophie, Diana)

OK, that's the last time I go racking my brain to wring some hifalutin' interpretation out of one of these books for you lot! There I went and squeezed every ounce of what meagre intelligence I could summon up into my post, in an attempt to understand what's going on, and all I get is some words from Don "Mr. Facetious" Seltzer . . . looked like a proper flat, I did!

By the way, I know I should try to stop making these cross-volume, rather tenuous connections, but: Doesn't Stephen write in his diary that Dil suspects him of being a "were-bear?" My knowledge of folklore is kind of shaky, but I assume this would be analogous to a werewolf. Where else in the Canon does one of the major characters appear in the guise of a *bear*?

Don wrote:

"There is no symbolism whatsover in Stephen's determined pursuit of the sea serpent, despite the warnings of the crew that it was poisonous."

and Charlezzz added:

"Is Don hinting that Diana was a sea serpent? Not poss! That sea serpent, once caught, managed to kill itself.

Charlezzzz, remembering the story of Lamia, who appears (in Keats' poem) as a serpent in the guise of a beautiful woman (or is it vice versa?)...and who is identified by some wild scholars as Lilith. Diana as Lilith? Not poss." etc. ...

Steve Ross
Whatever the hell those coordinates are


From: Jebvbva@AOL.COM
Sent: Saturday, November 17, 2001 12:08 PM
Subject: HMS Surprise( group read)Dil

I stayed up vey late last night after trying to stay ahead of the post ts that 'jest keep on tickin' and finished HMSS.

As I drifted off, my mind wandered around the Dil death - and suddenly, I got the thought that her death was not such a bad thing. Stephen realized that in a few months or years, she would be forced into prostitution or abject poverty- with a short life hardly worth living. Her youthful zest would be squelched. His alternatives did not seem to him to be much better-servant or such i n England if he bought her,total revamp of her self if given over to the Portuguese for training. By presenting her with the one thing that she longed for, the bangles, she had probably reached the zenith of her life-nothing would ever surpass that joy- So to die at that moment is, to me, not the worst way to go. Stephen remarks that there were few signs of trauma


From: Jebvbva@AOL.COM
Sent: Saturday, November 17, 2001 12:20 PM
Subject: HMSS- (group read)

As i re- read the battle scene near end of HMSS, I again felt the drama and suspense of that fight. It was as good as the first time. when he did scenes like this, POB was at his (Non-philosophical) best.

In this book, I found Stephen very irritating- granted, he was in some agony over Diana, but some of his inner m,eanness semmed to come through. His ripping of Jack for not writing was brutal, but in turn he takes offense at jack for a remark on 'honour' that i no way was aimed at him. then he does that hatchet job onthe two girls who are denigrating Diana(yes, they were callous, but he was older,more worldly but still brutal.) Part of his description was on their cleanliness ,where he is a total slob, oblivious to even elemental toilet,- glad he never operated on me- All in all, I donot find him ,in this book, a very sympathetic character.

splavicatin' John B


From: Don Seltzer
Sent: Saturday, November 17, 2001 4:49 PM
Subject: Re: Silly? Maybe not . . . how about facetious?

Steven K Ross wrote:

OK, that's the last time I go racking my brain to wring some hifalutin' interpretation out of one of these books for you lot! There I went and squeezed every ounce of what meagre intelligence I could summon up into my post, in an attempt to understand what's going on, and all I get is some words from Don "Mr. Facetious" Seltzer . . . looked like a proper flat, I did!

At least you didn't call me "Mr. Farcical Comic." My apologies for a weak attempt at humor that fell short of the mark. I would very much regret if you were discouraged from making future insightful comments.

...And the life of COCHRANE by Robert Harvey, yes, =that= Cochrane.... Has anyone else read this biography and do they have an opinion to share? I found it pretty enlightening, but was irritated by some of his strange habits, for instance, calling any ship, of any size, that is armed a "gunboat."

Having read several of the Cochrane biographies, I thought it to be a "me too" book, offering no more, and in some instances less than previous publications. It would be hard for any biography of Cochrane not to be highly entertaining, but this one is marred with numerous errors.

Don Seltzer


From: Ladyshrike@AOL.COM
Sent: Saturday, November 17, 2001 7:13 PM
Subject: GroupRead: HMS Surprise

Several items -

(All page numbers refer to Norton paperbacks.)

1. Lazaretto Island (page 73): I was unable to find anything at Google about a specific Lazaretto Island at Port Mahon - but other references re "lazaretto" point to leper colonies at various places around the world, some on islands even.

While I was searching for Lazaretto Island, I came across an interesting webiste, put together by Francis Miles - an online PASC of sorts (scroll down to the bottom of the page):

http://freespace.virgin.net/francis.miles/

2. Mandragore (page 74): why, it's "mandrake," for all love!

From: http://library.thinkquest.org/C007974/1_1man.htm

"It was believed that mandrake possessed the magic power to heal a great variety of diseases, to induce a feeling of love, affection and happiness. That is why the roots of mandrake used to be as expensive as gold. However, except for the myths about this herb, there is also documented data that it has been widely used in ancient medicine. A Roman physician reported co mplicated surgical operations having been performed in Alexandria under the anaesthetic effect of mandrake. Arabian physicians also used it for anaesthetic purposes. In 11th and 12th centuries, mandrake was recognized as an effective painkiller by the famous at that time Universities of Bolonia and Salerno.

The “amazing” effects of this herb are actually due to the high content of the alkaloids scopolamine, mandragorin, and hyosciamine. Mandrake is no longer used in medicine. All myths about this plant have already been dispelled and there is no mystery about it anymore. "

3. Old Subtlety (page 87): Does anyone know to whom this refers?

4. Cecilia Williams and her "much-teazed yellow hair" (page 91): Is this "teazed" the same as our contemporary "teased" hair? Does teasing or teazing imply the use of the heads of the teazle plant, long used to raise the nap on woolen goods? Were the heads of teazles in vogue in 1800 for "teasing" hair? Am I barking up the wrong plant?

For more on the teazle plant, see:

http://www.botanical.com/botanical/mgmh/t/teazle09.html

Alice


From: Susan Wenger
Sent: Monday, November 19, 2001 9:58 AM
Subject: GrpRead:HMSS:Heautontimoroumenos

Page 265: "Did you do the Heautontimoroumenos at school?" whispered Mr Stanhope.

What is this man whispering about?

- Susan


From: Steve Ross
Sent: Monday, November 19, 2001 10:25 AM
Subject: Re: GrpRead:HMSS:Heautontimoroumenos

Very good question! From the context, it would seem as if Stanhope, in his delirium, has been reliving his school days, and "Heautontimoroumenos" is the title of a classical Greek poem that the terrible "Dr. Bulkeley" forced him to memorize. But there is far more to this episode than that. I don't know that particular poem, but the title itself, in Greek, means "he who values/prizes himself" (*heauton* is a reflexive, so "self;" *timoroumenos* is a middle form of *timao:* to prize, honor, or hold something/someone in esteem). Think of this in the context of Stephen's own moral/ethical "crisis" (as I have decided to call it), and in the context of Rowen's recent post:

I don't think it is either honor or sin but something that is deeply personal and related to his idea of self - self-respect, or self honesty, or anti-hypocrisy, or something like that.

Man, what a group! Together, we could write the Critical Edition of the Aubreyad!

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a complacent pragmatical worldly fellow (HMSS p. 196) . . .

Steve Ross
30° 24' 32"N
91° 05' 28"W


From: Steve Ross
Sent: Monday, November 19, 2001 10:32 AM
Subject: Disregard previous message! (was GrpRead:HMSS:Heautontimoroumenos

So sorry! There I go, flying off the handle again. It's not "self-esteem." Timoroumenous (I THINK) comes from *timoreo*: to avenge or punish. But this fits the story even better, doesn't it?

--Steve


From: Steve Ross
Sent: Monday, November 19, 2001 10:13 AM
Subject: HMSS: A couple of technicalities

As always, I have far too many technical questions about this book. In particular, I ended up being totally lost during the last, long-ranging battle with Linois, and the maneuvers surrounding it (what direction they were heading, bearing of the wind, etc. . . . ). Maybe someday when I reread this book yet again, it will become clear. But in the meantime:

1. p. 285 (Norton paperback edition): " . . . as the strain came on to the drag-sail, opening like a parachute beneath the surface, it dropped further still." Is this an anachronism?

2. p. 289:
" 'Yes, sir. Shall I cast off the drag-sail, sir?'
'No: and we will not go about too fast, neither: space out the orders, if you please.'" "Going about" means tacking, right? Well, this is what had me puzzled: I thought that in the course of tacking, everything had to be done "smartly," with dispatch, or else you would miss stays. So how is it possible to space out the orders and not to risk appearing like a lubber? Maybe I should get one of those "Age of Sail" games and learn how to really do it.

3. pp. 303-4 (Jack addressing the assembled captains of the China fleet): " . . . with one or two of your fine ships on one side of him and Surprise on the other, I will answer for it if we can beat the seventy-four, let alone the frigates." Is this a typo?

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a complacent pragmatical worldly [and obsessive!] fellow . . .

Steve Ross
30° 24' 32"N
91° 05' 28"W


From: Steve Ross
Sent: Monday, November 19, 2001 12:00 PM
Subject: HMSS: Stephen's clothing and his moral crisis (includes spoilers)...LONG

John B wrote:

In this book, I found Stephen very irritating- granted, he was in some agony over Diana, but some of his inner meanness semmed to come through. (some very pertinent examples omitted) All in all, I do not find him ,in this book, a very sympathetic character.

I agree and I don't agree. Yes, Stephen is not at his most attractive for much of this book. In other words, he is fallible; he is human; he is even unlikable at points. Does this make him unsympathetic? Not to me . . . because I am sure as heck pretty fallible! But I am glad you are pointing out these aspects, because I am coming to be more and more of the opinion that the main portion of this book is really about Stephen's moral "crisis" (inasmuch as any of these books can be "about" any one thing, that is).

When it was noted that O'Brian had told an interviewer that Dil's death was a way of punishing Stephen for his dishonourable act in steering Jack clear of Diana, many of us suspected that this might be, at least in part, a ruse or a joke by the author: throwing us "off the scent" by creating an artificial explanation. I have decided this is wrong. What convinces me is the way the author describes Stephen's state of dress throughout the central portion of the book (this may have been "done" in the gunroom already; if so, I apologize).

Please correct me if you think I am way off base here; but it is beginning to seem pretty obvious! First, there is the "blessed" interlude during the voyage to India, during which S. finds that his love for Diana, and his mental image of her as in some way "pure," has been revived. For much or all of this time, Stephen goes about the boat stark naked. Then, there is the extended stay in Bombay, while the ship refits. Stephen wanders at will around the wonderful city, and O'Brian tells us of his varying types of clothing: "he walked about in a towel, sometimes in European dress, and sometimes in a loose shirt, hanging over white pantaloons . . ." When he runs into the mathematical, pragmatical and disappointing Parsee, he is in European dress; when he experiences an epiphany (Diana at the sea festival) he is wearing his long Indian shirt (and being hand-fed by Dil, for fear of staining it). Then, when he goes to meet Diana in Canning's house, having failed to apprise Jack of her presence--AND having "bought off" Dil with the gift of bangles--he is fully decked out in European clothes. It seems as if the more clothed he is, the worse Stephen's moral state (or his state of "honor," in that sense we have been talking about)!

And then the clincher: When he goes to duel Canning, having gotten to this scene drenched with moral ambiguity (the dueling ground that is isolated but full of people--the "peepul trees"--entered by way of the doorway between Right and Wrong [thanks Don!]): How is he dressed? European-style, of course: But he removes his shirt and stands there to fight in his breeches, *half-clothed*! Again, he is stripped to the waist when it is time to operate on himself. The removal of the bullet marks the end of Stephen's "crisis," and I do not find any more references to his clothing after that point in the book. Q.E.D.?

As for Dil: The question was raised of what common quality she shares with Diana (Stephen did say he saw one, but did not specify). I think there are two: #1. Courage (even her detractors are forced to admit that Diana is a model of courage); and 2. Innocence. Diana is far from innocent, you will protest; but still, despite everything, Stephen can see innocence in her. An example of love rehabilitating its object?

Finally: Why did Dil have to die? Well, yes, to punish Stephen (it may be "awfully Old Testament," but as John B. points out along with Herodotus, there are worse things than dying at the height of your happiness; and it was a punishment sent to Stephen, not to her) . . . but also: Her death, and the callous removal of the bangles from her arm, *prefigure Stephen's loss of Diana at the very end* (signaled, even before he read the note, by the ring that she removed from her finger and placed in the envelope). Am I making sense?

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a complacent pragmatical worldly fellow (HMSS p. 196) . . .

Steve Ross
30° 24' 32"N
91° 05' 28"W


From: Jebvbva@AOL.COM
Sent: Monday, November 19, 2001 12:11 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS: A couple of technicalities

In a message dated 11/19/2001 1:08:42 PM Eastern Standard Time, skross@LSU.EDU writes:

1. p. 285 (Norton paperback edition): " . . . as the strain came on to the drag-sail, opening like a parachute beneath the surface, it dropped further still." Is this an anachronism?

There has been discussion on whether the term parachute was in use at this time-

2. p. 289:

" 'Yes, sir. Shall I cast off the drag-sail, sir?'
'No: and we will not go about too fast, neither: space out the orders, if you please.'" "Going about" means tacking, right? Well, this is what had me puzzled: I thought that in the course of tacking, everything had to be done "smartly," with dispatch, or else you would miss stays. So how is it possible to space out the orders and not to risk appearing like a lubber? Maybe I should get one of those "Age of Sail" games and learn how to really do it.

Jack meant it to look as if he was slower than he was- to draw the enemy closer- It was a ruse.

3. pp. 303-4 (Jack addressing the assembled captains of the China fleet): " . . . with one or two of your fine ships on one side of him and Surprise on the other, I will answer for it if we can beat the seventy-four, let alone the frigates." Is this a typo?

I would take that "can" to be a typo("can't")- unless there is another meaning for "I will answer for it" than to "take the blame".


From: Rosemary Davis
Sent: Monday, November 19, 2001 12:20 PM
Subject: HMSS: Stephen's clothing and moral crisis

I nominate Steve Ross for post of the day for this delightfully insightful message.

This was mentioned more or less in passing, but in re-rereading (is that a word?) p. 185-186, there is a clear explication of Stephen's continuing feelings for Diana in the wake of the "opera scene":

"No great while after his last sight of her 'prostituting herself in a box at the Opera' - a warm expression by which he meant consciously using her charms to please other men - the unreasoning part of his mind evoked living images of those same charms, of that incredible grace of movement when it was truly spontaneous; and very soon his reasoning mind began to argue that this fault, too, was to be assimilated to the long catalogue of defects that he knew and accepted, defects that he felt to be outweighed if not cancelled by her qualities of wit and desperate courage: she was never dull, she was never cowardly. But moral considerations were irrelevant to Diana: in her, physical grace and dash took the place of virtue. The whole context was so different that an unchastity odious in nother woman had what he could only call a purity in her: another purity: pagan, obviously - a purity from another code altogether. That grace had been somewhat blown upon to be sure, but there was enough and to spare; she had destroyed only the periphery; it was beyond her power to touch the essence of the thing, and that essence set her apart from any woman, any person, he had ever known."

-RD


From: Steve Ross
Sent: Monday, November 19, 2001 12:28 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS: A couple of technicalities

Jack meant it to look as if he was slower than he was- to draw the enemy closer- It was a ruse.

Thanks John! I do know Jack's motive for coming about slowly; it is all of a piece with the drag-sail's intended effect. But I was assuming he didn't want to miss stays; that is why I asked whether it was really possible to come about "slowly!"

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a complacent pragmatical worldly fellow (HMSS p. 196) . . .

Steve Ross
30° 24' 32"N
91° 05' 28"W


From: Adam Quinan
Sent: Monday, November 19, 2001 5:12 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS: A couple of technicalities

I think that "Coming about" can mean just going on to the other tack which can be done slowly, if you wear (equivalent to gybe in a modern sloop, stern to the wind) rather tacking (bow through the wind). Tacking a square rig ship would have to be done with a degree of despatch. Nowadays it is more usual to tack as modern boats are not so easily put in irons so most people think of coming about as tacking.


From: Peter Mackay
Sent: Monday, November 19, 2001 5:30 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS: A couple of technicalities

There is undoubtedly a maximum time for carrying out a tack - if you are too slow about it, it simply doesn't work. But Jack's crew would probably have explored how close they could get to the minimum, and might need slowing down.

Besides, some of the pre and post manoeuvres could be spaced out without affecting the actual tack. Certainly a trained observer would realise Jack was going to tack some minutes before he did so, simply because of the preparations - sailors going aloft, yards moving etc. If the saliors were slow and/or they spent time waiting for officers to give the next order an observer might conclude that the crew was inefficient.

The intention was to space out the orders, I believe, not to slow down the actual implementation.

--
Cheers, Peter


From: Marshall Rafferty
Sent: Monday, November 19, 2001 5:47 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS: Stephen's clothing and his moral crisis (includes spoilers)...LONG

On Mon, 19 Nov 2001 14:00:29 -0600, Steve wrote:

Wonderful post, Steve!

[good stuff snipped]

And then the clincher: When he goes to duel Canning, ..[snip] he removes his shirt and stands there to fight in his breeches, *half-clothed*! Again, he is stripped to the waist when it is time to operate on himself. The removal of the bullet marks the end of Stephen's "crisis," and I do not find any more references to his clothing after that point in the book. Q.E.D.?

Didn't he remove his shirt to simplify the outcome in case he was wounded? Bits of fiber, etc. Otherwise, I find the issue of Stephen's dress fascinating, and will pay some attention to it when I travel through the canon for the fourth read. I may even take notes, unnatural though that seems.

Marshall Rafferty

________
At, or about:
47°40'54"N. 122°22'8"W.


From: Ray McPherson
Sent: Monday, November 19, 2001 6:37 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS: A couple of technicalities

Adam Quinan wrote:

I think that "Coming about" can mean just going on to the other tack which can be done slowly (snip)

Nah, it's just turning the other cheek (:-)

Ray McP


From: Charlezzzz@AOL.COM
Sent: Monday, November 19, 2001 7:34 PM
Subject: Stephen in the Garden of Eden perhaps? BATM spoiler.

As Steve recently pointed out: "It seems as if the more clothed he is, the worse Stephen's moral state (or his state of "honor," in that sense we have been talking about)! "

The last few weeks have been weeks of great insights.

BATM SPOILER FOLLOWS...

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This insight, for the first time, puts before me the reason why Stephen and Christine go naked through the swamp in order to see that great bird.

That bird! I don't have the book with me, but I bet a groat that, if one were to closely study American Indian mythology, we'd find that the bird they seek (and see) is a Spirit Bird of great power.

So of course she can't accept his offer of marriage that day, they being in that Great Garden, and in a state of innocence.

Charlezzzz, pointing out that this kind of writing actually makes things easier for the novelist (or for some novelists, anyhow.) It gives a partial answer to Hemingway's famous question--"What should I have this bastard do next?" Follow the myth--the answer is partly spelled out there: the path is open, and the way lies clear.


From: Mary S
Sent: Tuesday, November 20, 2001 5:21 AM
Subject: Re: GrpRead:HMSS:Heautontimoroumenos

My friend the classics prof comes through:

There is a play by Terence that we do have, the Roman comedian yknow, translated from a play by Menander probably, the Greek comedian, yknow, which we don't have, and I'm afraid that it really is called the Heauton (oneself) Timouroumenos (tormenting) or, the Self-Tormentor. Shows that they had complicated psychology and people with low self esteem even in those days, though I regret to say that they thought people that tormented themselves and had low self esteem were, well, funny. Pretty brutal, those ancients.

savage, explosive, obstinate and cantankerous [HMSS 78]
(a new one I just found)

Mary S
35° 58' 11" N
86° 48' 57" W


From: Steve Ross
Sent: Tuesday, November 20, 2001 8:19 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS: Stephen's clothing and his moral crisis (includesspoilers)...LONG

Marshall wrote:

Didn't he remove his shirt to simplify the outcome in case he was wounded? Bits of fiber, etc.

Oh, must you insist on trying to take the fun out of everything? Yes, of COURSE he had a good reason for doing it. I can't quite see Stephen saying "I am taking off my shirt because that way, this scene will fit better into the author's symbolic scheme!"

Everything has a reason. At least in fiction.

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a complacent pragmatical worldly fellow (HMSS p. 196) . . .

Steve Ross
30° 24' 32"N
91° 05' 28"W


From: Steve Ross
Sent: Tuesday, November 20, 2001 7:51 AM
Subject: HMSS: Stephen's crisis, Take Two (slightly spoilerish; was Heautontimoroumenos)

Mary S wrote:

There is a play by Terence that we do have, the Roman comedian yknow, translated from a play by Menander probably, the Greek comedian, yknow, which we don't have, and I'm afraid that it really is called the Heauton (oneself) Timouroumenos (tormenting) or, the Self-Tormentor.

Thank you Mary (gee, you sometimes feel guilty trying to get in a word or two about POB among all the conversations that are going on, don't you?)! . . . I mistakenly guessed yesterday that Heautontimoroumenos might be a Greek poem and was corrected privately by a modest List member who knew the Terence connection but was too kind to embarrass me in public. I, however, have no such qualms, and will proceed to go out on a limb again:

So Stanhope, in the crisis of his fever, not long before his death, calls to mind an old piece of Latin poetry from his school days. What does Stephen do, in his own fevered delirium after being shot by Canning? He not only recalls, but recites, a Latin poem. And not just any poem either; this one is Vergil's Aeneid, the crown jewel of Latin poetry. And Stephen recites it all the way _from beginning to end_: from "arma virumque cano" to Book 12, line 952: "ast illi solvuntur frigore membra/vitaque cum gemitu fugit indignata sub umbras" (yeah right! ... well, O'Brian does tell us that he was displaying quite remarkable powers of recall).

But this is not just there to impress us. As we were discussing yesterday, "Self-Tormentor" (or Self-Punisher?) seems remarkably apt for the state in which Stephen finds himself. What about these lines of Vergil? Well, they start out with "arms and the man I sing;" Stephen has just shown that he can be a man of arms when it is absolutely necessary. And at the end, "with a groan at that indignity, his limbs slackened in the chill of death, and his spirit fled into the gloom below." The Aeneid has been interpreted as the story of how Aeneas was transformed from an old-fashioned "blood, guts and glory" Greek-style hero into a new kind of man, less self-centered, more willing to do his duty on behalf of Rome. With this passage, is O'Brian saying that Stephen has undergone a transformation too? I guess I was wrong to say his "crisis" had passed as soon as he had finished operating on himself; of course, the period of fever that followed was the climax of the crisis.

Better shut up now . . .

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a complacent pragmatical worldly fellow (HMSS p. 196) . . .

Steve Ross
30° 24' 32"N
91° 05' 28"W


From: Samuel Bostock
Sent: Tuesday, November 20, 2001 1:39 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS A couple of technicalities

2. p. 289:
" 'Yes, sir. Shall I cast off the drag-sail, sir?'
'No: and we will not go about too fast, neither: space out the orders, if you please.'" "Going about" means tacking, right? Well, this is what had me puzzled: I thought that in the course of tacking, everything had to be done "smartly," with dispatch, or else you would miss stays. So how is it possible to space out the orders and not to risk appearing like a lubber? Maybe I should get one of those "Age of Sail" games and learn how to really do it.

Jack is trying to look like a lubber so he can invite the enemy frigate(s) to give chase, so he can lead them away from the East India men

3. pp. 303-4 (Jack addressing the assembled captains of the China fleet): " . . . with one or two of your fine ships on one side of him and Surprise on the other, I will answer for it if we can beat the seventy-four, let alone the frigates." Is this a typo?

What the 'can' as opposed to 'can't'? Well its in the Harper Collins version too whatever it is. Like Jack some kind of brilient wittism is hovering on the edge of my mind but that is where it is remaining for the time being!

(Probobly just as well!)

Sam


From: Steve Ross
Sent: Tuesday, November 20, 2001 1:57 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS A couple of technicalities

Sam wrote:

Jack is trying to look like a lubber so he can invite the enemy frigate(s) to give chase, so he can lead them away from the East India men

I know what you mean, but I can't accept this. Yes, Jack wants it to look as though the Surprise is slow, to fool the enemy. But it strains credulity to think he would go so far as to *miss stays* deliberately (horror of horrors)! Someone else suggested that the spacing out of the orders had to do with getting all the topmen into position, preparing to come about, etc.,--but that when it came to actually executing the move, it would be done fairly efficiently. I am satisfied with this explanation.

What the 'can' as opposed to 'can't'? Well its in the Harper Collins version too whatever it is. Like Jack some kind of brilient wittism is hovering on the edge of my mind but that is where it is remaining for the time being!

Yes, the "can" as opposed to "can't." I guess it is a typo (or a slip of the pen, seeing as how O'Brian never used a typewriter)!

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a complacent pragmatical worldly fellow (HMSS p. 196) . . .

Steve Ross
30° 24' 32"N
91° 05' 28"W


From: Peter Mackay
Sent: Tuesday, November 20, 2001 2:42 PM
Subject: Spacing them out WAS: HMSS A couple of technicalities

Someone else suggested that the spacing out of the orders had to do with getting all the topmen into position, preparing to come about, etc.,--but that when it came to actually executing the move, it would be done fairly efficiently. I am satisfied with this explanation.

That was me.

Speaking of spacing out orders, I was once told by an officer to "have your men spaced out around the perimeter, Sergeant Mackay".

So I sent them off to the pub and told them to be quick about it.


From: Marshall Rafferty
Sent: Tuesday, November 20, 2001 5:47 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS: Stephen's clothing and his moral crisis (includesspoilers)...LONG

On Tue, 20 Nov 2001 10:19:57 -0600, Steve Ross wrote:

Oh, must you insist on trying to take the fun out of everything? Yes, of COURSE he had a good reason for doing it. I can't quite see Stephen saying "I am taking off my shirt because that way, this scene will fit better into the author's symbolic scheme!"

Or as Stephen once said, "Don't be pedantical, for all love!" Naw.. we have plenty of fun. I do plan to try to pay attention to Stephen's mental state in later books when he's sunning himself naked as Adam, or when he's (very rarely) dressed to the nines.

Everything has a reason. At least in fiction.

You know, I'd be more skeptical of POB's rationales if he hadn't been so darned methodical. He may have slipped on some of the small stuff, but he was very, very careful about the bits that mattered to him.

Marshall Rafferty, pondering the brown, knit thing

________
At, or about:
47°40'54"N. 122°22'8"W.


From: Rosemary Davis
Sent: Wednesday, November 21, 2001 8:12 AM
Subject: HMSS: Stephen's clothing

Have just recalled another reference: p. 230-231 of HMSS, where Stephen is

HMSS SPOILER

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proposing marriage to Diana:

Diana says, "You are certainly unwell; you look ghastly. Take off your coat. Sit in your shirt and breeches."

"Sure I have never felt the heat so much." He threw off his coat and neckcloth.

On the following page, Diana continues: "...Lord, how pale you have gone again. Come, put on a light gown and we will sit in the court for the fresh air: these lamps are intolerable indoors."

"No, no. Do not move."

"Why? Because it is Canning's gown? Because he is my lover? Because he is a Jew?"

Stephen then protests that he has the highest esteem for Jews; Canning then appears, and persuades Stephen to indeed put on a gown, and the three of them sit in the courtyard...

Seasick, green, squalid and selfish (HMSS p. 357),
-RD


From: Steven K Ross
Sent: Thursday, November 22, 2001 8:09 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS: Stephen's clothing

Excellent! . . . and then there is the shapeless brown knit thing that he wears when first coming aboard (IIRC) ...


From: Lois Anne du Toit
Sent: Friday, November 23, 2001 4:02 AM
Subject: Re: GrpRead:HMSS:Heautontimoroumenos

This is the title of a comic play by the Roman playwright Terence (Publius Terentius Afer), based upon Greek New Comedy, chiefly the comedies of Menander: the originals of the plays used by Terence and the other famous Roman comic playwright, Titus Maccius Plautus, have mostly vanished. Heautontimoroumenos (The Self-Tormentor) was written c163BC.

If you're thinking of dipping into them - my advice is, don't bother ... wearisome stuff, upon the whole.

London Lois

51° 28' 50" N 000° 10' 53" W


From: Steven K Ross
Sent: Friday, November 23, 2001 6:08 AM
Subject: The Dread Clothing Theory Strikes Again! WAS Re: [POB] Back to Post Captain --- & Characters.

Al Revzin Wrote:

{big snip . . .}

Jack, most of the Naval personnel and Sophie remain fairly constant over the Saga. If the story demands different "constant" characters, POB drops some people out (Rev. Martin) and introduces others (Dil). OTOH, Maturin's and Diana's characters vary quite wildly, depending on POB's ideas while writing.

Thus, the characters of Diana and Maturin /are/ complex, confusing and unbelievable, to me, because POB varies them, book to book or even within a book, as the story in his mind demands --- there is no "standard" Stephen or Diana.

Very insightful! I hadn't thought of it this way, but it does fit into something I have been thinking about, after having first sprained my brain trying to puzzle out the symbolism of Stephen's different states of dress in HMSS: By contrast with Stephen's ambiguities, Jack is much more black-and-white. As far as his clothing is concerned, he is either fully dressed or stark naked (waking Stephen on deck ready to go swimming) . . . never anywhere in between, though his "full dress" can be either formal or informal.

I trust that no Lister over-ate excessively this Thanksgiving.

Thanks . . . I over-ate only moderately; but I did indeed over-eat. Then I did it again.

Steve Ross


From: Susan Wenger
Sent: Friday, November 23, 2001 10:09 AM
Subject: GRPREAD:HMSS:parachute

Someone mentioned recently O'Brian's use of a parachute on page 284, and asked if it was an anachronism for use in a book of O'Brian's time period:

From the Oxford English Dictionary:

Parachute: 2. gen. Any contrivance, natural or rtificial, serving to check a fall through the air, or to support something in the air; e.g. the expansible fold of skin or patagium in the flying squirrel, etc.

1796 STEDMAN Surinam II. 17 These [flying squirrels] have..a membrane..which when they leap, expands like the wing of a bat, and by this, like a parachute, they rest on the air.

I rest the author's case.

- Susan


From: Steven K Ross
Sent: Friday, November 23, 2001 10:32 AM
Subject: Re: GRPREAD:HMSS:parachute

That was me. Thanks for rising to the task, Susan!

Steve Ross


From: Susan Wenger
Sent: Friday, November 23, 2001 11:22 AM
Subject: parachute

Naw, rising isn't the right image. Slowly falling, s'more like it : }


From: Marshall Rafferty
Sent: Saturday, November 24, 2001 6:30 PM
Subject: Re: GroupRead: HMS Surprise

On Sat, 17 Nov 2001 22:13:28 EST, Alice wrote:

1. Lazaretto Island (page 73): I was unable to find anything at Google about a specific Lazaretto Island at Port Mahon - but other references re "lazaretto" point to leper colonies at various places around the world, some on islands even.

While perusing `"The Line of Battle: The Sailing Warship 1650-1840" of the Conway series I read:

"Quarantine ships were also employed at many ports. These were generally old men of war, and were known as lazarettos."

I doubt that POB was talking about a ship instead of an island, but found this interesting nonetheless.

The description of "hospital ships" before and after the Napoleonic Wars is succinct, but grim. One quote of interest to Stephen, maybe:

"The orlop deck was difficult to ventilate, and was thought unwholesome for the sick.'" *

*Lloyd and Coulter, Medicine and the Navy, Vol. III

Marshall Rafferty

________
At, or about:
47°40'54"N. 122°22'8"W.


From: Vanessa Brown
Sent: Saturday, November 24, 2001 10:59 PM
Subject: Ben Affleck, Matt Damon signed to new OBrian film: NY Times

So I'm reading HMSS for the umpteenth time and I come across this line, makes me smile every time I read it

Early SPOILER

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Jack is planning the rescue of Stephen from his torturers, O'Brian writes:

"There were times when there was something very young and slightly ridiculous about Jack; it was a side of him that Sophie loved beyond measure; but no one looking at him now, or in action, would have believed in it's existence."

What a wealth of information we get about this man with these few words. Vanessa, loving the stories better every time.


From: Susan Wenger
Date: Tue, 27 Nov 2001 08:18:31 -0800
Subject: GroupRead:HMSS:2 questions and an answer

Two questions, please, near the end of HMSS, and an answer in return:

Why did Stephen leave Canning's house through the window? He said "I believe I will go out this way, if I may: I do not altogether trust your tigers." Was it the tigers, or Canning, or something else?

At the duel:

"Gentlemen," said Burke, "you may fire upon the signal." Canning's arm came up, and along the glint of his own barrel Stephen saw the flash and instantly loosened his finger from the trigger. The enormous impact . . . Did Canning wait for the signal, or did he fire before he was supposed to?

Someone questioned why Jack was so hostile towards Diana, apart from the usual reasons. When Dil died, Stephen was completely devastated. Jack knew nothing of Dil. He knew that Stephen had been to see Diana, and so Jack thought Diana was the cause of Stephen's total desolation at that time


From: Samuel Bostock
Date: Tue, 27 Nov 2001
Subject: GroupRead:HMSS:2 questions and an answer

He fired before he was supposed to. If Stephan had died his second would have taken the shot, I believe.

This is why Jack thinks it was ok for Stephan to kill Canning (though he would not have done himself). The great sadness about their friendship is that they are not close enough to discuss this and so Jack never learns that Stephan did not aim to kill.

Sam
From: Don Seltzer
Date: Tue, 27 Nov 2001 16:15:42 -0500
Subject: Re: GroupRead:HMSS:2 questions and an answer

Samuel Bostock wrote:

He fired before he was supposed to. If Stephan had died his second would have taken the shot, I believe.

I disagree strongly with this interpretation. Stephen was intent on only wounding Canning, which meant that he had to be more deliberate in his aiming. Two important differences from the later American western gunfight - only one shot per duelist, and there was a perceptible delay between pulling the trigger, the flash in the pan, and the actual firing of the pistol ball. Canning was simply faster in taking aim and firing. Stephen, as an experienced duelist, recognized that Canning had "beaten him to the draw", and relaxed his grip so that he could take his single shot more deliberately. After Stephen was struck, he had the presence of mind to shift his pistol to his left hand, and consequently was not accurate enough to wound, but not kill Canning.

Don Seltzer


From: Steve Ross
Date: Wed, 28 Nov 2001 11:41:24 -0600
Subject: The Dropping of the Duel, the Archives, and the Aubrey/Maturin Trilogy (was Re: [POB] PC: some questions/comments)

On checking the PC group discussion I find there was little mention of the duel or discussion of why it was dropped the way it was. But that may be because it *had* been discussed, fairly recently; the Archives show this question having been raised as recently as October 2000 (and as early as 1996). In sum, the sense of the group seems to be that Jack and Stephen tacitly agreed to let the issue drop [although some lissuns seem to think that, for form's sake, Jack must have given some sort of apology off-stage]. In the course of a battle scene, Stephen urges Jack to come below, with the significant words, "here is too much blood altogether." So, after having been unable (because of the press of events) to carry out their original plan to duel, S & J find their relationship has developed to a point that it would be unthinkable to duel at all.

All this speculation, however, helps us understand only why the characters ended up not trying to shoot one another. It still doesn't answer Lois' *original* question, which was (IIRC) why O'Brian wrote it this way. It seems like an unsatisfying loose end, at first. But maybe we can interpret it differently? Could it not be part of O'Brian's ingenious subtlety to "show" us, rather than "tell" us, how the two men's relationship has developed here? Very different from the proposed duel near the very beginning of the Canon, where Jack is forced to deliver a formal (and somewhat stiff) apology to remain on speaking terms with Maturin! As often, Charlezzz (in the Archives) showed the way: he pointed out how PO'B signals the evolution in their relationship, by having Stephen address Jack as "brother" at the critical point.

One more point (here I am going out on a limb again): I wonder if the mention of dueling in M&C, PC, *and* HMSS might not be an intentional unifying theme that sets off these books as a sort of trilogy (clearly they are separated in more than one way from the other books in the series). We have already talked about the many ways in which O'Brian signals the moral ambiguity of Stephen's duel with Canning. If I am right that Stephen's "moral crisis" is the major (or one of the major) theme(s) in HMSS, does O'Brian want us to think that, symbolically, by killing Canning Stephen killed himself or part of himself (after all, he did talk about how the two men were similar, both being religious/ethnic outsiders, etc.)? Here again Stephen's recital of Vergil's Aeneid may be relevant: in the height of his delirium, he quotes the line about how Aeneas impulsively slew Turnus. For many critics, this has been seen as Aeneas symbolically killing himself, or at least his "old" self.

I'll spare you any more tortured imaginings. BTW I did have fun browsing the archives; I even found this old entry from 1998, which today's lissuns might still enjoy, though it is a little dated:

http://mat.gsia.cmu.edu/POB/MAY0198/0588.html

Have fun, all.

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a complacent pragmatical worldly fellow (HMSS p. 196) . . .
Steve Ross
30° 24' 32"N
91° 05' 28"W


From: Rosemary Davis
Date: Tue, 27 Nov 2001 20:02:56 -0500
Subject: HMSS: tigers and Diana, also twins

Re: Susan's questions and comments: I took "I do not entirely trust your tigers." to mean that Stephen was concerned that Canning, in a rage, might set the tigers on him...

As for Jack's treatment of Diana after the duel, his feelings and his thoughts on them are made pretty explicit on p. 349-350 of the Norton hardcover:

Beneath the anger and his distaste for being there, his mind was filled with questions, doubts, a hurry of feelings that he could not easily identify. Righteousness, except where faulty seamanship was concerned, or an offence against Naval discipline, was unfamiliar to him. Was he a contemptible scrub, to harbour this enmity against a woman he had pursued? The severity that filled him from head to toe - was it an odious hypocrisy, fit to damn him in a decent mind? He had gone near to wrecking his career in his pursuit of her; she had preferred Canning. Was this holier-than-thou indignation mere pitiful resentment? No, it was not: she had hurt Stephen terribly; and Canning, that fine man, was dead. She was no good, no good at all. Yet that meeting under the trees could have taken place over the most virtuous of women, the world being what it was...he had attacked her 'virtue' as hard as ever he could; so where did he stand? The common cant 'it is different for men' was no comfort...a tenderness and admiration he had thought quite dead moved in him...

It seems to me that Aubrey is afraid to allow Diana to sail with them because he is afraid of temptation and further friction between himself and Stephen...thoughts?

If they suspect me of intelligence, I am sure it will soon blow over (TFOW, p. 184), -RD


From: Susan Wenger
Date: Thu, 29 Nov 2001 17:54:02 -0800
Subject: GroupRead:HMSS:Horseman

Here's another one of the animal analogies I've come to love in O'Brian, at Diana's residence after Canning is shotL: Jack has come to call on Diana with Stephen's message for her, and he sees a horseman winding through the trees:

"The horseman came in sight again, and his horse into full view: perhaps the most beautiful animal he had ever seen, a chestnut mare, perfectly proportioned, light, powerful. She shied at a snake on thye drive and reared, a lovely movement, and her rider sat easy, kindly patting her neck."

Now the chestnut mare, the most beautiful animal Jack had ever seen, who does that remind you of? And of course the man who gets to pat her perfect neck is, of course, Johnstone, who will soon be availing himself of similar dominance/patronage with Diana's perfect neck.

- Susan


From: Mary Arndt
Date: Fri, 30 Nov 2001 09:43:46 -0500
Subject: Re: HMSS: tigers and Diana

Rosemary quotes a passage from HMS Surprise in which Jack undergoes a little bit of self examination about his response to Diana. Shortly after he asks himself if he is a scrub, the lady in question tells him he is. "I always knew you were a weak man, Aubrey,"she said with a look of contempt,"But I did not know you were a scrub. You are much the same as every man I have ever known, except for Maturin - false, weak, and a coward in the end."

At this point, I don't think Jack is really afraid to have Diana on his ship because of potential temptation and possible friction between him and Stephen. (Recall that he has just acquired the means to set his financial affairs in order and ask Sophie to marry him). I think he is just indulging in the conventional distaste for the "fallen woman". He has decided that Stephen would be better off without her and he has the autocratic means to keep them separated for a while. Diana recognizes this and that is why she calls him a scrub, and because he recognizes it too, he is tormented by her remark. Later that day,after the bizarre surgery episode, Jack attends a dinner during which he overhears a conversation between an old judge and a council member that gives him a sharp taste of what "society" thinks of the "fallen woman" and also shows him that not everyone thought Canning was such a fine fellow. The nastiness of the remarks about Diana causes Jack to defend her and after that his attitude toward her improves appreciably. At this point it is possible that, if she had asked again, he might have admitted her to the ship for the return home.

Mary A


From: Rosemary Davis
Date: Fri, 30 Nov 2001 20:18:58 -0500
Subject: [POB] HMSS: Jack's treatment of Diana

Very good observation by Mary, where Jack is moved to defend Diana at the dinner (after questioning whether he is indeed a scrub) and then treats her with deference upon her next visit to the ship. The changes Jack undergoes in his attitude toward Diana are one of the many interesting threads weaving their way through the canon...p. 378, Jack says to Sophie:

"Stephen? Lord, sweetheart, what a selfish brute I am - a most shocking damned thing has happened. He thought he was to marry her, he longed to marry her - it was quite understood, I believe. She was coming home in an Indiaman, and at Maidera she left her and bolted with an American, a very rich American, they say. It was the best thing that could possibly have happened for him, but I would give my right hand to have her back, he looks so low."

Of course, if Jack had not been such a "scrub" as to refuse her passage with them, she'd have had no opportunity to bolt with Johnstone. And I love the bit where she pretends to Stephen that it never occurred to her to ask Jack for her passage, so as not to cause resentment of Jack in Stephen...

I've just now reread the passage where Maturin has received Diana's letter with his ring back, and his comments after he has wandered into the mountains: "To get down - that will be a problem," he said aloud. "Any man can go up - oh, almost indefinitely - but to go down and down surefooted, that is another thing entirely." -RD, plateauing at the moment


From: Batrinque@AOL.COM
Date: Sat, 1 Dec 2001 17:01:43 -0500
Subject: Re: [POB] HMSS: tigers and Diana

In a message dated 11/30/01 9:44:33 AM Eastern Standard Time, mlaktb@HOTMAIL.COM writes:


At this point, I don't think Jack is really afraid to have Diana on his ship because of potential temptation and possible friction between him and Stephen. (Recall that he has just acquired the means to set his financial affairs in order and ask Sophie to marry him). I think he is just indulging in the conventional distaste for the "fallen woman". He has decided that Stephen would be better off without her and he has the autocratic means to keep them separated for a while. Diana recognizes this and that is why she calls him a scrub, and because he recognizes it too, he is tormented by her remark

My own interpretation of this incident is just a little different -- it did not occur to me that Jack had in mind that Diana was a "fallen woman", but only that he considered her presence harmful to Stephen's well-being. Thus, I feel that Jack's motivation was based in friendship rather than conventional morality. But I might be wrong.

Bruce Trinque 41°37'53"N
72°22'51"W


From: Marian Van Til
Date: Sat, 1 Dec 2001 19:39:51 -0500
Subject: Re: [POB] HMSS: tigers and Diana

Say it ain't so, Bruce (that you're wrong). Bruce's view is how I, too, have interepreted this. Jack seemed to me to be wholly concerned with the effect Diana was having/would have on Stephen, and thus wanted to keep Diana away from him for what Jack saw as Stephen's own good. Despite his conventionality in various ways, Jack never struck me as the type to be too prudish about associating with "fallen women," and didn't he have naval friends who did?; like Bruce, it never occurred to me that Jack would be motivated by such thoughts in this instance.

Marian
From: Bob Kegel
Date: Sat, 1 Dec 2001 18:00:10 -0800
Subject: Re: [POB] HMSS: tigers and Diana

On Fri, 30 Nov 2001, at 09:43:46 -0500, Mary A wrote:


He has decided that Stephen would be better off without her and he has the autocratic means to keep them separated for a while.

Jack is merely passing on Stephen's message: "... 'Diana: you must come back to Europe. The Lushington sails on the fourteenth. Allow me to deal with any material difficulties: rely upon me at all times. I say at all times. Stephen.' "

Jack mediates on his feelings as Diana reads Stephen's letter. Just as his "anger and distaste" resolve into "tenderness and admiration" Johnstone rides up to Diana's door. He realizes she has kept her options open.

Diana is being less than honest when she tells Jack, 'Stephen has asked me to marry him. I could act as a nurse.'

Jack must realize he would have heard the news from Stephen had she accepted his proposal. Perhaps he sees her offer as motivated by pity and knows it would be anathema to Stephen's pride.

Bob Kegel
46°59'18.661"N 123°49'29.827"W


From: Ruth A Abrams
Date: Sat, 1 Dec 2001 23:22:27 -0500
Subject: [POB] HMSS: tigers and Diana

Responding to the discussion of why Jack does not allow Diana to hitch a ride back to England--

I'll grant that he might have personally disliked Diana for provoking a duel between Canning, whom Jack liked, and Stephen, whom he loved. Remember Canning was going to get Jack a big commission for carrying freight as well.

But, another interpretation. Could he not have been afraid to have a beautiful woman on board a ship full of men? This seems to be a theme with him, not liking to have beautiful single women on board ship. Certainly if we consider the results for him in The Far Side of the World and in The Truelove/Clarissa Oakes, he seems to have been right.

Ruth A.


From: Susan Wenger
Date: Sun, 2 Dec 2001 06:09:42 -0800
Subject: Re: [POB] HMSS: tigers and Diana

Yes, I agree with everyone's differing views on this :}

Jack turned down Diana's request for passage BEFORE he sat with Stephen's unconscious ravings and learned the depth of Stephen's feelings for Diana. Jack's attraction to Diana was lust, and he knew that Diana played him that way as it suited her purposes, and he could only empathize that Stephen's attraction was the same, and that Diana was playing Stephen that way as it suited her purposes.

At one point, Jack considered that he might have to marry Diana because of his acts with her, and he figured that she'd done the same with Diana. Also, Jack believed that Diana had ruined Stephen's happiness in India, not knowing that Stephen was really torn up about Dil: Jack thought that the sadness was all due to Diana.

Maybe the Shakespearean passage that P_ asked about was a nod to Shakespeare for having written "Comedy of Errors?"


From: Batrinque@AOL.COM
Date: Sun, 2 Dec 2001 09:51:52 -0500
Subject: Re: [POB] HMSS: tigers and Diana

Yes, I agree with everyone's differing views on this

You've been working in Washington tooooooooo long, Susan!

Bruce Trinque
41°37'53"N
72°22'51"W


From: Susan Wenger
Date: Sun, 2 Dec 2001 09:38:26 -0800
Subject: Re: [POB] HMSS: tigers and Diana

I agree, and in two years, four months, and five days (and counting) I'll do something about that : }


From: Peter Mackay
Date: Mon, 3 Dec 2001 06:33:24 +1100
Subject: Re: [POB] HMSS: tigers and Diana

Susan for President!


From: Charlezzzz@AOL.COM
Date: Sun, 2 Dec 2001 12:42:47 -0500
Subject: [POB] HMSS: tigers and Diana

Ruth Abrams, and many another, has commented on the reason for Jack refusing Diana passage.

Almost every "reason" given is a good one, and likely. But there's a fine phrase about the reasons why X does this and does not do that in fiction--at least in good fiction:

"The complexity of multiple motivation." (It even sounds good, orotund, intelligent, literary, a phrase to be rolled in the mouth.)

And it fits us all, don't it? We often do things for more than one reason. Or two. Or even three. Or...

Charlezzzz, who hopes that this phrase never is used by the simple folk who say "my theory is good as your theory" when they have little insight to bring to bear. Just cause motivations can be multiple, or even adient-avoidant (hey! hey! another fine phrase from Psych 101) that's far from saying anything goes. But I ramble. And dither. Why? Because...


From: Vanessa Brown
Date: Sun, 2 Dec 2001 12:47:42 -0500
Subject: Re: [POB] HMSS: tigers and Diana

Susan writes:

Jack's attraction to Diana was lust, and he knew that Diana played him that way as it suited her purposes, and he could only empathize that Stephen's attraction was the same, and that Diana was playing Stephen that way as it suited her purposes.

I beg to differ.

I don't think Jack ever "knew" he was being played by any woman. We are reminded throughout the cannon that he is often in over his head with the fairer sex.

He has misgivings about Diana's fickleness, and believes that she was hurtful to Stephen, and so wishes to protect him. Jack doesn't have the devious streak that Stephen and Diana share, he's a simple soul and they know it.

V


From: Doug Essinger-Hileman
Date: Sun, 2 Dec 2001 13:36:57 -0500
Subject: Re: [POB] HMSS: tigers and Diana

On 2 Dec 2001, at 12:42, Charlezzzz@AOL.COM wrote:

"The complexity of multiple motivation." (It even sounds good, orotund,

For months now I have yearned for a good orotund phrase, Charlezzzz -- of the first meaning, not the second. I get enough of those in church.

Doug Essinger-Hileman
Drowsy Frowsy List Greeter, Rated Able
39°51'06"N
79°54'01"W


From: Rosemary Davis
Date: Sun, 2 Dec 2001 15:24:07 -0500
Subject: [POB] HMSS: Stephen's note to Diana

There is no indication that Jack knows of the contents of Stephen's note to Diana when he delivers it. She opens it; the fact that the lines are "straggling" would indicate that Stephen wrote it himself, in spite of his wound. There is also no indication that she reads it aloud, and while she reads it, Jack is standing with his back turned, gazing out the window (at the previously-mentioned Johnstone on his horse) and thinking the previously-quoted thoughts about virtue.


From: Bob Kegel
Date: Sun, 2 Dec 2001 17:10:15 -0800
Subject: Re: [POB] HMSS: Stephen's note to Diana

From the "straggling" lines I, too, infer that Stephen wrote it with his own hand. I can't see Jack being anywhere but at Stephen's side so I believe he probably fetched the pen and paper for him.

Note also that when Diana asks for passage on the Surprise he immediately reminds her "the Lushington sails within the week."

Bob Kegel
46°59'18.661"N 123°49'29.827"W


From: Jebvbva@AOL.COM
Date: Sun, 2 Dec 2001 18:23:37 -0500
Subject: Re: [POB] HMSS: tigers and Diana On board

In a message dated 12/1/2001 11:33:40 PM Eastern Standard Time, ruthie@WORLD.STD.COM writes:

But, another interpretation. Could he not have been afraid to have a beautiful woman on board a ship full of men? This seems to be a theme with him, not liking to have beautiful single women on board ship. Certainly if we consider the results for him in The Far Side of the World and in The Truelove/Clarissa Oakes, he seems to have been right.

I don't believe the situation is the same- yes- he did not like having any women aboard-( He sneaked out to avoid some captain's wife asking for ride)- effect on crew- In past events, crew acted very well-( except when \Clarissa apparently accepted favors and caused jealousy) this would not be the case with Diana. I think his prime motive was to keep Diana away from Stephen, .

John B


From: Steve Ross
Date: Fri, 30 Nov 2001 20:36:50 -0600
Subject: [POB] HMSS: Stephen on the mountaintop, was Re: Jack's treatment of Diana

I, too, was struck by the passage below quoted. It having been several years since I first read this, one of O'Brian's short stories was fresher in my memory (I think it is the one called "Slope of the High Mountain"). It's one of those that have very little plot, and a lot of atmosphere. At any rate, the scenario in HMSS, where Stephen finds he has to make his way down from a cold lonely hilltop, has a similar feel to it. I imagined both passages must be based on a real incident in O'Brian's life, where he may have found himself in a similar situation, one which was apparently fairly nerve-wracking at the time (in the short story, the protagonist is trapped on a hilltop by a sudden snow, and for a while it seems as if he will not be able to get down; he fears dying of exposure).

Not sure if there is any important connection here; just putting it out there FWIW . . .

--Steve Ross

Rosemary wrote:

I've just now reread the passage where Maturin has received Diana's letter with his ring back, and his comments after he has wandered into the mountains: "To get down - that will be a problem," he said aloud. "Any man can go up - oh, almost indefinitely - but to go down and down surefooted, that is another thing entirely." -RD, plateauing at the moment


From: Don Seltzer
Date: Tue, 4 Dec 2001 10:00:04 -0500
Subject: [POB] GRP HMSS: was Have ye room, for a wayward sailor?

Doug and others quoted from KJV Psalm 104:24-26

O LORD, how manifold are thy works! in wisdom hast thou made them all: the earth is full of thy riches.
So is this great and wide sea, wherein are things creeping innumerable, both small and great beasts.
There go the ships: there is that leviathan, whom thou hast made to play therein.

From POB HMSS 6:163:

Mollyhawks, Cape pigeons, petrels,
For now they were in the rich waters of the south Atlantic,
Waters that could and did support Leviathan,
Who might often be seen sporting in the the distance.

Don Seltzer


From: Doug Essinger-Hileman
Date: Tue, 4 Dec 2001 11:25:08 -0500
Subject: Re: [POB] GRP HMSS: was Have ye room, for a wayward sailor?

Both the New Revised Standard Version and Tanakh, the translation of the Jewish Publication Society, use "sport" instead of play. Of course, it would have been the KJV which would have been contemporary with Jack and Stephen. Perhaps this is an example of POB not being as careful of history as he usually is? Or was there an English translation contemporary to Jack and Stephen that used the word "sport"?

Doug Essinger-Hileman
Drowsy Frowsy List Greeter, Rated Able
39°51'06"N
79°54'01"W


From: Ladyshrike@AOL.COM
Date: Tue, 4 Dec 2001 21:14:54 -0500
Subject: [POB] POB error was: GRP HMSS: was Have ye room, for a wayward sailor?

In a message dated 12/4/01 7:56:51, dseltzer@DRAPER.COM writes:

From POB HMSS 6:163
Mollyhawks,

It's actually supposed to be mollymawks. I came across this just the other day and meant to comment on it, but Kyle has returned - and that's much more interesting.

Alice


From: Kyle Lerfald
Date: Wed, 5 Dec 2001 14:37:03 -0800
Subject: Re: [POB] POB error was: GRP HMSS: was Have ye room, for a wayward sailor?

Au contraire! Or however you spell it....What's a Mollymawk?


From: Ladyshrike@AOL.COM
Date: Wed, 5 Dec 2001 22:15:11 -0500
Subject: Re: [POB] POB error was: GRP HMSS: was Have ye room, for a wayward sailor?

POB wrote it (or his editors or someone) mollyhawk - which there is no such bird. (But if you knew it was supposed to a bird, one could easily think mollyHAWK, not MollyMAWK, doncha think?)

Mollymawks are Black-backed Albatrosses, and I think they are called Mollymawks only in Australia and New Zealand. Elsewhere they're called Black-backed Albatrosses.

Alice


From: Curtis Ruder
Date: Thu, 6 Dec 2001 16:15:34 -0500
Subject: [POB] HMS Surprise

Ha Ha! I am into the book of the month, albeit some five weeks late. I find quite funny the legal system in which the Spanish treasure cannot be given out as prize money since war had not formally been declared. But shouldn't it then be returned to the Spaniards? Had war been declared before the prize determination was made and what influence did this have on the decision? Or was it just standard that the crown would keep all the ill-gotten gains?

Curtis Ruder
30:28:1.556 N
84:16:38.860 W


From:Jebvbva@AOL.COM
Date: Fri, 7 Dec 2001 00:44:19 -0500
Subject: Re: [POB] HMS Surprise

War was declared shortly after- but the point was- the crown ordered him to take the gold, which in itself was an act of war- but then bamboozled him out of his prize money.

Blatherin' John B


From: Thistle Farm
Date: Sun, 9 Dec 2001 18:35:36 -0500
Subject: [POB] Unappreciated

Thanks y'all for adding in a catch up month before we start TMC!

I just finished HMSS. Ah, joy! When I had a pencil handy I was marking a passage on every other page-- the humor is perfect, but especially the way the conversations are so utterly real. Jack talking about the guns, while Stephen is talking about Sophie, both thinking and talking on separate trains of thought, but it makes a whole conversation. The way, pages, chapters after a conversation, Jack will respond to a statement or question of Stephen's, as a tangent to a current conversation. So real.

And, most under appreciated-- I never realized what lovely wide, note taking margins these books have-- easily wide enough for a question mark, a note or two or a whole series of exclamations. Ah, joy!

I shall catch you in January as I started TMC last night-- it will only be my second reading, as I skipped it last time through.

Sarah


From: John Finneran
Date: Mon, 10 Dec 2001 01:33:51 -0800
Subject: [POB] GRP: HMSS: DiI and Hussein

I wrote (under the subject "Hussein"):

Interesting comparisons could be drawn between PO'B's early Indian child-hero Hussein, and his later child-heroine Dil: I believe I'll develop this a bit more in a separate post, since it's more a part of the Group Read thread.

Basically, the Dil story could be considered as a darker version of the Hussein story.

Both are Indian children, who survive in a dangerous, adult world, by living on their wits. Hussein can survive and thrive, but Dil is crushed. Perhaps PO'B's vision has become darker in the 30 odd years between writing the two stories, or perhaps he is looking at the situation for an Indian child in a more realistic, less romantic manner. Or perhaps he saw survival as easier for a boy than for a girl.

Speaking of Dil and other PO'B characters, has anyone noticed that her name is close to Dillon?

Some similarities between Dil and Dillon: both are close to Stephen, both are alive in only a single book, both are killed violently after achieving their fondest wishes (heroic battle for Dillon the bracelets for Dil) and seem to die with smiles on their faces.

John Finneran


From: Steve Ross
Date: Mon, 10 Dec 2001 11:00:01 -0600
Subject: Re: [POB] GRP: HMSS: DiI and Hussein

It's been a little while since I read Hussein, but a couple of things stick out in my memory about it, and they may be relevant here. The main thing is that, as I think the blurb writer noted, O'Brian shows in Hussein (as a very young author) how successfully he can recreate for us a place and time that he knew only by report . . . obvious Aubrey/Maturin relevance there.

The character of Hussein himself I find interesting because he is a sympathetic protagonist, and yet, to obtain safety and his heart's desire, he does some thoroughly discreditable things, without even a hint that he (or the author) might be concerned about the "morality" of it. I have tried to think of a parallel character in the Aubreyad, but can't. But I am taken with the parallel with Dil, as John pointed out. Would Dil have resorted to theft and murder, if the situation required it? If so, is that because the world she lived in made such things necessary and excusable? If not, is that because she is a "better person" than Hussein, or because O'Brian himself had changed in the intervening years?

and the Dil--Dillon parallel: excellent!

--------------------
a complacent pragmatical worldly fellow (HMSS p. 196) . . .

Steve Ross
30° 24' 32"N
91° 05' 28"W


From: Curtis Ruder
Date: Mon, 10 Dec 2001 12:59:00 -0500
Subject: Re: [POB] Hussein

The most obvious parallel seems to be Diana. The connection between Dil and Diana is made explicit by Steven (HMS p. 195 of my paperback copy) - "It is hard to think of her (Dil's) lively young spirit sinking, vanishing in the common lot. I shall advise with Diana: I have a groping notion of some unidentified common quality."

I am now almost done with HMS the second time, and the posts this weekend focusing on the pause between HMS and the later novels have reminded me why I loved Diana especially during these early novels. She shines in comparison to Sophie, and it is Dil's innocence aged which flourishes in Diana. She is not virtuous in the ordinary sense, because virtue itself requires submission to the morality of the period, and she is simply not subject to those laws. And one of my favorite things about Diana is how she always greets Steven. He has been torturing himself for hundreds of pages about how the first encounter will be, and Diana always just says "Howdy" as if they had lunch together yesterday.

Sophie, on the other hand, is so static in these early novels. I compare her character at this point to the women in Dostoevsky, who are not characters in themselves but rather sounding boards for the protaganists. It is not until later in the canon that she strikes out and becomes interesting to me.

Curtis Ruder
30:28:1.556 N
84:16:38.860 W


From: Rowen 84
Date: Mon, 10 Dec 2001 13:39:53 -0500
Subject: Re: [POB] GRP: HMSS: DiI and Hussein

In a message dated 12-10-01 10:55:56 AM, skross@LSU.EDU writes:

.... The main thing is that, as I think the blurb writer noted, O'Brian shows in Hussein (as a very young author) how successfully he can recreate for us a place and time that he knew only by report . . . obvious Aubrey/Maturin relevance there.

When I read Hussein I was astounded, both because he was so young and because O'Brian had never been NEAR India, at the amount of plausible detail he included, It struck me that he must have had a remarkable mind, able to absorb, retain and recall when he needed it, every word he ever read or heard. King mentions that the reviews of Hussein were glowing, comparing his stories to Kipling, and when you read Hussein you can certainly see why. In some ways Caesar and Hussein are even more impressive than the Aubrey series, just because they were done by a 14-21 yr. old.

The character of Hussein himself I find interesting because he is a sympathetic protagonist, and yet, to obtain safety and his heart's desire, he does some thoroughly discreditable things, without even a hint that he (or the author) might be concerned about the "morality" of it.

Doesn't this have an echo in Stephen sometimes? The Wrey and Ledward episode for example? And in Jack in battle. (although he does have black thoughts afterward).

Susan and others have pointed out the strong parallels with animals and nature in many episodes. Doesn't this amoral point (Dil) of view reflect an animal's "morality"? Does a lion worry about his prey? Does a deer stop to think that the plants he eats belong to another's garden? Can the blade of grass comprehend its origin and untimate fate?

Would Dil have resorted to theft and murder, if the situation required it? If so, is that because the world she lived in made such things necessary and excusable? If not, is that because she is a "better person" than Hussein, or because O'Brian himself had changed in the intervening years?

I think Dil would almost certainly have done anything, not from 'evil' but from that amoral position I've described.

There's another allusion, too, to Dil's 'natural' state. When she's feeding Stephen I was struck as to how it sounds like a mother bird would feed her chicks. Then a page or two along they are watching the approaching line of elephants, and Dil begins to sing. And O'Brian breaks into the description several times and repeats "Dil sang on" or "Dil sang on and on" until Stephen sees Diana, whereupon we have "What is amiss with thee?' asked Dil, breaking off..." Shortly afterward we have Diana charming Dil as one would charm or tame a little bird. (p. 212ish)


From: Peter Mackay
Date: Tue, 11 Dec 2001 05:43:49 +1100
Subject: Re: [POB] GRP: HMSS: DiI and Hussein

O'Brian was closer to his WW2 intelligence days when he wrote Hussein. In the world of agents in Occupied Europe, theft and murder were encouraged.

Unfortunately for this theory, it was on the wrong side of WW2 - Hussein was published in 1938.

But theft and murder are not absolutes. They might violate commanments, but that does not make them immoral as such. Would I steal to feed my starving children? Would I kill to save their lives? Without hesitation.


From: Ray McPherson
Date: Mon, 10 Dec 2001 20:18:02 -0800
Subject: Re: [POB] [POBA thought about Stephen (WASGRP: HMSS: DiI and Hussein)

Rowen 84 wrote:

Doesn't this have an echo in Stephen sometimes? The Wrey and Ledward episode for example?

I've always found it interesting that that although Stephen slit the throats of the French agent in Johnson's apartment with great insouciance, he declined to fight in the naval battles with Jack. The closest he came was to steer a ship when the Brits boarded a French vessel (it's too late for me to look up and reference chapter and verse.) Is this because POB was himself of two minds on blood letting?

Ray McP


From: Jebvbva@AOL.COM
Date: Tue, 11 Dec 2001 01:54:35 -0500
Subject: Re: [POB] [POBA thought about Stephen (WASGRP: HMSS: DiI and Hussein)

I thought Jack made it clear in several instances that the Doctor's battle station was rightly in the sick-bay, taking care of the wounded. He had no place in actually fighting in a battle, just as today's watch bills assign certain duties to all the crew for various evolutions.

Blatherin' John B


From: Steve Ross
Sent: 12/11/2001 12:19 PM
Subject: Re: [POB] GRP: HMSS: Dil and Hussein

Peter wrote:

But theft and murder are not absolutes. They might violate commanments, but that does not make them immoral as such. Would I steal to feed my starving children? Would I kill to save their lives? Without hesitation.

And Rowen wrote (it was you, wasn't it Rowen?):

Susan and others have pointed out the strong parallels with animals and nature in many episodes. Doesn't this amoral point (Dil) of view reflect an animal's "morality"? Does a lion worry about his prey? Does a deer stop to think that the plants he eats belong to another's garden? Can the blade of grass comprehend its origin and untimate fate?

I think both of these remarks are appropriate, but neither one is a complete answer. Yes, it is necessary sometimes for the sake of one's self-preservation, or to feed/defend others, to violate what otherwise might be concerned a fundamental moral code. And yes, I think both Dil and Hussein partake, to some degree, of that "animal" amorality. But the further point of my question was to explore whether or not any of O'Brian's other characters are like Hussein in being both *sympathetic* (we identify with and "like" them) and amoral to the extent that they violate moral laws, not out of necessity, but out of *desire* (in Hussein's case, to get the woman he loves, and the treasure). Seems to me we enter a more ambiguous territory here!

I think it was Curtis (?) who proposed a parallel with Diana. Yes, the intended likeness between Diana and Dil is definitely there. But is Diana a Hussein-like character? On the one hand, is she "sympathetic?" (I foresee a huge range of opinions on that one) . . . On the other hand, is she oblivious of, or uncaring about, the effects on others of her actions?

Anybody?

--------------------
a complacent pragmatical worldly fellow (HMSS p. 196) . . .
Steve Ross
30° 24' 32"N
91° 05' 28"W


From: Susan Wenger
Sent: 12/11/2001 03:15 PM PST
Subject: Re: [POB] GRP: HMSS: Dil and Hussein

I think that Stephen Maturin draws a very fine distinction, one that he himself isn't always consistent about, on what is right in these situations. He detests the act of shooting at a man on another ship just because the flag on top of the ship is different from his own. He sees the necessity for killing a loathsome traitor. He would kill Bonaparte, given an opportunity, for the good of all mankind, but very few others - certainly not strangers who happen to be enemies. He would kill in a duel, but as we saw several times, he would prefer not to do so if avoidable without loss of honor.

- Susan


From: Linnea
Sent: 12/16/2001 11:00 AM EST
Subject: [POB] Group Read: HMSS Tortoises & Tigers & Dil

Alerted to the foreshadowings and interplay of animal images by the remarkable Lissuns, I have some further thoughts:

Re the Tigers in HMSS, I was surprised to see the following when I raced through the Group Read on Post Captain already posted by the redoubtable John Finneran at http://jfinnera.www1.50megs.com/pob.html:

From: Susan Wenger
Date: Thu, 4 Oct 2001 07:50:14 -0700
Subject: Group Read: PC: Another "animal" parallel

Here's another "animal" anecdote: the first thing Stephen says after Diane first appears on the scene is: "There is that fox of theirs," remarked Stephen, in a conversational tone. "There is that fox we hear so much about. Though indeed it is a vixen, sure." Deliberate foreshadowing of her character? No doubt in MY mind.

Which was replied to by Don Seltzer:

Date: Fri, 5 Oct 2001 09:54:48 -0400
Subject: Re: GroupRead:PC:Another "animal" parallel

Another such metaphor in PC is when Stephen is making one of his nocturnal visits to Diana, and is examining the design of a sari. There is a repeating pattern of an East India Company officer holding a bottle of brandy and being attacked by a tiger. In the repeating pattern, the expression of the officer appears to vary between happiness and agony. Diana then offers Stephen a brandy.

Here one must believe that the stage is set for Stephen's encounters with Diana in India in HMSS, first in Bombay when he becomes physically ill when he's rejected by her and she urges him to don a robe; and when he sees her again in Calcutta, hoping for her answer to his proposal, and finds her in Cannning's house with tigers chained in recesses in the porticoes. PC was published in 1972 and HMSS in 1973, so this must be deliberate. Stephen has certainly been flailed between the posts of happiness and agony in anticipating his first meeting with Diana in India and awaiting his second. Of course, it all ends tragically, with Canning's reaction to finding Diana sobbing on Stephen's shoulder, and the duel.

The duel puzzles me: Stephen had hoped to only wing Canning, not kill him, and has sympathy for Canning as a Jew; he surely must have understood why Canning would have been jealous when finding Stephen sitting in Bombay in shirt and breeches and then in Calcutta with Diana clad only in a gown, a jealousy fanned by his own predicament with his wife due to arrive, and Diana's frequent male visitors.

The narrative makes clear Diana's position as a kept woman and her reputation in India; she is ruined, of course, both in England and abroad, and if Stephen makes her the catalyst for a duel, he doesn't protect her from further notoriety. This compunction never comes up in the book.

I have many thoughts on Diana: I admire her spirit and sympathize with her plight in that world. Without wealth and as a widow, she can't marry into the world in which she been reared, the world of wealth and privilege, and she always realizes and openly discusses her situation with Stephen. She might have married him if he'd only asked her on their carriage ride to Dover in PC. And again, they might have married if Jack had allowed her to sail with the SURPRISE from Calcutta, to tend Stephen after his dueling wound.

Tortoises:
It was striking to read of Stephen's discovery of Testudo aubreii and its role in his further recovery from the fever of his wound. He had bared his soul in his delirium, lost his carapace, as it were, to an uncomfortable Jack who had nursed him of necessity, and the tortoise discovery passage ends with Stephen crying: "It does me good to see him. This tortoise has quite recovered me," he cried, putting his arm round the enormous carapace. As a metaphor, Stephen is now healing and able to resume his shield against the world of his feelings for Diana, and his secretive ways in his world of espionage.

Dil:
I was struck, too, as many Lissuns were, by the parallels between Diana and Dil. And POB makes it clear that there is a parallel: Dil feeds a sloppy Stephen on the glacis of the fort during the festival, just before Diana spies him from her barouche below, and later she feeds him, sitting cross-legged like a native, when she realizes how badly his hands were mauled under torture by the French.

The silver bangles must parallel the desire of Diana for wealth, thus independence, and Stephen's desire for Diana, which must end in tragedy.

*** Many of the episodes in HMSS have been among the most memorable for me: Stephen's castaway days on St. Paul's Rocks, and Diana's run up the hill to greet Stephen, Stephen's adaptation to life in India, and of course, Dil, as well as the joyous, comic, bittersweet reunion of Jack and Sophie.
Another note played in the POB symphony are his naming of the ships at the end, the Euryalus and Ethalion .

Looking them up in Gary Brown's estimable PASC, I also saw an entry on the HMS Eurydice. Gary Brown writes: " In a play upon the name on the name of the frigate, Stephen Maturin compares his abandonment by Diana Villiers to the death of Eurydice, Orpheus' wife (RM 5)."

I wonder if POB had thought of using that ship at the end of HMSS but saved it for later, or not. It would have been a fitting ship for Sophie to sail on, adding an ironic note.***

Linnea Angermuller


From:Steve Ross
Sent: 12/17/2001 02:43 PM
Subject: Re: [POB] Group Read: HMSS Tortoises & Tigers & Dil

Oh, well done, Linnea! (BTW, does anyone besides myself find it charmingly appropriate that we have a Linnea so interested in zoological matters?)

Your thoughts on the animal metaphors etc., but especially on Dil, Diana, and the duel, are very evocative. (I also like Stephen's carapace!)

But specifically:
[On PC]:
Here one must believe that the stage is set for Stephen's encounters with
Diana in India in HMSS, first in Bombay when he becomes physically ill when
he's rejected by her and she urges him to don a robe; and when he sees her
again in Calcutta, hoping for her answer to his proposal, and finds her in
Cannning's house with tigers chained in recesses in the porticoes. PC was
published in 1972 and HMSS in 1973, so this must be deliberate. Stephen

I think this may very well be correct, and that either POB was fooling when he said he originally had not intended to write another book in the series after PC, or else I am misremembering!

The duel puzzles me: Stephen had hoped to only wing Canning, not kill him,
and has sympathy for Canning as a Jew; he surely must have understood why
Canning would have been jealous when finding Stephen sitting in Bombay in
shirt and breeches and then in Calcutta with Diana clad only in a gown, a
jealousy fanned by his own predicament with his wife due to arrive, and
Diana's frequent male visitors.

This is also an apt observation, and to the point. But there are some additional considerations about the duel:

First, to remain on the metaphorical plane for the moment, Stephen in confronting Canning on the dueling ground is _fighting with himself_. This is figured in many ways, by a number of metaphors and images surrounding the dueling incident (some of them are also discussed in other posts that I think are already in the Groupread archive). The moral ambiguity is clearest, perhaps, in the image that Don Seltzer has explicated, of Stephen walking the line between the two fierce tigers named Right and Wrong (and declining to take that same route when he leaves Canning's house after seeing Diana!). I continue to think that Stephen's Latin quotations uttered in a state of delirium after the duel also indicate his conflict with himself.

Beyond this, however, and leaving the figurative language aside, can we say there is a battle going on between *morality* on the one hand, and *honor* on the other? We have seen S. tormented by the question of his honor in several ways, and almost getting into a serious fight with Jack over it. The duel, of course, is the classic locus of a man's honor, which he must defend to the death no matter what the "right or wrong" of it (or the legality of it). So, of course Stephen sees that Canning has good reason to be jealous (though as he acidly points out, he need make no apologies to any man for kissing a woman, unless she is that man's wife). But once the challenge has been issued, Stephen's highly developed sense of honor will not let him back down.

Interestingly, Dil comes into play here again. We have seen some discussion of how POB portrays Dil's state as a kind of "animal" innocence, or amorality (we also had some enlightening comparisons with Hussein, in his earlier book). This has been troubling me for a while, but I have not brought it up in here because everyone else had let the subject drop. At the risk of being a bore, then, can we really say, after all, that Dil is "innocent"? If it is true that she is like an animal in that she can, without being guilty, do things that would be "immoral" in other contexts, then maybe she truly is *amoral*: capable neither of guilt *nor* innocence. If true, then I retract my earlier suggestion that one of the qualities she shared with Diana was innocence.

By contrast, Stephen is doomed to live in a world of guilt and innocence, morality and honor. For the sake of his "sacred honor," he is willing to kill (and at one point in PC, he is described as having a "reptilian" look when he displays his deadly skill). His political convictions, for which he would kill (and has killed) if necessary, fall in the category of honor, not that of morality (it seems to me). So he is forced, by those fundamental values, to do things that, at another level, he "knows" are wrong. His killing of enemy intelligence agents (also recently discussed) is another example.

Which world does Diana live in? What "fundamental values," if any, propel her?

Finally . . .

The silver bangles must parallel the desire of Diana for wealth, thus independence, and Stephen's desire for Diana, which must end in tragedy.

Yes indeed. But don't they signify something else as well? By buying those bangles for Dil, Stephen "bought her off" so that she would not accompany him to Diana's house; he also tried in a way to bind her to him by buying her happiness. Was what happened to Dil a warning that he would not be able to buy, or to "bind" Diana with the offer of a ring, either?

--------------------
a complacent pragmatical worldly fellow (HMSS p. 196) . . .
Steve Ross
30° 24' 32"N
91° 05' 28"W


From: Susan Wenger
Sent: 12/17/2001 12:43 PM PST
Subject: Re: [POB] Group Read: HMSS Tortoises & Tigers & Dil

Both Linnea and Steve have raised interesting thoughts.

We've seen that O'Brian likes to visit various issues from different points of view, changing a variable, exploring another possibility. This post makes me wonder if Stephen's duel with Canning is another side of his verbal duel with Dillon in M&C: if the conflict between duty and honor and morality is one that O'Brian wrestled with as often as Stephen did : }


From:"Matt@Sea"
Sent: 12/17/2001 05:50 PM EST
Subject: Re: [POB] [Possible THD Spoiler] Group Read: HMSS Tortoises & Tigers & Dil

I believe there is another dimension to the duelling beyond duty and honor for Stephen. In THD, when he and the master have words over the dog and the golden hand, Stephen leaves the conflict with a smile and immediately asks one of the lieutenants to be his second.

It's pretty clear that calling out the master is a purely calculated manoeuvre designed to force him to acquiesce to the recovery of the hand. My sense was that Stephen knew Jack would be indirectly induced to intercede and that there was little chance the pair would actually fight. So it wasn't about honor and certainly not about courage. It was but tactics, an application of his secret mind to an immediate problem.

My guess is that Stephen views fighting as he views so many other things: as a quirky outcome of the foibles of human nature.

For the philosopher, it's another form of empirical investigation, made more vivid and interesting by occurring in the first person. Even in HMSS, Stephen is rather detached the night before he fights Canning, reflecting on whether making diary entries before duelling makes much sense.

Or perhaps he simply takes a rather casual view of duelling, because he little cares if he lives or dies or because he knows he is a capable shot.

Regards,
Matt

(BTW, as a dog owner, I was a bit distressed by the way that he seemed to value the hand over the welfare of the dog.)


From: Susan Wenger
Sent: 12/17/2001 04:13 PM PST
Subject: Re: [POB] [Possible THD Spoiler] Group Read: HMSS Tortoises & Tigers & Dil

Another consideration along the same lines is that the dog DID chew the hand, and the marine wasn't properly apologetic. Stephen had Jack in the same quandary in "Master and Commander:" Jack thought he was NOT 1/2 beat behind, but had to admit to himself that he'd been sawing, which was in itself wrong. Perhaps Stephen is being childish here, pushing it because he knows he's going to win this argument. He's in emotional upheaval, and his social skills fell apart.

- Susan


From: Don Seltzer
Sent: 12/18/2001 10:57 AM EST
Subject: Re: [POB] Group Read: Duty, was HMSS Tortoises & Tigers & Dil

Steve Ross wrote of Stephen's struggle with honor and morality, and Susan Wenger in reply wrote of "the conflict between duty and honor and morality."

Perhaps this is a key difference in Jack and Stephen. Jack has a firm sense of where his duty lies, and that is how he sets his moral compass. It is rare that honor and morality conflict with his sense of duty. Jack always knows where his duty lies, and he is confident that such a path will also be honorable and moral, a very Nelsonian concept.

Stephen's self-doubts and moral conflicts are due in part to a lack of such a well-defined duty. His loyalties are mixed between the causes of Catalonia, Ireland, the British crown, and the Royal Navy, and in each case his loyalty is qualified. The only cause in which he can commit himself without reservation is a negative one, the defeat of Napoleon and his tyranny.

Don Seltzer


From: Susan Wenger
Sent: 12/18/2001 08:10 AM PST
Subject: Re: [POB] Group Read: Duty, was HMSS Tortoises & Tigers & Dil

Yes, that's a nice distinction. I'm certain that POB felt as Stephen did on this subject, much as he admired and recognized the value and need for people like Jack to defend England.


From: Steven K Ross
Sent: 12/18/2001 01:38 PM
Subject: Re: [POB] Group Read: Duty, was HMSS Tortoises & Tigers & Dil

I am very much in agreement with this. Stephen is forced to see things in their full ambiguity, in shades of gray, no matter how painful this may be; for Jack, on the other hand, "morality" cannot be in conflict with "duty" or "honor." That is just the sort of person he is; for him, things are either black or white, right or wrong . . . naked or clothed.
--Steve Ross


From: Linnea
Sent: 12/18/2001 04:15 PM EST
Subject: Re: [POB] Group Read: HMSS Tortoises & Tigers & Dil

Thank you, Steve and Susan! Made my day. Toggling back and forth between Digests and the Gunroom, I missed a lot of these messages and have now caught up.

Thanks for the "charmingly appropriate that we have a Linnea so interested in zoological matters?" Well, I do love gardening and plants and trees, adored the tropics, and the animals we saw there all the time, not to mention the birds, and adore Gerald Durrell. But I can't aspire to be such a natural philosopher as Stephen is.

And I agree that his sense of honor won't allow him to ignore Canning's blow. As you wrote, Don Seltzer pointed out the conflict of Right and Wrong. I can't remember if Stephen ever again is so conflicted because perhaps never again is he so hopeful for a liaison with Diana; he's been less than candid with Jack, and becomes something like an automaton before the duel, feeling he's caused Dil's death as a deus ex machina, and his entire life has been a fight to keep his honor as a bastard. Poor Stephen, he understands himself and others all too well, but events can still propel him into acting against his better instincts.

I can't write anything of value to add to what you've all written. All those good posts do cause me to mull over motives and character, though, in a way I never did on first and second readings.

Steve asks: "Which world does Diana live in? What "fundamental values," if any, propel her?"

Very good question. What world *can* she live in? We know her childhood was privileged and exotic, and impoverished widowhood left her at the mercy of the hateful Mrs. Williams, who then farmed her out to take care of the "teapot" cousin (Jerry Shurman, any Alice in Wonderland here?). Most upper and middle class households until perhaps World War II had maiden aunts or unfortunates who were given their keep in exchange for their help with the house and children. Not Diana! She clearly sees her only way out is to use her beauty, but she sees her narrow choices all too clearly and chafes at her role.

Not to make a big deal out of gender, but we do pity Jack when he has no ship, and Stephen when he can't set foot on all those shores that tempt him with their fauna, as Jack keeps cracking on. We must pity Diana when she can't achieve what we have to assume is her goal of independence and wealth. Why she isn't content to attract a parson or simple country gentleman must lie in her youthful life, and the fact that she isn't maternal.

She is young enough when we meet her that she still has aspirations and hopes. Sophie has only the traditional ones of a romantic marriage and a family, and isn't as memorably etched. She may have her own struggles with her gender role, but accepts it. Can we ascribe a better character to Sophie in her unthinking acceptance?
Diana seems to have quick sympathy and generosity, as we see in her treatment of Dil and empathy for Stephen. What fundamental values do any of them have, excluding Stephen, whose private thoughts are the foil for all the others' more forthright actions. He, alone of the four major characters, is given to reflection and journal-keeping. We are never allowed into Diana's and Sophie's private thoughts. Jack of course is a decent, accomplished man in his vocation, inspired at times when he fights, and I do love Jack.

I'm amazed at POB's insights into them and his awareness of so much in human relationships. It's very hard not to hear him speaking or thinking when we read about Stephen.

I see so much of these four characters as formed by their backgrounds; they are almost helpless to be other than who they are, striving for affection and identity, love, and a place in the world. That's what we do when we're 30.

~~ Linnea


From: Susan Wenger
Sent: 12/18/2001 01:11 PM PST
Subject: Re: [POB] Group Read: HMSS Tortoises & Tigers & Dil

Nice analysis. Y'know, I don't think Diana would have refused a nice parson or simple country gentleman. They didn't make her any offers. She was a beautiful woman, and sometimes her beauty worked against her. She got a great many lecherous offers, sly winks, unwanted attentions from men, married and unmarried, which worked her up into a suspicion of ALL men's motives. Most nice parsons and simple country gentlemen would have been afraid to pursue Diana, afraid that the beautiful woman would laugh at them, put them down, make them feel ridiculous for having offered. Despite all appearances, I believe that Diana WOULD have married Stephen if he'd made her an outright, straightforward proposal early on. He didn't. He hinted, he whined, he talked in circles, he did not say "Diana, I love you, will you marry me?" Stephen, also, was afraid of rejection, was afraid of the forthright proposal. When he proposed to Diana in India she was astonished - she had no idea he would be serious about marrying her. She thought he was offering out of pity, out of a sense of duty, out of friendship. She truly didn't know before then that he loved her, and she wasn't sure of it even then. At that point, she wasn't even looking for the best match she could make - she was being noble, trying to keep Stephen from marrying her for the wrong reasons and being unhappy afterward.

Comedy of Errors ain't innit - a little straight and honest communication would have changed the whole course of the series : }

- Susan


From: Curtis Ruder
Sent: 12/18/2001 04:15 PM EST
Subject: Re: [POB] Group Read

Don wrote:

"Stephen's self-doubts and moral conflicts are due in part to a lack of such a well-defined duty. His loyalties are mixed between the causes of Catalonia, Ireland, the British crown, and the Royal Navy, and in each case his loyalty is qualified. The only cause in which he can commit himself without reservation is a negative one, the defeat of Napoleon and his tyranny."

I agree with the sentiment, I think, but disagree with this characterization. Stephen's code is less tangible, but the reason his support waffles for each of the mentioned causes is that each of them individually represents an imperfect representation of his code.. He is motivated by individual and national rights, and Bonaparte is the antithesis to this code, which is why Stephen is militant and unwavering there. But to say he lacks a "well-defined duty" seems wrong. Rather he has principles which he applies consistently throughout the story, and from which I think we could extrapolate confidently even to current conflicts. For example, let me pose the following question: where would Stephen stand on the Israeli-Palestinian conflict? Would he support an Israeli state, and if so, would he support a Palestinian state in Gaza and the West Bank? If we can answer this with confidence, then this would demonstrate in fact that his principles and duty is well defined. I do not want to answer these questions myself as I do not want to bias answers, but will weigh in tomorrow.

Curtis


From: Alec O'Flaherty
Sent: 12/18/2001 10:28 PM GMT
Subject: Re: [POB] Group Read

Curtis wrote:
Surely his causes are very much dovetailed/manipulated by the fact that O'Brians initial hero is an officer of the Royal Navy.. and the stories that
must follow(if you write 20 books)

Jack was always going to be Jack

Stephen evolved.

A Catalan who studied at Trinity

A small pale almost ugly Irish male--no such thing !

Forsooth

(I rest my case)

Alec O F
'It's the heaviest hurley that ever yet was cut from the deadly upas-tree.'


From: Peter Mackay
Sent: 12/19/2001 09:37 AM ZE11
Subject: Re: [POB] Group Read: HMSS Tortoises & Tigers & Dil

Comedy of Errors ain't innit - a little straight and honest communication would have changed the whole course of the series : }

Yeah, and if Scarlett O'Hara had been a little more straightforward and honest GWTW would have been a long boring book.

The twin themes of Jack's ambition and Stephen's search for stability dominate the canon. Jack, from the moment we meet him, is dominated by promotion and the supremacy of the Royal Navy. Stephen wants something, but I'm not sure what. An estate in Ireland, a quick-witted woman by his side, a brood of children and peace. I think Stephen wants that or something very like, but it would be no story if he ever gained it.

The Yellow Admiral is the closest we ever get to some sort of peace and bliss. The war is over, everyone is settled, Bonden's prize fight is the biggest news of The Shire.

And then, well it's spoiler territory.

Cheers, Peter


From: Marian Van Til
Sent: 12/18/2001 08:03 PM EST
Subject: [POB] Stephen's ambitions (was: RE: [POB] Group Read: HMSS Tortoises & Tigers & Dil)

Peter wrote:

The twin themes of Jack's ambition and Stephen's search for stability dominate the canon. Jack, from the moment we meet him, is dominated by< promotion and the supremacy of the Royal Navy. Stephen wants something, but I'm not sure what. An estate in Ireland, a quick-witted woman by his side, a brood of children and peace. I think Stephen wants that or something very like, but it would be no story if he ever gained it.

Not to be too picky (well, what the heck, why stop now?): Among those things Peter lists it seems to me the one thing Stephen most definitely did not want was a brood of children. Was he not a most reluctant expectant father, and had never pictured himself as a parent? Fatherhood grew on him, of course -- as it seems to on a great number of men. But I think it's safe to say having a passel of children, or even one child, was not among his blissful fantasies.

Marian


From: Marian Van Til
Sent: 12/18/2001 08:04 PM EST
Subject: Re: [POB] Group Read

Jack was always going to be Jack
Stephen evolved.
A Catalan who studied at Trinity
A small pale almost ugly Irish male- no such thing !
Forsooth
(I rest my case)

Alec O F

Just how good-looking *are* you, Mr. O' Flaherty? (I couldn't help myself; you left a broadside target.)<g>

Marian


From: Rosemary Davis
Sent: 12/18/2001 09:43 PM EST
Subject: [POB] fair food and other gray areas

Good point someone made (sorry - I've not kept track of who it was) about Jack's view being black and white in relation to Stephen and gray areas. It's also interesting to observe how uncomfortable Jack becomes when he has to deal with any sort of moral question (such as his previously-discussed judgment of Diana late in HMSS, his refusal to allow Stephen to bring Padeen aboard, etc.) that does not fall into black or white.

I'm Camembert. (cheese)

I nominate Linnea and Susan for co-posts of the day for their lovely analyses of Diana (though MacKenna's was not far behind neither.)

No sane person EATS at a county fair. I'd sooner have some of the foods served on some of Jack and Stephen's leaner voyages...-RD, finicky eater.


From: Steven K Ross
Sent: 12/18/2001 10:15 PM
Subject: Re: [POB] Group Read: HMSS Tortoises & Tigers & Dil

Linnea wrote:

Thanks for the "charmingly appropriate that we have a Linnea so interested in zoological matters?" Well, I do love gardening and plants and trees, adored the tropics, and the animals we saw there all the time, not to mention the birds, and adore Gerald Durrell. But I can't aspire to be such a natural philosopher as Stephen is.

Well, I was actually trying to puzzle out whether there was any comparison between Linnea and LinnaeUS. Bad joke . . . sorry.

Steve


From: Linnea
Sent: Wednesday, December 19, 2001 1:33 PM

Waddisay? Waddisay? Steve, I was charmed that you thought it was charming!

And I smoked the Linnaeus, of course. I've always been happy that I had this natural philospher bent (since I discovered just who Linnaeus was). My ancestors were Swedish (NO !), and I have a sister Britta and a daughter Britta. Olsons and Pynttners and Bittners ain't innit.

Can't think of any other List I'm on where any of the group would know what you meant re Linneaus!

I thought your note was very apt.

~~ Linnea (charming little pink flower in the Swedish highlands


From: Peter Mackay
Sent: Wednesday, December 19, 2001 1:49 PM

I thought, when you first signed on, that you were posting under a pseudonym, a wholly appropriate one, given the nature of Stephen's bent.

But I am delighted to find Linnea is your true name, and a delightful name for a delightful lady it is to be sure.


From: Don Seltzer
Sent: 12/19/2001 09:24 AM EST
Subject: Re: [POB] Group Read Duty

At 4:15 PM -0500 12/18/2001, Curtis Ruder wrote:

... But to say [Stephen] lacks a "well-defined duty" seems wrong. Rather he has principles which he applies consistently throughout the story, and from which I think we could extrapolate confidently even to current conflicts.

I think that there is a definite distinction between duty and principles. Duty is obligation and obedience to some group or higher authority, and implies some level of "belonging" to, and serving a particular group. Jack is comfortable in his role as an officer in the Royal Navy, and adopts its principles and objectives as his own, almost as a matter of faith. It is rare that his duty to the RN and the crown lead to conflicts with his moral principles or his honor (leaving the exceptions to another discussion).

Of course Stephen has principles and a sense of honor. But as the perennial outsider, he does not share Jack's obligation or obedience to a particular group and its particular code. He is left to question every moral decision, resulting in his self-doubts.

I will immediately amend the previous statement. Stephen does have a well-defined sense of duty when in the role of physician. He unquestioningly accepts the Hippocratic oath, and will treat friend and enemy alike, without the slightest moral uncertainties. Perhaps Stephen is happiest, or most at peace with himself when acting as a doctor.

Curtis continued:

me pose the following question: where would Stephen stand on the Israeli-Palestinian conflict? Would he support an Israeli state, and if so, would he support a Palestinian state in Gaza and the West Bank? If we can answer this with confidence, then this would demonstrate in fact that his principles and duty is well defined.

I would argue that Duty has nothing to do with whatever position Stephen might hypothetically take. Being neither Israeli, Palestinian, Jewish, Moslem, or any other member of either side, he has no obligation and thus no well-defined duty. As to Principles, I wouldn't hazard a guess as to where they would lead Stephen.

Don Seltzer


From: Don Seltzer
Sent: Friday, December 21, 2001 8:59 AM
Subject: GRP HMSS: Astronomical Observations

In the final chapter of HMSS, Jack and Stephen go ashore on a small, uninhabited island in the Indian Ocean. While Stephen makes the "most important discovery of his life", Jack is attempting to fix the exact longitude of the island, apparently by observation of Venus in the middle of the day.

Is this probable? What kind of observation was Jack making? A transit of Venus across the sun was sometimes used, but this is inconsistent with Venus being near a pale moon. The only other possibility I can think of is an occulation of Venus by the moon. Would Jack have available the kind of telescope that would permit him to observe such an event in mid-day?

Or maybe POB was just stretching things a bit to make an entirely different type of observation, "'The most satisfactory observation I have ever made', said Jack. He clapped the eyepiece to and cast an affectionate look at Venus, sailing away up there, distinct in the perfect blue once one knew where to look."

Also in the astronomical vein, POB uses some nice symmetry at the beginning and end of the voyage. In chapter V, "the sun beat down from its noon-day height upon Bombay...", moves westward to strike the Surprise in the Atlantic in a blaze of light, and awaken Stephen from an erotic dream. And in the final chapter, on a mountain side on Madeira, "the circling sun, having lit up Calcutta and then Bombay, came up on the other side of the world and blazed full on his upturned face..." arousing him from a less happy sleep.

Don Seltzer


From: Peter Mackay
Sent: Friday, December 21, 2001 10:35 AM
Subject: Re: GRP HMSS: Astronomical Observations

Observing Venus during the day is indeed possible. It is a very bright planet, due to the sunlight reflecting off its clouds. So long as it is not very close to the sun, you may see it during the day. The easiest time is when it is close to the moon, so you may check its position early in the morning when both Venus and the moon are visible and the sun is not, and then later when the sun is risen and all other stars and planets are drowned out in the glare, just use the moon as a reference to pick it up again.

It is a tiny faint spark in the daylight sky, quite hard to spot on its own, but eminently visible. I recommend using the edge of a wall or roof to block out the sun while you search the ecliptic.


From: Don Seltzer
Sent: Friday, December 21, 2001 11:37 AM
Subject: Re: GRP HMSS: Astronomical Observations

Thanks, Peter. I'm suddenly enthused about the thought of seeking out Venus in the middle of the day.

Don Seltzer


From: Bob Saldeen
Sent: Friday, December 21, 2001 11:54 AM
Subject: Re: GRP HMSS: Astronomical Observations

I mentioned some software called "Starry Night" a week or so ago...you can download it free, and it works for 15 days I think. It'll show you where everything in the heavens is, based on your location, time, etc. Pretty simple to use, and addicting. You might give it a shot.

www.starrynight.com

bs


From: Jill H Bennett
Sent: Friday, December 21, 2001 11:48 AM
Subject: Re: GRP HMSS: Astronomical Observations

I have seen Venus in the full light of day without telescope or binoculars ... once I knew where to look. But I'm not sure what your are asking since I know nothing about sighting and sextants and such. After I found Venus, it was impossible not to see her!

Jill, mostly lurking


From: Karen von Bargen
Sent: Friday, December 21, 2001 12:17 PM
Subject: Re: GRP HMSS: Astronomical Observations

Hi, All!

I learned very little in my astrophotography class but one thing I did learn that amazed me is that you can, truly, see Venus with the naked eye during the daytime. Conditions permitting, of course. The teacher backed this up by dragging us outside and proving it. You just have to know where to look and believe me, we spent plenty of time murmuring our discontent and disbelief until one by one we all finally found Venus. And (ahem) I have the pictures to prove it. It could be that perhaps we were looking for Venus closer to the end of the day, about 2 or so hours before sunset that helped, we had mountains as a point to refer off of, but honest, we saw it.

Amazing. I haven't got a clue as how celestial navigation actually works so I can't venture an sort of opinion on how Jack was doing what Jack was doing. If he had the appropriate almanac or notes, it is very likely he would be able to figure out where he was. As I said, you just have to know where to look.

Karen von Bargen
San Martin


From: Peter Mackay
Sent: Friday, December 21, 2001 12:29 PM
Subject: Venus Sky Trap WAS: GRP HMSS: Astronomical Observations

www.starrynight.com

Thanks, Bob, but what we need to see Venus when the Sun is up is "Starry Day". www.starryday.com doesn't help that much and, frankly I'm surprised that the name was registered.


From: Martin
Sent: Friday, December 21, 2001 1:56 PM
Subject: Re: GRP HMSS: Astronomical Observations

On 21 Dec 2001 at 11:59, Don Seltzer wrote:

What kind of observation was Jack making? A transit of Venus across the sun was sometimes used, but this is inconsistent with Venus being near a pale moon. The only other possibility I can think of is an occulation of Venus by the moon.

I wonder if we could trace this? It might even be possible to date the observation!

I searched for occultations of Venus in 1805/1806 and though I didn't find anything specific there was a page of the publications of Charles Messier at http://www.seds.org/messier/xtra/history/m- pub.html

In particular I noted:

Observations et dessin de la grande et belle nébuleuse de la ceinture d'Androméde, la première qui fut découverte, et de deux petites nébuleuses, l'une au-dessus de la grande et le seconde au- dessous, vues dans une lunette qui renverse, comme le dessin.
Rec. Inst., Vol. VIII, 1807.

Grande comète qui a paru à la naissance de Napoléon le Grand, découverte le 8 aôut 1769 et observée pendant quatre mois.
Published by Delance, Paris, 1808.

For the benefit of lissuns with the same grasp of French as me (or Jack Aubrey) the following translations might be of use:

Observations and drawing of the great and beautiful nebula in the girdle of Andromeda, the first which was discovered, and the two small nebulae, the one above the great and the second below it, viewed with a reversing telescope, with the drawing.

You don't get any Messier than Messier 31!

Great comet which has appeared at the birth of Napoleon the Great, discovered on August 8, 1769 and observed during four months.

How to suck up to authority...

Martin @ home:
50° 44' 58" N
1° 58' 35" W


From: Paul B.
Sent: Friday, December 21, 2001 3:38 PM
Subject: Re: Group Read: Duty, was HMSS Tortoises & Tigers & Dil

In a message Sent: Tuesday, December 18, 2001 Don Seltzer wrote:

Steve Ross wrote of Stephen's struggle with honor and morality, and Susan Wenger in reply wrote of "the conflict between duty and honor and morality."

Perhaps this is a key difference in Jack and Stephen. Jack has a firm sense of where his duty lies, and that is how he sets his moral compass.

One can also view the contrast between both characters as representating the Age of Enlightenment (Jack) and the Age of Romanticism (Stephen). Jack is backward looking, jolly, Hadynesque, conventional in most matters save the execution of military strategy. Stephen is a tortured individual, with internal conflicts that remind one of the early Beethoven, and like many Romantics, much taken with Nature and the attractions of laudanum.

Paul, currenlty much conflicted with the imminent arrival of the euro. No longer able to spend a penny, must I become an Euronator ?


From: Vanessa Brown
Sent: Friday, December 21, 2001 8:54 PM
Subject: Re: Group Read: Duty, was HMSS Tortoises & Tigers & Dil

We were discussing:

the conflict between duty and honor and morality."

I cannot now call to mind the book in which Jack and Stephen have this very discussion. Is it in M&C, perhaps?

Jack says words to the effect that you can only serve one King, you're a scrub to love more than one woman. Stephen counters that conflicting loyalties to God, Country, Morality etc will always arise.


From: Martin
Sent: Saturday, December 22, 2001 8:05 AM
Subject: Re: GRP HMSS: Astronomical Observations

On 21 Dec 2001 at 21:56, Martin wrote:

I wonder if we could trace this? It might even be possible to date the observation!

I posted a query on the "Does anybody know?" board at the UK Motley Fool. Somebody replied that there did not seem to be any actual occultations of Venus in 1805/6 but there was an event on 28th January 1805. I quote:

"Found another possibility if it doesn't have to be a technical occultation. On 28th January 1805 Venus and the Moon are within 2.4 degrees of each other before dawn at approx 5:40am and visible from the indian ocean (I picked a spot at 69E 1N but it would be visible for a wide area).

This would be a very splendid sight even if not an occultation."

See: http://boards.fool.co.uk/Message.asp?mid=6904596

I have a feeling this might be a bit early for the chronology. I tried to find Don's timeline from Gibbon's reference page but it didn't seem to be accessible - has it moved?

Martin @ home:
50° 44' 58" N
1° 58' 35" W


From: Don Seltzer
Sent: Saturday, December 22, 2001 5:03 PM
Subject: Re: GRP HMSS: Astronomical Observations

www.starrynight.com

I have a similar program called Red Shift. It seems that Venus can be found near the sun these days, following the same path but leading by an hour - about a handspan to the right, I believe ( to the left for our friends Down Under). I'll try Peter's technique tomorrow.

Peter Mackay wrote:

It is a tiny faint spark in the daylight sky, quite hard to spot on its own, but eminently visible. I recommend using the edge of a wall or roof to block out the sun while you search the ecliptic.

I now think that Jack was carrying out the standard Lunar Distance method, measuring the separation of Venus and the moon, and comparing the result to published tables. His determination of an error of 27 miles means that his chronometers had been out by about 108 seconds.

Don Seltzer


From: Linnea
Date: Tue, 8 Jan 2002 10:46:47 -0500
Subject: Group Read: TMC? HMSS?

Oh dear, I am entering a senior life, not just senior moments. I used to be able to turn right to a page and paragraph I needed.
Somewhere in The Mauritius Command or HMS Surprise, Jack Aubrey's father is being described as a "camp and country gentleman," or something like that.
I was surprised to see "camp" used this way; I thought it was a modern word.

The Cambridge International Dictionary of English has it:

camp (STYLE)
adjective
INFORMAL
(of a man) behaving and dressing in a way that is similar to a woman and often intended to be noticed by others or, (of people or styles in general) intentionally artificial, usually in a way that is amusing
What's the name of that amazingly camp actor with the high voice and a funny walk?
Their shows are always incredibly camp and flamboyant.

camp
noun [U]
INFORMAL
The latest production of the opera is very high camp - all the men are dressed up as women.
Patrick was a master of innuendo and high-camp comedy.

camp
verb [I]
INFORMAL
If an actor camps it up, he or she gives an artificial and often amusing performance in which emotions are expressed too strongly and the movements of the hands and body are more noticeable than they would usually be.

Most of the other searches yielded similar results, but I don't subscribe to the OED. Who is our OED expert? When did this word enter the language as an adjective?

It is the perfect word for General Aubrey, of course.

~~ Linnea


From: Charlezzzz@AOL.COM
Date: Tue, 8 Jan 2002 10:49:59 EST
Subject: Camp: was, Goup Read: TMC? HMSS?

Linnea refers to Gen 'l Aubrey as being somewhere referred to as a "camp and country" gentleman. The usage of the time wd refer to a military life as a life of "camp."

The present use of "camp," wch may have been popularized in an essay by Susan Sontag some time in the 1960's, perhaps, casts a strange light on certain military folk of my acquaintance. And what's that funny British novel where a recruit tells his seargant that it's not a good day for him: "I'm feeling a bit fragile this morning," he says. Camp-camp, as it were.

Charlezzzz


From: Edmund Burton
Date: Tue, 8 Jan 2002 13:47:41 -0600
Subject: Re: Group Read: TMC? HMSS?

My 1971 microprint edition of the OED does not give camp as an adjective at all, and it does not give any meaning associated with homosexuality, cross-dressing, femininity, etc.

I take it to mean that General Aubrey spends his time at Army encampments or down in the country hunting.

EB


From: Bob Kegel
Date: Tue, 8 Jan 2002 15:50:14 -0800
Subject: Re: Group Read: TMC? HMSS?

Somewhere in The Mauritius Command or HMS Surprise, Jack Aubrey's father is being described as a "camp and country gentleman," or something like that.

HMSS, chapter 7: "General Aubrey was not a disreputable man; he was kind and well-bred in his camp and country way ..."

Bob Kegel


From: Gerry Strey
Date: Tue, 8 Jan 2002 10:08:18 -0600
Subject: Re: Group Read: TMC? HMSS?

I've always taken this as a reference to a military camp, where perhaps the living was a bit rough and roisterous, which, combined with country, suggests the general was not particularly polished in his manners. There's a passage in (I think) HMSS in which the general and his new wife visit Sophy, and the general embarasses her with heavy-handed complements. One thinks of Squire Western in "Tom Jones."

Gerry Strey
Madison, Wisconsin
46°59'18.661"N 123°49'29.827"W


From: Jebvbva@AOL.COM
Date: Tue, 8 Jan 2002 20:17:38 EST
Subject: Re: Group Read: TMC? HMSS?

ekburton@SWBELL.NET writes:

My 1971 microprint edition of the OED does not give camp as an adjective at all, and it does not give any meaning associated with homosexuality, cross-dressing, femininity, etc.

Do you mean the OED is fallible? Even in the 70's, 'camp' was an adjective for outrageous !

Blatherin' John B


From: Kyle Lerfald
Date: Tue, 8 Jan 2002 19:52:56 -0800
Subject: Re: Group Read: TMC? HMSS?

Oh Blatherin', how could you say such a thing? Entertain such a thought? OED fallible? Never! It is the finest of religious tomes, and useful not only as a reference work, but as free weights, building material, emergency furniture, and bug-destroyer.

Kyle-who lusts after the OED in all t's forms...


From: Edmund Burton
Date: Tue, 8 Jan 2002 20:02:29 -0600
Subject: Re: Group Read: TMC? HMSS?

Do you mean the OED is fallible? Even in the 70's, 'camp' was an adjective for outrageous !

Looking at the introduction, the microprint edition is a reprint of the 1928 edition.

Recent terms, such as "automobile" and "wireless," appear in the supplement.

EB


From: Margarita Baez
Sent: Wednesday, July 31, 2002 7:25 AM
Subject: HMSSŠ with much more than a minute lost!.

Being on my second reading of the Canon, though a bit behind the GroupRD, it came to me that Jack¹s refusal to take Diana aboard the Surprise on its way back to England was a very determinant fact in Stephen and Diana¹s break. What if she would have stayed with Stephen, nursing him on board?. She wouldn¹t have had the opportunity to run away with Johnson, and by the time she talks to Jack, she is very moved and willing to stay by Stephen.

Obviously, Jack didn¹t want her on board, considering she was such a striking woman, but mainly, I think he refused her out of jealousy or as she said, cowardice to face his own feelings for her. Also, could it be that Jack unconsciously resented Stephen¹s ³wholly dishonourable thing² , as was discussed in HMSS¹s Group RD?. Some kind of retribution?.

Of course, it might be interpreted as Jack¹s looking for his friend¹s behalf, as Diana would give him nothing but unhappiness, but he resents their relation so. He even lies to Stephen when he asks him if Diana had attempted to get a lift on the Surprise. What would have been Stephen¹s reaction if he had learned the truth?. It is such a turning point in Stephen¹s life and their friendship!.

This character treatment by POB is one of the things I love best of the Canon. As it is in real life, there is hardly a single motif in one¹s actions ,nor always just a rational one. Most of the time we are driven by unconscious forces we hardly know to exist, more over, confess.

My apologies for my syntaxes or any confusion of ideas that such a learned group of lissuns might find. I am still shy to share my ideas or feelings about my reading or to accomplish any witty observation in a language which is not my own, but also, it is nice to know there are so many people who understand my passion for the Canon, or, should I say ³addiction²?.

--
Margarita de Baez
10° 30' 13"N 66° 47' 9" W


From: Susan Wenger
Sent: Wednesday, July 31, 2002 7:37 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS?with much more than a minute lost!.

I love O'Brian's use of multiple causality! Thanks for this message - I enjoyed it. (I got some strange characters in place of apostrophes).

- Susan


From: Margarita Baez
Sent: Wednesday, July 31, 2002 7:51 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS?with much more than a minute lost!.

Sorry about the strange characters. It's because I use a Spanish keyboard and a MacIntosh!. I'l try to remember to change it when I write to the Gunsoom.

M.


From: Batrinque@AOL.COM
Sent: Wednesday, July 31, 2002 8:26 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS?with much more than a minute lost!.

Susan Wenger wrote:

(I got some strange characters in place of apostrophes)

Around here, you ALWAYS get some strange characters ...

Bruce Trinque
41°37'52"N 72°22'29"W


From: Pete the Surgeons Mate
Sent: Wednesday, July 31, 2002 2:01 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS?with much more than a minute lost!.

Sorry about the strange characters. It's because I use a Spanish keyboard and a MacIntosh!. I'l try to remember to > change it when I write to the Gunsoom. M.

No, never in life! The canon is full, chock full of strange characters, and your observations are most useful indeed. Just how much thought did PO'B put into that decision, and how different would the succeeding books have been if Diana had been allowed aboard?


From: Nathan Varnum
Sent: Wednesday, July 31, 2002 4:46 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS? with much more than a minute lost!.

POSSIBLE SPOILER(S)

That has always been one of the interesting "what if's" in the Canon. Stephen doesn't have his fortune, yet, right? Without that, in that stage of Diana's life, I think the feelings were doomed to be temporal. Later, of course, Diane deals nicely, pragmatically with poverty in their married life, but at that time I don't think she's ready for a poor Stephen.

Also, my recollection of this passage was that Jack refused to take her because he sincerely believed her to be wrong for Stephen. Of course, he may have convinced himself that that was the reason; but I'm curious what leads you to believe it was jealousy? I don't recall anything that would lead me to that conclusion.

Nathan


From: Charles Munoz
Sent: Wednesday, July 31, 2002 5:23 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS? with much more than a minute lost!.

It seems to me, as I read between the sheets, that in the early days Jack and Diana had been two-backed-beasting it more than once. More than twice, too. And Maturin is aware of it, but is too well brought up to speak of the matter -- that perfume! The most unlucky gift he cd have given her.

Charlezzzzz


From: Rosemary Davis
Sent: Wednesday, July 31, 2002 8:29 PM
Subject: HMSS: Jack's refusal of Diana

I think you have done a wonderful job of expressing your observations, Margarita. And you are absolutely right; Jack's one action of denying passage to Diana had far-reaching consequences. While it might seem to some that Diana wanted a rich man who could "keep her," it has previously been discussed at length that one reason she didn't accept Stephen's love, at first, was that he was probably the only man in her life who had merely loved her for who she was, without expecting anything back. If she had been allowed to travel along and nurse him, who knows? But Jack's double standard, and probably also his jealousy of her relations with Stephen, prevailed; thus leading to more suspense and intrigue.

Thank you for sharing this with us. I hope you'll continue sharing your observations; you have better English than some of the so-called "native" speakers! -RD

If they suspect me of intelligence, I am sure it will soon blow over (TFOW, p.184)


From: Nathan Varnum
Sent: Thursday, August 01, 2002 4:38 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS? with much more than a minute lost!.

Ah yes, the perfume, I remember the unlucky perfume. There was certainly jealousy between the two in PC, whilst they were jockeying for position.

Howsomever, I always felt that there was a definite cessation of Jack's regard for Diana when he a)saw her consorting with Canning and b)received affirmation that he'd won Sophie's heart. Jack seems to me to be the type to turn his love/lust into dislike and to not continue to harbor jealousy about Diana.

On the other hand, I'm not the most alert of readers and hence I repeat: is there something I missed in HMSS that indicates jealousy as a reason for his refusal to take Diana? Or is it a difference in others' analysis of Jack's character?

Nathan


From: Charles Munoz
Sent: Thursday, August 01, 2002 7:00 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS? with much more than a minute lost!.

on 8/1/02 7:38 AM, Nathan Varnum discusses Jack's refusal to give passage to Diana, when she asks to be brought home from India, and can nurse the heart-struck Maturin.

Or is it a difference in others' analysis of Jack's character?

As I see Jack, the young Jack, the Jack who has not yet developed his feelings for Sophie, he is the kind of sailor -- I knew a great many -- who wd leap into whatever bed beckoned him: indeed, I hardly knew any other kind, and in Jack's day, when ships held the sea for years at a time, nautical gentlemen were brought up in an atmosphere of even greater pressure pushing them toward whatever delights they cd find ashore.

Jack is a fine, upstanding example of the Roman saying: "Penis erectus non conscientiam habet."

And Diana? A gentlemanly person, someone calls her. Consider: brought up in a military household, widow of a military man, no missish milky creature, but a tiger, a mantis, a seasnake -- what else does POB compare her to? Does not the hypersubtle Maturin, in the garden, acknowledge that she is a hunter, and quotes "Your chase has a beast in view."

It's a line from Dryden:

All, all of a piece throughout
Thy chase had a beast in view
Thy wars brought nothing about
Thy lovers were all untrue

Consider Jack's lowest point in all the books: when he goes all uninvited to Diana's house at night, and hears laughter... and climbs a dangling line to the place where he can look into her room. Today we'd call that "stalking." It is hardly her laughter that sends him off, horribly frustrated, into the night. And it hardly her laughter that calls him back to "visit" her time after time when he shd be taking his ship to sea.

Now think of the sexual drive behind those visits, visits that put his career in jeopardy -- his career, the most important thing in his life -- and imagine the pressures on Jack when Maturin, in friendship, tries to warn him of what he already fully knows. Great pressures, and he turns on Maturin with his "bastard" and "liar" speech as a result.

[I've writing this to establish that both Jack and Stephen, early on, were Diana's "lovers." Enjoyed her favors, as a certain kind of novelist might say.]

And, to get back to the question as to why Jack refuses her passage back to England, is not this history enough? She nearly destroyed his career, nearly destroyed his friendship, put him -- consequently -- in a great danger of losing what he valued most.

And, if he took her aboard, might she not have done it again... even to the point of destroying his marriage? Are we not told, in a later book, that Diana is far, far better at sex games than the frigid Sophie is?

Our two heroes are, after all, in the hands of a god who is fully able to kill his characters. And Maturin, who has pushed his sharp instruments through his own peritoneum, is more likely to die than not. Suppose we look into the dimmer recesses of Jack's mind, where some dream-critter is saying, "Stephen may die. I'll be alone for a vast great amount of time with Diana. Whee! Stephen may, luckily, die. Diana! And I have the only private bed on the ship. If Stephen dies. If only... Diana, all to myself for months and months."

No wonder he turns her down in her request for passage to England. And later lies about it to Stephen. As Conrad writes: "There is the odor of mortality about a lie." And about Diana.

Charlezzzzz


From: Nathan Varnum
Sent: Thursday, August 01, 2002 8:25 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS? with much more than a minute lost!.

Earlier in this thread I said "my recollection of this passage was that Jack refused to take her because he sincerely believed her to be wrong for Stephen. Of course, he may have convinced himself that that was the reason..."

I believe, Charlezzzz, you may have hit upon it. He was protecting Stephen *and* himself, perhaps even himself moreso. I still don't see that jealousy of Stephen/Diana plays a part, but can see that he was afraid of being with Diana day after day.

Nathan


From: Marian Van Til
Sent: Thursday, August 01, 2002 12:48 PM
Subject: Jack, Diana and Stephen (was: Re: [POB] HMSS? with much more than a minute lost!)

I think you're absolutely right, Nathan. I'm convinced that Jack had no lingering feelings for Diana -- though I think the cessation of those feelings were first of all because of her subsequent actions, not because of Sophie's entrance into the equation.

Jack's refusal to take Diana aboard at that point was due to his feeling that she was just a very bad bet for Stephen (as she already had been, and, for that matter, as she had been for him -- Jack -- too). I think he believed he was doing the best thing for Stephen because Stephen was just too far gone where Diana was concerned (to Jack's mind) to do the best thing for himself.

I understand the impulse, actually; I probably would have done the same thing.

Marian


From: Ted
Sent: Thursday, August 01, 2002 3:46 PM
Subject: Re: HMSS? with much more than a minute lost!.

I have to say that my reading(s) of this was that A) Jack now had an active dislike for Diana & B) His concern was for his friend Stephen, who he thought Diana was bad for. (& can one say he was wrong, at that stage)?

Ted


From: sue reynolds
Sent: Thursday, August 01, 2002 7:27 PM
Subject: Re: Stephen and Diana and Jack

I don't necessarily agree that Stephen has had sex with Diana at the time of Post Captain; Jack, yes, at least long enough for Diana to be certain that he was at that time fairly incompetent at pleasing women. I think Stephen visited her frequently, courting her by being there, but not necessarily being awarded her favors. I think that when Jack climbed the tree and watched her, she was entertaining Canning, not Stephen.

Sue Reynolds, whose mailbox so overflew that I ended up deleting most of June and July.


From: homermeyn
Sent: Friday, August 02, 2002 1:07 AM
Subject: Re: HMSS? with much more than a minute lost!.

Charlezzz wrote....

Our two heroes are, after all, in the hands of a god who is fully able to kill his characters. And Maturin, who has pushed his sharp instruments through his own peritoneum, is more likely to die than not. Suppose we look into the dimmer recesses of Jack's mind, where some dream-critter is saying, "Stephen may die. I'll be alone for a vast great amount of time with Diana. Whee! Stephen may, luckily, die. Diana! And I have the only private bed on the ship. If Stephen dies. If only... Diana, all to myself for months and months."

I'm not so sure. I like to credit Jack with nobler motives. Diana had nearly destroyed Jack's career, pushed his friendship with Stephen to breaking point, almost destroyed Jack's chances with Sophie, caused Jack to act less than honourably in many ways. At this point in the story, Stephen is perhaps mortally wounded, again because of Diana. As violently as he has lusted for her, he now hates and fears her. Jack tried desperately to prevent their meeting in Bombay. He failed, and now Stephen lays dying. I think that Jack's motive was simply to get Stephen away from Diana before she destroyed him utterly. Jack now knows that Stephen, his strong, self sufficient, self contained friend is helplessly in love with her, Stephen has both literally and figuratively opened his heart to Jack and all Jack can do is to get him away from her.

Peace

John


From: Isabelle Hayes
Sent: Friday, August 02, 2002 6:21 AM
Subject: Re: Stephen and Diana and Jack

It is certainly open to interpretation, whether Diana was having sex with Stephen at that time; she was very cruel one night, telling him that just because he has "kissed" her, he mustn't imagine he has any claim on her.

I can certainly believe that Diana might use "kiss" as a euphemism for The Act, not giving it all that much importance.

Isabelle Hayes


From: Katherine T
Sent: Friday, August 02, 2002 2:29 PM
Subject: All, all of a piece

Selected quotes from The Secular Masque by Dryden (written at the turn of the century, 1699-1700) Characters: Janus, Chronos, Momus (god of mirth), Diana, Mars, Venus

CHRONOS
Weary, weary of my weight,
Let me, let me drop my freight,
And leave the world behind.
I could not bear
Another year
The load of human-kind.
* * *
MOMUS
The world was a fool, e'er since it begun,
And since neither Janus, nor Chronos, nor I,
Can hinder the crimes,
Or mend the bad times,
'Tis better to laugh than to cry.
Enter DIANA
With horns and with hounds I waken the day,
And hie to my woodland walks away;
I tuck up my robe, and am buskin'd soon,
And tie to my forehead a waxing moon.
I course the fleet stag, unkennel the fox,
And chase the wild goats o'er summits of rocks.
With shouting and hooting we pierce through the sky;
And Echo turns hunter, and doubles the cry.
***

CHORUS OF ALL Then our age was in its prime,
Free from rage, and free from crime,
A very merry, dancing, drinking,
Laughing, quaffing, and unthinking time.
* * *
Enter MARS
Inspire the vocal brass, inspire;
The world is past its infant age:
Arms and honour,
Arms and honour,
Set the martial mind on fire,
* * *
MOMUS
Thy sword within the scabbard keep,
And let mankind agree,
Better the world were fast asleep,
Than kept awake by thee.
* * *
Enter VENUS
Calms appear, when storms are past;
Love will have his hour at last:
Nature is my kindly care;
Mars destroys, and I repair;
Take me, take me, while you may,
Venus comes not ev'ry day.
***
CHRONOS
The world was then so light,
I scarcely felt the weight;
Joy rul'd the day, and love the night.
But since the Queen of Pleasure left the ground,
I faint, I lag,
And feebly drag
The pond'rous Orb around.
All, all of a piece throughout;
MOMUS
(pointing to Diana)
Thy chase had a beast in view
(to Mars)
Thy wars brought nothing about;
(to Venus)
Thy lovers were all untrue.
JANUS
'Tis well an old age is out,
And time to begin a new.
* * *
Dance of huntsmen, nymphs, warriors, and lovers.

I'm sure this subject has been thoroughly dissected already, but the poem is such a frequently recurring motif, with lines from the chorus appearing in some if not all of the books, that I've been wondering what it all means.

"All, all of a piece" is often quoted by Stephen, as a kind of lament. He uses it once to deplore the condition of the sick bay in one of Jack's ships, but I can't remember which one.

"Thy chase had a beast in view" is an obvious reference to POB's Diana, who first appears in hot pursuit of a fox. It could also apply to any number of chases after prizes, or the Waakzamheidt after the Leopard. The context of the poem seems to point out the futility of all the endeavors of Diana, Mars and Venus. But in a fox hunt, what's wrong with having a beast in view?

Are Mars and Venus personified in the canon?

Do any of the lines other than the chorus appear in any of the books?

I think I'm just too literal-minded to appreciate poetry. But there's food for thought here. What did this poem mean to POB? Was it just like a little song that goes around in your head all the time and you hum a bit of it occasionally? Or was it a THEME?

Just wondering.

Katherine


From: HrgSmes@AOL.COM
Sent: Friday, August 02, 2002 3:59 PM
Subject: Re: All, all of a piece

Mars and Venus are multiply personified within the canon. POB well knew his Dryden, depend upon it. HR Greenberg MD.

Vulcan, too. Steven has that role from time to time, wounded heart. hrg md

endit


From: Mary S
Sent: Friday, August 02, 2002 7:54 PM
Subject: Re: All, all of a piece

And, though not virginal, POB's huntress Diana can treat a guy the way the virgin huntress Diana, goddess of the Moon, treated the unhappy Actaeon.

pragmatical and absolute, [FoW8]

Mary S
35° 58' 11" N
86° 48' 57" W


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